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February 1st, 2005, 05:08 PM
you don't have to love me with all your heart...
you don't have to love me at all..
just the illusion of love would satisfy me...
the way you talk to me opens my eyes...
i don't care anymore if you love someone else...
as long as you are here...
if none of this is real,
don't wake me from this dream...
i just want you to hold me...
don't let me go...
February 1st, 2005, 05:23 PM
That was beautiful. I had that same situation back in 8th grade so you can imagine how I must have reacted to this one. Nice.
February 1st, 2005, 05:29 PM
yeah i wrote it one time when someone i liked was kissing this other guy...i was kind of dumb back then XD
February 1st, 2005, 05:31 PM
I guess we're all dunb then LOL I had this huge crush on this guy who liked this other girl eh, guess I'm not meant to roam in that feild then XD
February 2nd, 2005, 06:23 PM
Yet another great poem, Matt. ^_______^ This poem ish very well written. It's showing how even though one's heart is broken, they can still go on and live life, even without a certain person's true love. If they are strong, they shall prevail even against all odds stating they should just give up and move on completely.
Well done yet again Mattie, keep up the great work. ^_~
February 2nd, 2005, 07:09 PM
i wrote that one in like 8th grade XD ah so long ago XD well, not really [falls on face] and i'm walking away now [leaves scene whistling]
February 4th, 2005, 09:26 AM
Oh yeah? XD I have written a lot of poems when I was very young. But, I seem to have misplaced them all. oO Well, congrats on a job well done Mattie. ^o^