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Shana
February 2nd, 2005, 05:08 PM
Hey everyone,

I never posted here before, but these are some of my songs...I hope you like them, they came from my heart. I'll post some now and a few later. ^^

Untitled

I feel as if my life revolves around you
I can feel you when your not even in the same room
See you when your not standing right in front of my face
Hear you when were not on the phone

I feel as if my life revolves around you
I feel as if love is what I have to do
To get by in this cold hard place
That we call the earth

I feel as if my life revolves around you...

I want to feel you,
see you,
hear you,
every single day of my existance
because without you

I can't be myself
I can't get by on my own
I need you beside me
To help me get on with life

I feel as if my life revolves around you
I feel as if love is what I have to do
To get by in this cold hard place
That we call the earth

~*~

Standing Up For Myself

I feel pointless
and worthless
Like nobody cares about me at all
What they say is garbage
I won't take this anymore

Chorus:
I'm going to stand up for myself
I am who I am
You need to learn that
I'm not going to change for you
You don't have to change for me
Why can't we accept each other?

Life is wrong
People are insane
What they say doesn't make sense
But why don't they stand up for
who they are and not listen to what
other people have to say?

Chorus

I feel like I have a point
I'm worth something

~*~

Getting Through It

Something bad happens everyday
And sets me off in the wrong way
People need to leave me alone
So I can cope with myself
No matter how bad it felt

Chorus
I'm tired of people always putting me down
I need to learn to ignore this
To get them out of my haunted brain
Where spider webs are frequent

I don't need this from anyone
Because I have myself
I don't need to be reminded
Of the way that it felt
I can live with myself the way that I am
Away from humanity

Chorus

I can get through this

Eliana
February 2nd, 2005, 05:13 PM
Shana you are amazing ^^

Of course I like them because they speak about true things, and that really gets a person to like songs! ^_^

I didnt see any spelling errors, except at the last song (you wrote humaity XD)

Keep up the good work Shana ^^

--Eli

Shana
February 2nd, 2005, 05:15 PM
Awww, thanks so much Eli. ^^ I changed the spelling error, by the way. Big typo, hehe.

Kelsey
February 2nd, 2005, 05:22 PM
Hey everyone,

I never posted here before, but these are some of my songs...I hope you like them, they came from my heart. I'll post some now and a few later. ^^

Untitled

I feel as if my life revolves around you
I can feel you when your not even in the same room
See you when your not standing right in front of my face
Hear you when were not on the phone

I feel as if my life revolves around you
I feel as if love is what I have to do
To get by in this cold hard place
That we call the earth

I feel as if my life revolves around you...

I want to feel you,
see you,
hear you,
every single day of my existance
because without you

I can't be myself
I can't get by on my own
I need you beside me
To help me get on with life

I feel as if my life revolves around you
I feel as if love is what I have to do
To get by in this cold hard place
That we call the earth

~*~

Awwws, this song was so beautiful Shana! ^_______^ This song shows how once you have truly fallen in love, it seems as though all you can think about is that one special person.

You seem to have a sacred connection with them where you can hear their thoughts, feel their pain, and even see them when they are not near. Very nice song, Shana! ^o^

Standing Up For Myself

I feel pointless
and worthless
Like nobody cares about me at all
What they say is garbage
I won't take this anymore

Chorus:
I'm going to stand up for myself
I am who I am
You need to learn that
I'm not going to change for you
You don't have to change for me
Why can't we accept each other?

Life is wrong
People are insane
What they say doesn't make sense
But why don't they stand up for
who they are and not listen to what
other people have to say?

Chorus

I feel like I have a point
I'm worth something

~*~

This song was very good. I have to say I like this one the best, Shana.

This song shows how easy people can be to manipulate. For you may start out with your own opinion, but once it gets meshed with other opinions, you lose focus, and are thrown from your own beliefs into some world where your thoughts are no longer yours.

