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Omega Latios
January 16th, 2005, 01:53 AM
People thought Team Rocket was completely disbanded and gone after a young boy from Johto defeated them many years ago... However, those people were wrong!

Deep in the debriss of what was left in Team Rocket's headquarters in the slots at Celadon City, were Giovanni and some hi-tech scientists working hard to create new creatures. New Pokmon.
However, these Pokmon were not quite Pokmon. They were PokBots, robot Pokmon!
After the first couple were built, Team Rocket found out a miscalculated error. All of these PokBots were faulty and had problems! These problems made them powerful, yet dangerous. Even to Team Rocket who created them!

Eventually, the PokBots knew right from wrong and tried to escpae from Team Rocket. At least until they were strong enough to defeat them!

You are one of these PokBots and it is up to you to stop them! Will you prevail?

NAME:
ROBOT PROBLEM:
APPEARANCE:
PERSONALITY: (Even Robots have to have personalities!)
Other: (Optional)

here mine

NAME:redblueclaw
ROBOT PROBLEM:when gots angry he releases huge energy blast from his claws and kills people
PERSONALITY:evil and goes angry easily
appereance:

Jesus Freak Josh
January 16th, 2005, 02:37 AM
I have two problems with this RPG.

1) It's in the wrong spot
2) It doesn't have much of a plot. Why are Team Rocket creating them? Why are they having trouble? Now that you are free, what will you do?
3) Your description needs more work.

I'd join if it were better...

*summons mod to move to PKMN RPG or close*

Omega Latios
January 16th, 2005, 02:43 AM
team rocket does them to conguer world and you are free now and you try escape from team rocket they want destroy you now please mods move this to pokemon roleplay

Jesus Freak Josh
January 16th, 2005, 02:55 AM
team rocket does them to conguer world and you are free now and you try escape from team rocket they want destroy you now please mods move this to pokemon roleplay
I'm going to be honest with you. People may join. But there is lack of description in the plot and sign up.
Wouldn't there be more characteristics people may be able to use to identify these creatures?
The plot could be worked on a bit more too. Maybe you could explain why TR want to conquer the world. Or why these robots have problems? Were TR stupid enough to build them with big faults like that? Or was it faulty wiering?

Omega Latios
January 16th, 2005, 02:58 AM
team rocket builded them to conguer the world but they dont knowed that they are too strong for control

Jesus Freak Josh
January 16th, 2005, 03:05 AM
How about this, I'll help you develop a plot and then I'll let you do the rest. Because your young and everything...

Omega Latios
January 16th, 2005, 03:09 AM
thats okay Batesy you can help

Jesus Freak Josh
January 16th, 2005, 03:21 AM
I sent you the PM with details.
What I suggest to do is have this thread deleted, and start a new one IN the correct section.

Mods please delete this unless SL states otherwise.

Omega Latios
January 16th, 2005, 03:27 AM
Batesy great thanks for plot its great now

parallelzero
January 16th, 2005, 08:18 AM
*yawns*
Why does everything happen while I'm asleep? XD
Anywho, I'll just go ahead and move this....

*moves*

Omega Latios
January 16th, 2005, 09:27 AM
now is there anyone to want join to this RP we need three people before we can start

Tanner
January 17th, 2005, 06:32 PM
Tanner
When angry shoots super hot beam from mouth.
I resemble a Zangoose but i`m a little furry.
I`m usually nice but when angred i`m a real terror.

Omega Latios
January 17th, 2005, 10:11 PM
Tanner you must post your Pokebot sprite before you are in

Tanner
January 18th, 2005, 05:23 PM
Ok i`ll try to find one.I hope I can find one.

Jesus Freak Josh
January 18th, 2005, 05:49 PM
Tanner you must post your Pokebot sprite before you are in
How about he describes how he looks instead?
Not everyone can get a Pokbot Sprite (To my knowledge).

Omega Latios
January 18th, 2005, 09:42 PM
okay you not must get pokebot sprite Tanner

Tanner
January 21st, 2005, 03:42 PM
Alright I look exactly like a Zangoose except of course im a robot. I actually resemble a shiny Zangoose.

Omega Latios
February 6th, 2005, 11:50 AM
OK we can start now
i was in some capsule i opened my eye and seened scientists in outside i breaked the capsule and blasted huge energy blast what killed all scientists then i broked another capsule and robot zangoose jumped out*what is your name?i asked with killing cold voice*

Tanner
February 6th, 2005, 05:42 PM
"My name`s Tanner," I said.
"What is your`s?," I said.

Omega Latios
February 7th, 2005, 04:46 AM
*my name is Redblueclaw*i sayed then i heared alert voice and sayed to Tanner*i think we should leave here before the scientists come*

Tanner
February 7th, 2005, 04:39 PM
"Me too," I said. Then one of the guards grabbed me.

Omega Latios
February 7th, 2005, 10:42 PM
i comed angry when guards grabbed my new friend i blasted huge blast of energy and killed guards to get my friend free

Kurosaki
February 8th, 2005, 01:25 PM
Okay, I'm going to close this. Read the rules for this forum, as well as finding RP tutors, both of you. You both need the help, bad, and I know this RP won't improve if I leave it open >>

*CLOSES*