my fire red pokemon team{rate it please}

[Tsugaru]

charizard{lev 71}
overheat
flamethrower
fire blast
fly

richu{lev 72}
thunder
shockwave
thundershock
thunderbolt

poliwrath{lev 72}
blizzard
psychic
surf
hypnosis

venasuar{lev71}
frenzy plant
solarbeam
sunny day
sleepowder

dewgon
sheercold
icebeam
blizzard
dive

tyrantiar
thunder
earthquake
blizzard
brick break

thats my team please rate it ;)

[Firebird]

rating:5/10
let me fix your team!

charizard{lev 71}
overheat ok.
flamethrower Swords Dance/Dragon Dance
fire blast earthquake
fly aerial ace/wing attack

Fly is no good.. gives chance for them to change pkmn.

richu{lev 72}
thunder attract
shockwave Sweet Kiss
thundershock Thunder wave
thunderbolt ok.

if u want a annoyer...

poliwrath{lev 72}
blizzard Brick Break
psychic Focus Punch
surf Substitute
hypnosis hidden Power Rock/Ghost

much better as a subpuncher

venasuar{lev71}
frenzy plant Sludge Bomb
solarbeam Leech Seed
sunny day Synthesis
sleepowder ok.

poison/sleep+leech seed+synthesis aint that better?

dewgon
sheercold /Encore/Perish Song
icebeam ok.
blizzard surf
dive rest/horn drill

tyrantiar
thunder rock slide
earthquake ok.
blizzard Dragon Dance
brick break Taunt/Rest

aint it better?

[Kholdstaire]

charizard{lev 71}
overheat
flamethrower
fire blast
fly

richu{lev 72}
thunder
shockwave
thundershock
thunderbolt

poliwrath{lev 72}
blizzard
psychic
surf
hypnosis

venasuar{lev71}
frenzy plant
solarbeam
sunny day
sleepowder

dewgon
sheercold
icebeam
blizzard
dive

tyrantiar
thunder
earthquake
blizzard
brick break

thats my team please rate it ;)

I'm having difficulty seeing things after that. Someone, please pull the spoon out of my eye

Please, tell me he's kidding.

[Mullet]

charizard{lev 71}
overheat
flamethrower
fire blast
fly

richu{lev 72}
thunder
shockwave
thundershock
thunderbolt

poliwrath{lev 72}
blizzard
psychic
surf
hypnosis

venasuar{lev71}
frenzy plant
solarbeam
sunny day
sleepowder

dewgon
sheercold
icebeam
blizzard
dive

tyrantiar
thunder
earthquake
blizzard
brick break

thats my team please rate it ;)

I'm going to be as nice as I can about this, and just say it burns. Go read the Advanced Trainers Guide

Charazad@Liechi Berry
Nature:Lonely
EVs:252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6 Sp. attack
Swords Dance
Earthquake
Rock Slide
Overheat

Raichu@Lefties
Nature:+Speed, -def (?)
EVs:252 Sp. attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP
T-bolt
Brick Break
Sweet Kiss
Substitute

Not really sure I never really used Raichu before.

Venasuar@Lefties
NautreAdamant/Jolly
EVs:252 Attack, 129 HP, 129 Speed
Sleep Powder/Swords Dance
Leech Seed
Sludge Bomb
Earthquake

Tyranatar@Lefties/Liechi Berry
Nature:Adamant
EVs:252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP
Dragon Dance
Earthquake
Rock Slide
Taunt

All better now! :D