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Bree~chan
January 9th, 2005, 12:11 PM
*Looks around nervously*Heheh,this is my first time posting some art here that I have done,but here it is.^^;
http://img137.exs.cx/img137/116/CharizardSmall.jpg
Yes,I know that I might of put to much exaggeration on the details,but I was doing a simple sketch and it turned out good.
So I posted it here.xD;*Is proud how it came out*
Reviews/comments/and anything except flames would be nice.^_^

Suz
January 9th, 2005, 12:13 PM
it's exalent!!!
*stares in awe*
umm...
*stells*
mwahahaha!
jk, it's really, really good!

Shikon no Tama
January 9th, 2005, 12:16 PM
It's really nice! You totally captured the essence of Charizard! I really like the way you drew it. It looks alot better than my attempts at a Charizard, that's for sure. XD

Stevo-kun
January 9th, 2005, 12:18 PM
Hello and welcome to PView lol

Ok what I think is it is really good, I like how the wings look and the little details that have given it the fell of abit more realism. I really like the view and I would like to see you draw him in different positions. So over all I give it a 10 because I reallly like it.

I look forward to seeing more XD.

And that concludes the first ever PView lol *is a little hyper*

Pokemon_Veteran

Bree~chan
January 9th, 2005, 12:34 PM
Suz:Hey!No stealing!j/k XD Thankies anyways,*Cough art stealer cough*XD
Moonlight Dreams:Heheh,thank you too^^Yay!I captured the essence of Charizard!XD
P_V:XD!The PView.That's funny.XD
Anyway,thanks you P_V for your comments.^^I might draw some more of Charizard in differents positions like you said.
Yay!*Got a 10*XD

Pokedragonfire
January 9th, 2005, 12:44 PM
Looks great! I'd have to say though, it looks great like a charizard, just not like a realistic charizard. His wings have no muscles, and his claws and legs (especially the back ones) could use some anatomy. Try looking at a lizard's, or bat's (for wings) anatomy to really improve. His face looks scrunched as well. The fire on his tail tip would be facing up or if he was moving, then it would face the opposite way he was going. The faster he moves the larger the angle. Like if he was flying really fast to the right, the fire would look like it would be pointing directly left.
Also, if he's going to get off the ground he needs to be light (for his size), but sturdy, and have some powerful muscles to get him up into the air in the first place.

Okay, you can yell at me for being pesimistic and finding all the flaws in your drawing ;)

Bree~chan
January 9th, 2005, 01:04 PM
^Wow,I never noticed all that.You are good and I won't yell at you.XD
Well,it was just a simple sketch.I wasn't trying to make it perfect.^^;I was using a really sucky eraser pen.That's why it dosen't look that good.=/
His face was the hardest to draw out of everything else,that's why its scrunched up.-_-;;;
There is nothing I can do to fix any mistakes.It's done and I an not going to start over.It looks good enough to me to anyways.=/

Housyasei-san
January 9th, 2005, 05:19 PM
It's really nice, but could use some work as Pokedragonfire said. Also, there are unnesscessary vertbra/bones sticking out it's back. Ouchies.

8/10

Burne Starcofski
January 9th, 2005, 09:04 PM
I agree on the bones thing. But what could make it really stand out is:
A background of some fashion, Inking it on plain white, coloring it, and Anime Touch-ups.

Forest Grovyle
January 10th, 2005, 04:43 AM
I really like this pic! ^_^ The wings are particularly well drawn. :) I like the way you've tried to create the impression of bones, especially in the tail. It would be great to see it coloured! :)

Lucy Lu
January 10th, 2005, 05:31 PM
Wow!! That is a great sketch Breeze! I love the way you drew Charzard, it looks life like. ^^ I am looking foward to more of your art. *gives you a Charzard plushie*

Bree~chan
January 11th, 2005, 07:46 PM
Thanks for the compliments everyone^^
Yes,I noticed there was alot of bones sticking out,but just imagine that the Charizard been nearly starving to death and he is hunting.XD
And I can't and not going to re-draw it,cause I drew it a long time ago and for some reason I lost my touch since then.XP
I am not good with drawing backgrounds and I think it looks best as a white sketch.=P
But,I might color it on the computer and post it here if it comes out good^^

Effy
January 11th, 2005, 08:19 PM
Looks great! I'd have to say though, it looks great like a charizard, just not like a realistic charizard. His wings have no muscles, and his claws and legs (especially the back ones) could use some anatomy. Try looking at a lizard's, or bat's (for wings) anatomy to really improve. His face looks scrunched as well. The fire on his tail tip would be facing up or if he was moving, then it would face the opposite way he was going. The faster he moves the larger the angle. Like if he was flying really fast to the right, the fire would look like it would be pointing directly left.
Also, if he's going to get off the ground he needs to be light (for his size), but sturdy, and have some powerful muscles to get him up into the air in the first place.

Okay, you can yell at me for being pesimistic and finding all the flaws in your drawing ;)
Okay I'm not mad or anything, but you didn't have to criticize her THAT much. She wasn't TRYING to make it look all realistic. Oh, gee! She may not be a really prissy artist, who has to make EVERYTHING perfect! But Bree is very self concious about her drawing skills already, she doesn't need to be even MORE self concious because of a few mistakes that just HAVE to be pointed out by some people. When she showed me this drawing she told me she was SO proud of it! Now she said that she doesn't think so anymore. So I 'd like you to think about what you're going to say to someone, BEFORE you say it, and think about how it would affect them!
*wheeze* As for the pic! *flashes thumbs up*It's awesome sis!^^ On a scale from one to ten, I give it eleven!XD I think it's perfect in every way! And if you wanna give him a bony spine, then you sure as heck do it!^_______________________^

O
January 12th, 2005, 04:18 AM
*stares at claws and teeth* Looks good. And it looks more mature for a Pokmon. The bones sticking out and that. I think the heads a bit small or the body is too big. The Head doesn't look right. But great detail for some simple sketch that you don't pay a lot of attention to. Good job. 8.5/10 :D

rm2kdude
January 12th, 2005, 02:28 PM
eh he well not bad,when I read the title I was thinking **** loads of coloring layers oh well 8/10.

DarkPhoenix
January 13th, 2005, 11:49 PM
Nice, but if you want to get into exact detail, I'd have to agree with pdf. Though, I like how you drew it :P.... my only problem is the angle... it looks too flat.... but that might be just me... keep up the great work :P 8/10