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jasonresno
February 24th, 2005, 06:51 PM
(shoot!, can someone move this to Poetry??)
Wrong Places
by: Shifty Five (my band)

Authors Note: This just came to me all of a sudden, a very "scream-o" song. Chris is my best friend, and bassist. Austin, my other best friend, is the drummer. I'm the lead elec. guitar.

CAPS=Screaming

(chris)LOOKING FOR LOVE
(me)in all the wrong places
(chris)LOOKING FOR LOVE
(me)in these empty spaces
(chris)LOOKING FOR LOVE
(me)where there's none to find
(chris)LOOKING FOR LOVE
(me)when your
(chris)LOSING YOUR MIND

(slow down the song a bit, singers pause)

(me)In these empty times
(chris)lookin for love
(me)so full of lies
(chris)looking for love
(me)no time to lose
(chris)looking for love
(me) my lifes mine to
(chris)LOSE

(me)Cant stand to wait
(chris)so
(me)full of hate
(chris)I'm
(me)Looking for love.....
(both)In all the wrong places...............................

LOOKING FOR LOVE
LOOKING FOR LOVE
LOOKING
for
...
..
Love

Kyosuke
February 25th, 2005, 01:43 PM
No problem I'll move it.

Nice song XD, I really liked how it started off with so much energy, then just suddenly go into calming tone. Some more lyrics could be added to it based on looking for love, but its still good nonetheless without more. The only thing now is to just hear it with the instrumentals to really see if it would sound good.

Great job on it, hope to hear it one day on the radio or TV XD.

crazed flareon
February 25th, 2005, 01:45 PM
This is a pretty cool thing.

Kelsey
February 25th, 2005, 02:05 PM
(shoot!, can someone move this to Poetry??)
Wrong Places
by: Shifty Five (my band)

Authors Note: This just came to me all of a sudden, a very "scream-o" song. Chris is my best friend, and bassist. Austin, my other best friend, is the drummer. I'm the lead elec. guitar.

CAPS=Screaming

(chris)LOOKING FOR LOVE
(me)in all the wrong places
(chris)LOOKING FOR LOVE
(me)in these empty spaces
(chris)LOOKING FOR LOVE
(me)where there's none to find
(chris)LOOKING FOR LOVE
(me)when your
(chris)LOSING YOUR MIND

(slow down the song a bit, singers pause)

(me)In these empty times
(chris)lookin for love
(me)so full of lies
(chris)looking for love
(me)no time to lose
(chris)looking for love
(me) my lifes mine to
(chris)LOSE

(me)Cant stand to wait
(chris)so
(me)full of hate
(chris)I'm
(me)Looking for love.....
(both)In all the wrong places...............................

LOOKING FOR LOVE
LOOKING FOR LOVE
LOOKING
for
...
..
Love

Weeeeee! This was sooo cool! ^___^ If only I knew the song's rythem it would've been a lot better to think of the beat, but just the words of the song are good. ^^

I think the flow of your song sounds good and the CAPS thing is neat. XD I also like how the song is showing what people go through when 'looking for love'. They tend to look in the wrong places and kinda really screw things up (believe me, I know XD). Great work, jason. ^^

~Kelsey

jasonresno
February 26th, 2005, 04:59 AM
Thanks much guys (and thanks for moving it!)