Pokemon Astero Version- RMXP

[Rm2k3Guy]

Here is my project i have been working on for a couple of weeks after handing the Team project over to Esai i found being in the Team very hectic anyway please don't flame.
Story Line
Team rocket have reassembled again . . . XD and they want to take over the world (same as usual XD)
and they have a plan they have developed a new machine that usually electro static waves to disables a pokemons ability to attack therefore making it easy to catch they plan to invade Pokemon League and catch all of the strong Pokemon with this device Team Magma and Aqua are helping each other to stop this and you help them.
Their is a stunning ending to the game in a deadly climax i've said too much already >.<
Anway
Screens:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Intro.pnghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Oaksintro.png
Oaks Intro
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/YourRoom.pnghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Yourhome.png
Your Room
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/LeitherCity.png
Leither City
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/OaksLab.png
Oaks Lab
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/NEWPOKEMON.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/NEWPOKEMON2.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/NEWPOKEMON3.png
New Pokemon
Systems:
Day and night and random weather
Pokegear
CBS (Eventually)
CMS (RMXP'S Currnet edited one)
Bike
Running sys.
Pokemon Challenge (No info yet it is secret ;))
Well time for me to go to work some more on the game
Cya Dudes
Rm2k3guy
P.S Screens of Pokegear soon :)

[Esai]

You need to move the message box up abit and maybe make your bedroom bigger. And maybe improve the pokemon sprites.

But its looking good for a first time, good story!

[Robbie]

*blink* Looks neat. Those large creature (Pokémon? I'm only familiar with the first 200 or so Pokémon, so I don't recognise them) things look a little out of place, though :\ Perhaps pixel them instead?

[Dawson]

Why are the sceens different sizes? I'm glad you've posted proper info in the opening post. The seems to be similar to a few other games on here but I can't fault it because it seems good enough. Unfortunately the tiny screens don't really show much so it's hard to comment but from what is shown it looks pretty good. Oh, and clearly spriting isn't your forté so I'll just pass on commenting on those until you'v improved or find a spriter to help ;)

[Rm2k3Guy]

Robbie:You mean the pokemon ? ? ?
Phoenix:Yep i cannot sprite if any one is interested just say

[Jeff_PKLight]

I am, but I don't think I'll be spriting for other games for a while....I still need to sprite for my game and for Neo_Dragon's Pokemon Silk game.

[Robbie]

Robbie:You mean the pokemon ? ? ?
Phoenix:Yep i cannot sprite if any one is interested just say
Yeah. Sorry, I should have been more specific. I've edited my post. They would look a lot better if you had them pixelled - they've got that "five minute Paint job" look to them, if you know what I mean. Otherwise, the screens look great. Good luck :)

[Sorye HK]

I think you should change the XY of those pictures. Also, how about making the sprites smaller and fitting them into those boxes like in the game?

[Rm2k3Guy]

Hey great idea heres a screen of it
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Alvesta.png
I will do them in boxes and when i get a spriter they will be unpixelled XD

Cya Rm2k3guy

[MatiZ Master]

um... those pokemon sprites 0don't look good... :/
maybe ask some talented spriter to help you

[Rm2k3Guy]

I know i have been told listen to phoenix and don't comment on their crappiness (sorry mods)
On a better note heres a screen of my new message box
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Newmsgbox.png
Comments please :D :D
I wish i could sprite XD

[Dawson]

The message box looks cool! You need to check your grammar though.

[Rm2k3Guy]

Hey thanks i like it aswell and i will correct my grammer (stupid brain XD)
Well cya
Rm2k3guy

[Rm2k3Guy]

Sorry for the double post but i have some more screens
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route135.png
Firstly Route 135
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route136.png
Secondly Route 136
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route137.png
And route 137
And heres some i just made :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/MetreasTown.png
Metreas Towns Sign
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route138.png
Route 138
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route139.png
Route 139
System screens:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Newmenu.png
The new menu many thanks to Esai
Heres some of the non-complete Pokegear ! ! !
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Pgmap.png
The map screen (blank cause i don't have a map yet XD
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Pgphone.png
The phone part (nothing else on that page yet)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Pgradio.png
The radio screen (ditto)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/PgPSCL.png
That is a system link to Pokemon Challenge which you will discover more about later in the game.
Well as i say none of it is coded :$ cause i need help with scrolling bars on the pokegear well please post cause i hate double posting XD

[MatiZ Master]

looks good... as for programming, try finding someone from japan (ruby is japan, so there must be some ruby masters :D)

[Sorye HK]

wish you luck on the pokegear man.

