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oni flygon
February 5th, 2005, 11:29 PM
It's another poem from me...
Inspired from "Mr. Brightside" by The Killers and... stuff....>.>

by Niko

Whats this horrible sensation in my chest?
My stomach ties in knots and my heart twists
I was suddenly scared to look at her companion
I could not help but to ball my fists

I shook my head to get these thoughts out of me
Shes just a friend and you could just care less
Its not your problem and its best to leave them alone
You should be happy and dont make yourself stress

Everything is in my head but it all seems real
Hes walking her home like what I used to do
Hes taking her places where I took her before
Its hard to take it off your head when you see those two

My head aches as I clenched my own hair
These horrible thoughts of her with this guy
Wont go away as I pray out loud
I go down on my knees, asking Him: Why?

She said she could never love him back
Like me, he was just a friend of hers
But the green-eyed monster comes out of me
In me, horrible jealousy occurs

Envy, jealousy, desire, covet
Whatever you may want to call it
I have it and I want it to go away
Im quite desperate, I must admit

I locked this horrible feeling inside
And at the outside, you could see me smile
I just hope I could keep it within me
While not making my mind hostile

So she said hello and I greeted her back
Next to her, I see him follow close
Shes with him again, I see and I understand
This guy is just her friend, I suppose

February 6th, 2005, 1:58 AM
Your poem really describes the signs of denial when in a relatonship, when it comes to jealousy. Not just in a relationship, but also when you are attracted to someone else, and you see a person that's making them happy. You don't want to feel anything because its none of your business but you just can't help it.

Excellent poem, it really spoke the truth ^^.

February 6th, 2005, 8:57 AM
Oooooh, this poem was wonderful. I had a similar experience. My old boyfriend a few years back had decided that we just stay friends. I was fine with it, and so was he. ^o^ But then I kinda hung around this other guy I liked. It was nothing serious, we were just pals, but my old boyfriend got so jealous it was horrible. -_-

Well, I love how you describe envy as "the evil green monster". ^___^ I thought that was quite ingenius. ^^ This poem really shows how you can't come to appreciate the things you have as greatly as they deserve until it's gone.

Awsome job yet again, keep up the great work! ^^


oni flygon
February 6th, 2005, 12:18 PM
Thanks for reading the poem... ^^
Anyone else would like to comment? I'll take any criticisms...>.>

February 6th, 2005, 12:26 PM
one word.
there are few who can explain experiences within a few words, but there are even less who can explain experiences with the usage of more words.