Master Of Charizard
February 18th, 2005, 08:18 AM
I'm new here and this is my first ever post! Please read and rate on a scale on 1-10! (Don't judge to harshly :laugh: ) (I will post CHAPTERS 2-4 in one minute :) )
TITLE: THE WORLD OF POKEMON
CHAPTER 1: The Kid Named Dox; The Start Of Our Journey!
In a very special announcement, Nintendo has made it into a tournament. Each team consists of 4 members. Our team consists of Daniel, a very experienced and tricky player, Blaze, whose team consists of many fire Pokemon. Chris, whose team of Pokemon can defeat nearly all challengers in his way and me. My team can destroy all in my way. Daniel is tall with short black hair. He is the athletic type. He can get a bit cocky at times but he is still a great Pokemon Trainer. Blaze has spiky red hair and it makes him look like Lance of the Elite 4.Most people we meet say he looks cool. He likes to train fire Pokemon and is the proud owner of the three fiery starters of Kanto, Johto and Hoenn. Chris is the most athletic out of the 4 of us. He is tall and he is real good with the ladies. He is the weakest out of us in Pokemon but his contacts make him a valuable team mate. Then there’s me, Antonio. I’m not the athletic type. I’m a computer genius. I can fix anything about computers but when it comes down to Pokemon, I’m almost unbeatable. I have short, spiky black hair and I’m tall for my age.
I’m waiting for Daniel because tonight, all of my team is having dinner at my place. As I’m waiting for Daniel, I see something peculiar. The alley way around the corner is always empty, except for the usual stray cats and dogs. But there is a boy, about my age with short blonde hair. There is a shifty look about him as though he is waiting for someone. Then I see him take something out of his pocket. It looks familiar… But I can’t put my finger on it. Then it hits me like a ton of bricks. Daniel’s new Nintendo DS! That’s why Daniel’s taking so long! The kid sees me looking at the DS.
“What’re you looking at, chump?” He says with a smirk.
“I know you stole that of my friend! If you didn’t know, his parents engraved his name into the back!” I say to him with a of triumph on my face.
“Okay, if you want it back, come get it!” He says with an even bigger smirk.
He runs into the old alley way. I chase him through but even I didn’t know how dark and disgusting it was. There are overfilled garbage bins everywhere. The smell is putrid, like dead people and I don’t even know what dead people smell like! It’s so dark, that you can’t see anything.
“How am I going to find that guy in here?!” I say out loud. “Hey, what a minute. Maybe this can help!”
I pull out my GBA SP and turn it on. I use the light as a flashlight to get through the alley way. I’m careful not to step on any cats, dogs or dead rats. As I continue through the alley way, I see many disgusting things such as a dog spewing up and maybe the worst thing of all, 2 dead cats and a dog eating the remains. Then I see the guy. He’s just sitting there unaware that I’m closing in on him.
“What a chump, and he thinks that he’s going to find me in here! The dum – hey give that back!” He says when I take it from him.
“See ya sucker!” I say to him and then I run.
When I get back to the outside of the alley way Daniel is waiting impatiently on the outside.
“Sorry…had…get…back…your…DS” I say slowly. Then out of nowhere the unknown kid tackles me.
“Give it back! I stole it, fair and square!” Says the kid.
“Get lost, you little punk!” Daniel says. He then picks the kid of ground and throws him onto the grass. Did I forget to mention that Daniel has unparallel strength?
“Ooooooooowwwwwwwwwww! I’ll be back! You won’t forget the name of Dox!” This Dox character says.
“Man. Dox? What a weird name! Oh yeah, thanks for getting the DS back! Really appreciate it!” Says Daniel with a look of confusion on his face.
After the encounter with Dox, we go to my house to have dinner. Everyone has been waiting patiently for our arrival. When we get there, we explain what happened to everyone. Know one knew who this Dox character was.
“What’d he look like?” Said Blaze with interest.
“He had short blonde hair, he was skinny and he wore clothes that made him look rich.” We say to the rest of the team.
“Well, if he tried to steal the DS, there is no way he’s rich! He’s probably a common thief who sells the items he steals except this time he got caught.” Say’s the always quiet Chris.
“Well, we better get some sleep. The tournament’s tomorrow and we want to be at our best.” I say to the rest of the team.
“Yeah, but it’s only 9:30, so while were up, let’s activate our Mystic and Aurora tickets we got yesterday.” Says Blaze.
“Ok. But wait a minute. I need to get our GBA’s. Remember? I put them in my drawer” I tell Blaze.
I get up and go to my drawer. I’m about to pick them up when I see a light flashing on the screen. But the next second, it disappeared. I take them, thinking it’s my imagination. I give them out to my friends and we turn them on. But they wouldn’t turn on. We keep flicking the switch until we see a light. It flashes and the electricity is gone. It lights up the whole room and we get sucked into our GBA’s!
We travel through a spiral in like, another universe! Everywhere there are pictures of…POKEMON?!
“Daniel, Blaze, Chris! You seeing what I’m seeing?” I say loudly to the team.
