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oni flygon
February 27th, 2005, 07:12 PM
Oooh... here's a song I wrote a few days ago... I just remembered a friend of mine back in my home country... she was a best friend of mine and when I left to live here in the US, she kissed me goodbye and I haven't heard of her then... kind of a way of remembering her...

Lovesick, Homesick, Just Plain Sick

Intro:
By myself, alone
I yearn for your love, my dear
Here in this cold night

[Instrumental]

Waking up one Sunday morning
In the middle of nowhere
Thinking of you and your kisses
That you gave to me a year ago
Thinking of that dream just last night
I really thought it was real
It really disappointed me to find out
I知 all alone again

Chorus:
I知 lovesick, I知 homesick
I知 out here in the middle of nowhere
Thinking of you and home just makes me hurt
Oh it makes me sick inside
I知 lovesick, I知 homesick
Just get me out of here
I just need something real to feel

Walking down one Sunday morning
In the middle of nowhere
Thinking of home and my bed
Where I lay underneath the covers
Thinking of dreaming tonight
I really thought it was real
It really disappointed me to find out
I知 still walking

[Chorus]

Dreaming of home and you
Hopeless dreams and starry nights
Thinking of those bright blue eyes
That bright yellow hair and that sweet smile
Thinking of us at home
Kissing our fears away near the warmth
I really thought it was real
It really disappointed me to find out

THAT I AM ALL ALONE

[Guitar Solo]

Bridge:
Since when was the last time I saw you?
I feel miserable to ever forget
The time when you kissed me goodbye
Oh I could feel my body
Collapsing in this void in my mind

[Chorus 2x]

I知 lovesickI知 homesick and I知 just plain sick

Dignity
March 2nd, 2005, 04:05 PM
Ooh, this is a song right? ^__^ I like it. I'm quite bad at constructive criticism, so please excuse my poor post ^^- ; It shows your emotions, how you truly miss your friend. Great job, OT! xD;; ~origin

Kelsey
March 5th, 2005, 11:33 AM
How did I miss this?! XD Sowwy I'm sooo late, but here I am now, ready to be enticed by people's literature! ^o^

Hmmmmm...another song, eh? I've seen a lot of these around lately. ^^ Well, your song is as sweet as the poems you've written before, Niko. ^.~

This song is so sweet, yet again spelling out the means and sacrifices of love, awwwwws. <3 Well, there's no spelling errors or anything like that from what I can see, so that's very good. ^______^

*clings to Niko* Great work yet again buddy, I wuved it. <3

~Kelsey