Yet in this song, it seems as one brave soul has found the strength to stand out of the crowd, and voice their opinions. To have the strength to say that others are wrong and they are right. ^___^

Awsome song, Shana, a true masterpiece. ^^

Getting Through It

Something bad happens everyday
And sets me off in the wrong way
People need to leave me alone
So I can cope with myself
No matter how bad it felt

Chorus
I'm tired of people always putting me down
I need to learn to ignore this
To get them out of my haunted brain
Where spider webs are frequent

I don't need this from anyone
Because I have myself
I don't need to be reminded
Of the way that it felt
I can live with myself the way that I am
Away from humaity

Chorus

I can get through this

I really liked this song as well. I only found one spelling problem. In the last line of the last stanza before the chorus, you spelled "humaity" instead of "humanity". ^___^

This song shows how people may object to who you are. They may be against all of your beliefs, but you cannot let them be right. You cannot let them have their way.

What if you love yourself the way you are? Did they ever think of that? So, you have to rely on yourself to pull through and tell them they're wrong. That you are you and no one but you can change that. ^^
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All of your songs were awsome Shana, great job! =D

~Kelsey

Shana
February 2nd, 2005, 05:27 PM
Thanks so much Kelsey, that truely means a lot to me...to tell you the truth I was scared at first to post my songs at PC, but I'm glad you guys like them! ^_^

Here is another one (my only other one so far, I have another but the only person that saw it is the person it was too):

Dedicated

Even though your far away
My love for you is here to stay
Your always in my mind
When I can't find another hope to believe in
You are everything to me
And this is how it will stay

Chorus
You make my world go round
Even being thousands of miles away
My love for you is here to stay
Along with your love for me
There aren't any other fish in the sea like you

You are special
my lover,
my partner,
my best friend
Something worth living for
You are my baby,
And like this it shall stay;
Forever and on

Chorus

(I love you with all my heart)

Kelsey
February 2nd, 2005, 05:33 PM
Thanks so much Kelsey, that truely means a lot to me...to tell you the truth I was scared at first to post my songs at PC, but I'm glad you guys like them! ^_^

Here is another one (my only other one so far, I have another but the only person that saw it is the person it was too):

Dedicated

Even though your(you're) far away
My love for you is here to stay
Your(You're) always in my mind
When I can't find another hope to believe in
You are everything to me
And this is how it will stay

Chorus
You make my world go round
Even being thousands of miles away
My love for you is here to stay
Along with your love for me
There aren't any other fish in the sea like you

You are special
my lover,
my partner,
my best friend
Something worth living for
You are my baby,
And like this it shall stay;
Forever and on

Chorus

(I love you with all my heart)

Awwwwwwwwwwwws! <3<3 You have a real knack for songwriting Shana. ^______^ The only two mistakes I found are highlighted above for ya. ^o^
The flow ish good too, and I'm sure it fits in even better with what ever rythym you chose for it. ^^

This poem also shows the great relationship between people who are truly in love. ^^ It gives the person something to truly believe in, something to make one willingly get out of bed each morning and greet the day. Yet another great song, Shana! ^_~

~Kelsey

Shana
February 2nd, 2005, 05:35 PM
Thank you! ^^ And I always mess up "your" and "you're", thanks for changing it for me!

Kyosuke
February 2nd, 2005, 05:46 PM
No need to be scared about it, we all love seeing new songs and poems ^^.

Those are all really well done, they really are true to real life, and how people feel when they are down wheather it being just because of depression to something like a bad breakup. My favourite though is, "Getting Through it", it deals alot with depression and you preceive the world to be and how you just feel inside.

I could easily seeing a singer like Avril Laverne singing this, its really that good ^^'.

Shana
February 2nd, 2005, 05:52 PM
No need to be scared about it, we all love seeing new songs and poems ^^.

Those are all really well done, they really are true to real life, and how people feel when they are down wheather it being just because of depression to something like a bad breakup. My favourite though is, "Getting Through it", it deals alot with depression and you preceive the world to be and how you just feel inside.

I could easily seeing a singer like Avril Laverne singing this, its really that good ^^'.
Thanks! I was really depressed the day I wrote "Getting Through It", I just was basicly mad at the world.

Thanks, though! ^^