“That depends what you see!” Says Chris in his usual comedian way. “If you see pictures of Pokemon, flashing lights and yellow beams that look like if they hit us, they’ll kill us, then, yeah that’s what I see!”
“This is no time to jjjoookkkeee!” I say before we fall through the end of this Universe. At least we stopped moving.
“Ugh… What happened, where are we and can we get back???!!!” Scream’s Daniel.
I have a look at our new surroundings. There are large trees, millions of weird bug like creatures around us and there are paths leading in all different directions.
“I think…Were in a maze.” I say quietly.
“That’s just great! Were in a maze, in a place we don’t even know and to top all that, I hear something that is coming this way! Wait, what is that thing I hear?” Says Chris, now with a tone of fear in his usually quiet voice box.
We wait quietly, our ears picking up anything, even the breaking of a twig. Then out of nowhere, a creature like none other appears from the woods.
“What is that thing?!” Screams Chris. Why does he have to have a big mouth at the most inappropriate times?
“I know what that is! It’s a Dragonite! Look at it!” Exclaims Blaze. “Look at this as well!
Blaze points to our waist. There on our waists appeared 6 Pokeballs each.
“Go, Kyogre! Use your Ice Beam attack on that Dragonite!’ Screams Blaze. Then, something none of us expected to happen, happened. Kyogre came out and used an incredible Ice Beam on Dragonite. It was frozen. Before anybody could ask a question I said “RUN!!!” We ran through the trees as far as we could go. Then I allowed questions to be asked to Blaze.
“Okay, Blaze. One, how did you know it would work and two, how’d you now it was Kyogre?!” We asked to Blaze. He was like a hero now.
“Okay, people, settle down. First question’s answer: I didn’t know. Second: I had a feeling that surged through my body like electricity. Then I knew it was good old Kyogre! I think…That these Pokeballs on our waists contain the Pokemon from our games, Fire Red and Leaf Green!” Blaze said quickly.
We were silent for a while thinking how to get out of here. That silence was broken by the sound of that Dragonite.
“We can’t win without ice Pokemon and I don’t see a lake or anything around for them to swim in!” Blaze said. It seemed hopeless until…
“Who said that we need Ice Pokemon?” Said Daniel with a smirk. We didn’t know what he was saying. Then Dragonite came and he looked mad. There was an ancient fury in the eyes of the awesome dragon. His eyes also showed intensity.
“Go, Salamence! Show him who the king of dragons is!” Daniel says with a huge smile on his face, explaining what he meant about not needing ice Pokemon.
The two awesome dragons stare each other. We stand in awe of the two dragons, each showing the ancient power of the dragon Pokemon…
TO BE CONTINUED…
TITLE: THE WORLD OF POKEMON
CHAPTER 1: The Kid Named Dox; The Start Of Our Journey!
In a very special announcement, Nintendo has made it into a tournament. Each team consists of 4 members. Our team consists of Daniel, a very experienced and tricky player, Blaze, whose team consists of many fire Pokemon. Chris, whose team of Pokemon can defeat nearly all challengers in his way and me. My team can destroy all in my way. Daniel is tall with short black hair. He is the athletic type. He can get a bit cocky at times but he is still a great Pokemon Trainer. Blaze has spiky red hair and it makes him look like Lance of the Elite 4.Most people we meet say he looks cool. He likes to train fire Pokemon and is the proud owner of the three fiery starters of Kanto, Johto and Hoenn. Chris is the most athletic out of the 4 of us. He is tall and he is real good with the ladies. He is the weakest out of us in Pokemon but his contacts make him a valuable team mate. Then there’s me, Antonio. I’m not the athletic type. I’m a computer genius. I can fix anything about computers but when it comes down to Pokemon, I’m almost unbeatable. I have short, spiky black hair and I’m tall for my age.
I’m waiting for Daniel because tonight, all of my team is having dinner at my place. As I’m waiting for Daniel, I see something peculiar. The alley way around the corner is always empty, except for the usual stray cats and dogs. But there is a boy, about my age with short blonde hair. There is a shifty look about him as though he is waiting for someone. Then I see him take something out of his pocket. It looks familiar… But I can’t put my finger on it. Then it hits me like a ton of bricks. Daniel’s new Nintendo DS! That’s why Daniel’s taking so long! The kid sees me looking at the DS.
“What’re you looking at, chump?” He says with a smirk.
“I know you stole that of my friend! If you didn’t know, his parents engraved his name into the back!” I say to him with a of triumph on my face.
“Okay, if you want it back, come get it!” He says with an even bigger smirk.
He runs into the old alley way. I chase him through but even I didn’t know how dark and disgusting it was. There are overfilled garbage bins everywhere. The smell is putrid, like dead people and I don’t even know what dead people smell like! It’s so dark, that you can’t see anything.
“How am I going to find that guy in here?!” I say out loud. “Hey, what a minute. Maybe this can help!”