[Rm2k3Guy]

Thanks Daegon :) :) Esai might help me . . .

[Dawson]

Yeah, it looks good. One idea to change it would be to Pokemon-ize the pictures. It may take a bit too much effort though.

[Jeff_PKLight]

The pokegear looks awesome but the menu looks like an exact copy of.....-vitual-'s or Peekimon's.....

[Avatar]

Overall decent mapping, although I like the idea of a custom message box, but I'm not too fond of the design on yours (looks like you added a default gradient and texture)

[Blizzy]

The pokegear looks awesome but the menu looks like an exact copy of.....-vitual-'s or Peekimon's.....
Pokegear:
only the horizontal command is the same (except for the names)
the rest is pretty different (windowskin, pictures, etc.)
if you need any help on it, just ask ;)

mine pokegear is way different + my script got around 750 lines :P :classic:
so i think my pokegear is more advanced :\

About the menu:
it's freely to use, but credit belongs to me.

and for the font, try using "Comic Sans MS"
i'm using that one, and it's looking pretty decent

[Peekimon]

Everything's AWESOME ; But the font's not pretty good...

[Rm2k3Guy]

Everything's AWESOME ; But the font's not pretty good...
That's high praise coming from all of these great gamemakers who i respect :d
does any body have that font?

[Blizzy]

That's high praise coming from all of these great gamemakers who i respect :d
does any body have that font?
it's standard in every pc, i think
or else, try a font site

[Neo Android]

Ummm i have seen every screenshot apart from the pokemon a little box with an X comes up. I have to say your game is looking very good. I dont like the text on the PCSL you can barely read what it is written. I think the phone screenshot is funny. Very imaginative and original. The text box is not pokemon style thats why it dont fit in with the game. In My opinion. Good Mapping. And just check the spelling of somethings. ^_^

[Rm2k3Guy]

I like it so does every one else so i am keeping it thanks for the comments though

[Peekimon]

You could try Verdana, Tahoma, Comic Sans or even the Pokémon one. But, to be sure of what i'm saying, the font in the message boxes, just....doesn't look right. But, overall. 5 letters: G - R - E - A - T !!!!!

[Rm2k3Guy]

Hi just a quick note to say i have a new Pokemon designer Maximo v.2 many thanks to him :D :D :D :D
and thanks for the comments :D

[Maximo v.2]

Yea and im him i sent you them starters

[Rm2k3Guy]

I have restarted the game because i was rushing it here is some new pokemon thanks to maximo v.2
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/1stevo.png
The fire starters first stage it is named Flarth
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/2ndevo.png
The fire starters second stage It is named Flarthen
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/1stevow.png
The water starters first stage It is named Bleace
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/1stevog.png
The grass starters 1st stage It is named Pompum
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Monkeypok.png
A monkey pokemon It is named Apeeth
Comments please

[Esai]

Those sprites are good! Good job Maximo v2!

[Maximo v.2]

Yay i rule this inspires me to do more

[Rm2k3Guy]

Woah this sunk very far down time for an update :D
Screens:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Introduction.png
The intro
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/YourRoom.png
Your home
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/UpdatedMenu.png
The new and improved menu
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/AsteroTown.png
Astero Town
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/OaksLab.png
Oaks Lab
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route135.png
Route 135
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/PokemonPark.png
Pokemon Park
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/RouteHouse.png
Route House
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route136.png
Route 136
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/MarauderousCity.png
Marauderous City
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Pokemoncentre.png
Pokemon Centre
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Shop.png
Pokemon Mart
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/UndergroundTunnel.png
Underground Tunnel
http://img33.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img33&image=lastevo6ln.png
The fire starters 1st evo
Maximo v.2 has restarted the others because the evos were proving difficult to sprite :D
Comments Please :D

[Maximo v.2]

I gotta say good screens but i hate ash and im gonna be busy with my own game but are'll still try and make ya sprites

[Sorye HK]

Well, the Prof.Oak picture should be a centered a little more in the middle. Also, I see the guard blocking the way out of your town, but couldn't you just get past him through the two paths on the side?

