PDA

View Full Version : Of Love and Fishpops


TIN Prop
February 27th, 2005, 01:55 PM
A/N: Yay! Happy poetry!! :D

----
Of love and fishpops,
and everything in between
Of chalk and hopskotch,
and all the pretty things.
Of nursery rhymes and story times,
and the scattered animal cracker
Of all the things that I call mine,
and everything that can inspire.
Of my lessons and my studies,
and everything else self taught
Of when I come home wet and muddy,
and all the times that I've been caught.
Of all these things and so much more,
none of it is as good as you seem
Of all the lovers in the whole world,
I gladly choose my ice cream.

crazed flareon
February 27th, 2005, 02:02 PM
I love it,happy poetry.....*gets lost in thought*

TIN Prop
February 27th, 2005, 06:03 PM
thanks for your kind words =)

Kelsey
February 27th, 2005, 06:37 PM
A/N: Yay! Happy poetry!! :D

----
Of love and fishpops,
and everything in between
Of chalk and hopskotch,
and all the pretty things.
Of nursery rhymes and story times,
and the scattered animal cracker
Of all the things that I call mine,
and everything that can inspire.
Of my lessons and my studies,
and everything else self taught
Of when I come home wet and muddy,
and all the times that I've been caught.
Of all these things and so much more,
none of it is as good as you seem
Of all the lovers in the whole world,
I gladly choose my ice cream.

XD Cool! ^__^ This is a nice switch from all the lovey-dovey poems we got going around (none of which are bad, but ya get my drift ;D). I think it's cute how you use a topic like "Of all the lovers in the world" and then add your own opinon bascially. ^__^

Great work on the poem Tin prop, ^o^ I adored it! ;D

~Kelsey

TIN Prop
March 2nd, 2005, 03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kelsey =)

Dignity
March 2nd, 2005, 04:00 PM
Wow... Pretty much what Kels said. xD;; I like it alot! ^__^ It's sweet kinda.. but what are fishpops? xD;; Good job! ^__^ I hope to see more from you, TINprop! ~origin