I pull out my GBA SP and turn it on. I use the light as a flashlight to get through the alley way. I’m careful not to step on any cats, dogs or dead rats. As I continue through the alley way, I see many disgusting things such as a dog spewing up and maybe the worst thing of all, 2 dead cats and a dog eating the remains. Then I see the guy. He’s just sitting there unaware that I’m closing in on him.
“What a chump, and he thinks that he’s going to find me in here! The dum – hey give that back!” He says when I take it from him.
“See ya sucker!” I say to him and then I run.
When I get back to the outside of the alley way Daniel is waiting impatiently on the outside.
“Sorry…had…get…back…your…DS” I say slowly. Then out of nowhere the unknown kid tackles me.
“Give it back! I stole it, fair and square!” Says the kid.
“Get lost, you little punk!” Daniel says. He then picks the kid of ground and throws him onto the grass. Did I forget to mention that Daniel has unparallel strength?
“Ooooooooowwwwwwwwwww! I’ll be back! You won’t forget the name of Dox!” This Dox character says.
“Man. Dox? What a weird name! Oh yeah, thanks for getting the DS back! Really appreciate it!” Says Daniel with a look of confusion on his face.
After the encounter with Dox, we go to my house to have dinner. Everyone has been waiting patiently for our arrival. When we get there, we explain what happened to everyone. Know one knew who this Dox character was.
“What’d he look like?” Said Blaze with interest.
“He had short blonde hair, he was skinny and he wore clothes that made him look rich.” We say to the rest of the team.
“Well, if he tried to steal the DS, there is no way he’s rich! He’s probably a common thief who sells the items he steals except this time he got caught.” Say’s the always quiet Chris.
“Well, we better get some sleep. The tournament’s tomorrow and we want to be at our best.” I say to the rest of the team.
“Yeah, but it’s only 9:30, so while were up, let’s activate our Mystic and Aurora tickets we got yesterday.” Says Blaze.
“Ok. But wait a minute. I need to get our GBA’s. Remember? I put them in my drawer” I tell Blaze.
I get up and go to my drawer. I’m about to pick them up when I see a light flashing on the screen. But the next second, it disappeared. I take them, thinking it’s my imagination. I give them out to my friends and we turn them on. But they wouldn’t turn on. We keep flicking the switch until we see a light. It flashes and the electricity is gone. It lights up the whole room and we get sucked into our GBA’s!
We travel through a spiral in like, another universe! Everywhere there are pictures of…POKEMON?!
“Daniel, Blaze, Chris! You seeing what I’m seeing?” I say loudly to the team.
“That depends what you see!” Says Chris in his usual comedian way. “If you see pictures of Pokemon, flashing lights and yellow beams that look like if they hit us, they’ll kill us, then, yeah that’s what I see!”
“This is no time to jjjoookkkeee!” I say before we fall through the end of this Universe. At least we stopped moving.
“Ugh… What happened, where are we and can we get back???!!!” Scream’s Daniel.
I have a look at our new surroundings. There are large trees, millions of weird bug like creatures around us and there are paths leading in all different directions.
“I think…Were in a maze.” I say quietly.
“That’s just great! Were in a maze, in a place we don’t even know and to top all that, I hear something that is coming this way! Wait, what is that thing I hear?” Says Chris, now with a tone of fear in his usually quiet voice box.
We wait quietly, our ears picking up anything, even the breaking of a twig. Then out of nowhere, a creature like none other appears from the woods.
“What is that thing?!” Screams Chris. Why does he have to have a big mouth at the most inappropriate times?
“I know what that is! It’s a Dragonite! Look at it!” Exclaims Blaze. “Look at this as well!
Blaze points to our waist. There on our waists appeared 6 Pokeballs each.
“Go, Kyogre! Use your Ice Beam attack on that Dragonite!’ Screams Blaze. Then, something none of us expected to happen, happened. Kyogre came out and used an incredible Ice Beam on Dragonite. It was frozen. Before anybody could ask a question I said “RUN!!!” We ran through the trees as far as we could go. Then I allowed questions to be asked to Blaze.
“Okay, Blaze. One, how did you know it would work and two, how’d you now it was Kyogre?!” We asked to Blaze. He was like a hero now.
“Okay, people, settle down. First question’s answer: I didn’t know. Second: I had a feeling that surged through my body like electricity. Then I knew it was good old Kyogre! I think…That these Pokeballs on our waists contain the Pokemon from our games, Fire Red and Leaf Green!” Blaze said quickly.
We were silent for a while thinking how to get out of here. That silence was broken by the sound of that Dragonite.
“We can’t win without ice Pokemon and I don’t see a lake or anything around for them to swim in!” Blaze said. It seemed hopeless until…
“Who said that we need Ice Pokemon?” Said Daniel with a smirk. We didn’t know what he was saying. Then Dragonite came and he looked mad. There was an ancient fury in the eyes of the awesome dragon. His eyes also showed intensity.
“Go, Salamence! Show him who the king of dragons is!” Daniel says with a huge smile on his face, explaining what he meant about not needing ice Pokemon.
The two awesome dragons stare each other. We stand in awe of the two dragons, each showing the ancient power of the dragon Pokemon…
TO BE CONTINUED…