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<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
February 1st, 2005, 05:10 PM
lying by the phone....waiting for you to call
remebering last night, but trying to forget it all
at the dance hall, the last song, we struck a pose
i was wearing jet black, you were wearing rose
dancing was fine, but it was all a front
while we step together, memories haunt

before we were lovers, our dance full of soul
now we're just dance partners, an unsealable hole
just yesterday it seemed, you were in my arms
i put your necklace on you, the one with the charms
hypnotized by the music and your affectionate stare
when i look in your eyes now, i feel nothing is there...
so i'm lying here, waiting for you to call
come back to me, let's relive it all...

[Technya]
February 1st, 2005, 05:18 PM
Oh that one is so sweet. I loved it good work.

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
February 1st, 2005, 05:20 PM
XD thanx, i got the idea after being forced to watch my moms spanish soap operas and seeing this couple latin dance.

[Technya]
February 1st, 2005, 05:21 PM
Yeah soaps are really full of inspiration. I don't watch them but I get inspiration from my music and mainly from my practices.

Kelsey
February 2nd, 2005, 06:25 PM
Hmmmmmmmmmmm...I believe I read this one before. XD

I adore this poem, it's so incredibly kawaii. ^o^ It makes me think of a fashionable couple, who are drawn to one another. They lie by the phone, just waiting for that one special call to hear the other's voice once more. They long for each other so, and yet cannot seem to get close enough.

Another great poem Matt, wootness! XD

~Kelsey

Dignity
February 2nd, 2005, 06:36 PM
matt, i really like that one ^__^ good job! ~origin

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
February 2nd, 2005, 07:07 PM
Hmmmmmmmmmmm...I believe I read this one before. XD

I adore this poem, it's so incredibly kawaii. ^o^ It makes me think of a fashionable couple, who are drawn to one another. They lie by the phone, just waiting for that one special call to hear the other's voice once more. They long for each other so, and yet cannot seem to get close enough.

Another great poem Matt, wootness! XD

~Kelsey
thanx...XD even my teacher said it was sexy when i said it in spanish class today hehehe

Shana
February 3rd, 2005, 04:13 AM
That one is adorable...yet sad in an eerie way. I <3 it. Good job! ^~

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
February 3rd, 2005, 12:31 PM
thanx, to me, sad is cool to a certain extent, so i try to include a little bit of it even in my normal poemz

Shadow_of_Light
February 3rd, 2005, 01:04 PM
That poem is so sweet, and kind of sad. I agree with Kelsey, It's like they both love each other, yet they can't confront each other and tell each other how they feel...

Awesome job!!! I loved it!

~Flo

Kelsey
February 4th, 2005, 10:01 AM
>']thanx...XD even my teacher said it was sexy when i said it in spanish class today hehehe

Your teacher said it was sexy? oO Well, I'll go with it. XD Keep up the awsome work Mattie, I hope to see many more poems from you in the future. ^_______^

~Kelsey

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
February 4th, 2005, 05:48 PM
believe me, everything sounds sexy in spanish....

Dignity
February 4th, 2005, 06:29 PM
<3 caliente uno!! see, that sounded sexay!! XD matt, you are a really good poet ~origin

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
February 4th, 2005, 06:38 PM
^_^ yeah julia, anything latin inspired is sexy