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Kelsey
February 5th, 2005, 08:15 AM
Been a long road to follow,
Been there and gone tomorrow,
Without saying goodbye to yesterday.
And the road keeps on telling me to go on.

I have seen the sorrow,
And the sadness of here, tomorrow,
And yet...you still appear.
And the road keeps on telling me to go on.

Maybe this time tomorrow,
The rain will cease to follow,
And the mist would fade into a more today.
And the road keeps on telling me to go on.

Other memories of home stay at home,
Others have the dreams new to them.
Something is pulling me,
I feel the gravity...of it all.
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Here's my latest piece. This poem is also dedicated to Wolf's Rain. ^_____^ Well, enjoy everyone. ^.^

~Kelsey

EvIL_CAjUN_CHIkIN
February 5th, 2005, 08:18 AM
It's pretty good, Kelsey,

I approve.....

MegaDitto
February 5th, 2005, 08:19 AM
That was a lovely poem.I liked it.

Lady Pearl
February 5th, 2005, 08:33 AM
Lovely poem, Kelsey! It's very enchanting and full of essence. ^_^

Correct me if I'm wrong with the idea of your poem. You are continuing on with your road of life. You are just continuing non-stop without saying goodbye to yesterday. You can't stand all the sorrow but you still go on with life. Maybe, your life would brighten up. You are leaving memories home but something tells you to stay.

Keep up the superb work, Kelsey! Your poems are top 5! ^___________^

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
February 5th, 2005, 08:42 AM
it's very good like everything you write. i didn't realize that it waas about Wolf's Rain unti the end though [feels dumb]

Kelsey
February 5th, 2005, 09:13 AM
Lovely poem, Kelsey! It's very enchanting and full of essence. ^_^

Correct me if I'm wrong with the idea of your poem. You are continuing on with your road of life. You are just continuing non-stop without saying goodbye to yesterday. You can't stand all the sorrow but you still go on with life. Maybe, your life would brighten up. You are leaving memories home but something tells you to stay.

Keep up the superb work, Kelsey! Your poems are top 5! ^___________^

Awwwwwwws! *huggles* Thank you so much for the nice compliments, Pearl. ^^

And no, your idea of my poem's meaning is most definately not wrong. Everyone will get different ideas about any poem, so there's no right or wrong way to look at it. ^_____^

Thanks to everyone who's read my poem, I really appreciate teh comments. ^o^

~Kelsey