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February 12th, 2005, 6:54 PM
Thought it'd be better to just start one for all my poems XD

First one

How long is forever?
That question kept running in my head over and over again.
Not knowing the answer to which it gave me pain.
Not having the heart to go on,
Not having the will to give up.

How I wish for the simple complacency of before,
Young and unaware of our future.
Happy and joyful full of bliss,
Now it feels as if everything is amiss.

Having to wait now for that response,
But how long would it really last?
Without heart and without the love,
I could neither stay nor could I go.

Now I sit here asking me the question
How long is forever?

February 12th, 2005, 7:23 PM
^o^ Bunny posted his poems! everyone read them 'cuz they own XD good job bunny! now go ahead and post the one you showed me XP

Hiroshi Sotomura
February 12th, 2005, 7:24 PM
Oooh, poem! *eats* It's nice-ish, for kind critique.

February 12th, 2005, 7:27 PM
Oh thanks guys ^^ SO yeah I got a new one...Kinda self-explanitory what it means to me ^^;

That Day...Use to think my life was so messed up,
Thinking I was worse off then any of my friends.
Not ever looking up, always looking back down to the darkness.
Seeing me as the worse, avoiding everyone and everything.

Sometimes the biggest things we take for granted,
Until they're gone and we realize it won't ever come back.
I only thought about myself never looking around,
Caught up in myself hearing others crying out for help.

One day I was down on my luck,
Walking home wondering why even try.
Thinking how to end it all without a trace,
As I walked home that night from school,
I saw a man holding up a sign
It said, "will work for food, money, or cloths".

A tear came to my eye,
The first I had shed for someone else in a long time.
My life slowly made sense,
I knew I wasn't the one that wanted pity,
I was the one that wanted to help.

Hiroshi Sotomura
February 12th, 2005, 7:33 PM
You should put some good ones in your siggy. ^_^

February 12th, 2005, 7:35 PM
Wow, Bunnu. =3 Your poems are very well written. ^__________^ *flicks* I cant wait to read more~! (=D) <---- Look, I'm an egg~! XD


February 12th, 2005, 9:05 PM
Thanks guys, your words mean a lot ^^ Okay, so this one I got an idea to write from a book I was reading that was nice so I felt like writing about, the flow isn't the best but I only had like ten minutes to write it ><;

Just Fly...
Hush little baby don't say word,
I can see you're sad inside.
When you laugh you smile,
I break down inside and wanna die.

That one-day they both left,
Momma and Pappas' gone and we don't why,
Don't you worry I'll be here.
Just to keep you going and letting you fly,
There's no reason to fear and while I'm here.

I know you're sad and it hurts inside,
But while I'm here you'll be safe and sound.
Keep those little golden eyes dry,
And you'll never have to fear not being found.

Just let go I know it hurts,
Life moves so fast no time to cry.
Gather all your dreams and hopes,
And I know that you will fly.

I try so hard for you,
Show me that you can fly.
Gave it all up for you,
So don't let me down now.

They're both gone and I know it hurts,
But I'll be here to keep you safe.
Just remember to keep your fire burning,
And I'll never let you fall...

February 12th, 2005, 9:59 PM
Oh wow Bunny. They're so excellent and touching. I think you have true talent~ ^^

February 12th, 2005, 10:03 PM
*takes the Karli egg, cracks it over a frypan and turns the hotplate on* I'm having eggs! >D

Alright, enough of that... o.o; Those are beautiful, Jorge! *cries* You're so talented! *sniff* XD

February 14th, 2005, 3:55 PM
Okay, new posty XD

A whisper of death

Death came to me the night before

not having to wait

for now or more.

The birds whispered

the silence came.

Peace not be forgotten

by the truth of my words.

The peace came tonight

its whisper so sweet.

It's dream into love

of the peace of my heart.

What I not knew

to forever live.

Peace came tonight

and it whispered of death.

Youko Kurama
February 14th, 2005, 5:15 PM
Woah, very deep.
I'm not the best when it comes to poetry, but even I wth my dense head, know those are good.
You're really talented and I hope Know the rest will be just as good.
Keep up the work Jorge!
*gives you Silver Taco of Poetic Excellence #3*

February 17th, 2005, 1:20 PM
Got another one XD Flow's sorta off and it could be a bit longer so meh XD When you got the message,
That result of which held prolific results.
What would you do knowing the truth?
Let take you slowly, pity yourself,
Lose it all in the madness.

I looked deeper then I ever had before,
I gave way to all I denied.
Like tomorrow was a gift,
A gift that would never arrive.

I sold my fears away,
Shed that lowly skin and fly high.
But no hidden message today,
I knew that I would die.

I looked back on all I did,
And asked why I waited so long.
Left the gift of life unused for so long.
The great surrender came, and all I left was shell of a former.