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The S
January 30th, 2005, 07:49 PM
http://fanart-central.net/stories.php?sid=10648

Thus far, I have 7 chapters, or "Lessons" up. I hope you all enjoy.

Geometric-sama
January 31st, 2005, 03:51 AM
Just having read the first couple of chapters, I like this - the failed pop star thing reminds me a bit of my favourite movie. :P I'll read the rest in a bit.

Kelsey
January 31st, 2005, 03:41 PM
Well, I've read chapter one so far, and I have to say the whole idea about this fic is great.

This fic is showing the true American dream, to be a pop star. ^_~ I love how it begins: a smalltown boy entering his twenties with a dream to become the best. He works a minimum wage yet seems to never waver in his conscience that he'll once day reach his goals.

I think your plot is starting out good and you have a good form of vocabulary and spelling and such. ^_____^ Well, I'll report back once I get the chance the read other chapters. Until then, keep up the great work. ^^

~Kelsey

The S
January 31st, 2005, 07:18 PM
Thanks all ^_^ Lesson 8 is up now.