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[Technya]
February 1st, 2005, 05:17 PM
This here is one of my earlier works. Sucks but some people liked it. In other sites I mean. Has a bit of languege.


Even if I run I know Im trapped,
I sold my soul and now I realize Im a tramp,
Fallen from grace as Lucifer did,
Maybe it was my fate to do this bid,
Still mourning the night I gave up the light,
Even though all I feel has me numb,
I cant be bought,
Im tougher than I thought,
Soulless Im left,
Roaming elsewhere safe in my owners idle hands,
I cant say I regret this,
I fall in love with the idea every night when I summon you,
Because of you I have a reason to live,
Youve given me a gift,
And for this I owe you my soul,
Dammit, you picked me up when I fell on my knees,
Even though theres an ethereal wasteland between us,
Our connection never dims or fails us,
Only two own my soul,
Satan is not one!
Obvious who does own my soul if indeed I deserve such honor,
The other owner is my missing half,
My love, I owe you my life,
I offer you my soul, cant thank you enough,
I pray my soul will do,
Though I owe you far more

Kyosuke
February 1st, 2005, 05:54 PM
Dark type poetry seems to be some of the best type of poetry for some reason, because alot more emotion goes into it then just writing a poem of something that inspired you.

This was really good though, to use a cliqu term, it sounds as if the person was, "lost but then found", from someone that helped the character deal with the problem they were having, and there is a great deal of thanks for all the help. Great poem ^^.

angel
February 18th, 2005, 06:08 AM
Why thats really dark shadow of ash.