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<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
February 28th, 2005, 01:50 PM
i'll post my more serious poems here:

Purgatorio
I trudge through the dark, i'll never see your face
No matter how hard i try, i'll never see that place.
Valhalla, Elysian Fields, Heaven, i'll never reach
Because I don't agree with what you preach.
A noble pagan, a learned one
Who will never see the sun
I want to be free, to move on, to go,
But i'm trapped here in Purgatorio...

Dignity
March 2nd, 2005, 01:10 PM
Ooh! Me likes! >=3 Purgatorio means Purgatory, right? The place between Heaven and hell? xD;; Yeah it is.

I think you are basically saying you will be stuck there forever because you don't agree with teachings of certain religions.. That's probably only scratching the surface though ^^-;

Great job on this poem! No rating though. xD;; I don't rate poems. Good job anyways, Matt-kun! Keep it up. ~origin

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
March 4th, 2005, 04:25 AM
nah...it means i don't necessarily accept every teaching in christianity so i'm gonna be stuck in purgatory XD but close enough

[Technya]
March 5th, 2005, 02:53 PM
0.o I so love this poem! Speaks the truth. Guess you and I'll be stuck there since I also don't agree with Christian teachings, that's why I converted to Wicca. But anyway I totally loved the poem, short but deep ^_^

Khaos Angel
March 6th, 2005, 12:58 AM
o.o Like Shadow said, short but sweet. I like it, Matt. Maybe that's cause I'll be joining you and her in Purgatory. XD