[Rm2k3Guy]

No because their is a fence behind him :D

[Rm2k3Guy]

Sorry for the double post but heres a map i made yesterday:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route138.png
and one i just made
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route139.png
Please post i hate double posting

[Sorye HK]

I like both screens very much. However, I don't know if it's just because of the current position the hero was in when the screen was taken, but I think that there should be a patch of grass or something under the building in the first screen.

[Rm2k3Guy]

Ok does this look better?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Route138.png

[Sorye HK]

Yes it does. But, what exactly is that building though?

[Rm2k3Guy]

Well the scientist in their needs help team rocket stole his pokemon (its a new pokemon) and you must help him

[Dawson]

I've got mixed reactions about this. Some sprites are very good and some could be improved. A lot of maps are very good but some could be improved. Astero Town and Pokemon Park are the ones that could be improved most. In Astero Town the fences seem to have been randomly placed for no reason. The Pokemon Park looks to plain, if it's a park shouldn't there be trees there? I think Flarth and Pompum could be improved to as they look a bit blocky.
The rest of the screens are cool though, good job overall!

[Rm2k3Guy]

Mini Update:
Not much just a screen from my surfing system :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Surfing.png
If any one knows how i can code a bike and runningg sys in rmxp don't hesitate to tell me XD

[Dawson]

Ooh, I like that! Does it only work after you've used a HM or haven't you got that far yet? For a running system you could probably find a running tutorial at one of the big RMXP forums/sites.

[Sorye HK]

You could use the running sys script but modify it to work with a different input key for the bike.

[Rm2k3Guy]

Ooh, I like that! Does it only work after you've used a HM or haven't you got that far yet? For a running system you could probably find a running tutorial at one of the big RMXP forums/sites.
So far i havn't done that part yet currently its just a switch and i'm glad you like it :D
You could use the running sys script but modify it to work with a different input key for the bike.
Ok i will look for that Daegon Thanks :D
Cya Dudes
Rm2k3guy

[Avatar]

If you're gonna use a running system tutorial you have to be aware that you'll have to put conditional branches in it to check if you're a boy or a girl, (if you have a gender selection in the game) It's the same deal with the bicycle.

[Rm2k3Guy]

If you're gonna use a running system tutorial you have to be aware that you'll have to put conditional branches in it to check if you're a boy or a girl, (if you have a gender selection in the game) It's the same deal with the bicycle.
Yea but i don't think i will have a gender selection
I have just started coding a real estate system but how would it be better buying the house from a establishment or visiting the houses to buy them i like the idea of visiting a centre and they take you their

[Dawson]

There's no need to double post within the space of an hour, you could've just editted your first post.

I like the first idea better, just going into a house and buying it there. The other one seems like too much hassle.

[Rm2k3Guy]

Sorry about that i put the posts together

[Rm2k3Guy]

Sorry for the double post but 3 new Pokemon !!!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Popum.png
The all new and improved Popum :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Spicicle.png
Spicicle the ic/water starter
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/*****le.png
*****le
Enjoy XD

[Dawson]

The first one looks a little blurry and stretched. I love the other two though, nice shading on them. great job!

[sketch]

Nice monsters!Awesome!I may be able to help on some if you want?

[Omega Latios]

SUPER NICE JOB! i like them much can i help you with sprites?

[PKMN_Sage]

Sprites look pretty cool. I really like the last one. I can see that the first one is a modified Bellossum, but I can't tell where the second and third came from.

[Rm2k3Guy]

maximo made them i like them aswell :D
Update :D
Screens
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Powerplant.png
Powerplant (part of tr's plan)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/BeardeauxForest.png
Bordeaux forest
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Hoennborder.png
Hoenn border enjoy :D

[Sorye HK]

Nice in game screens, and sprites! I especially like the last 2.

[Maximo v.2]

The last was made out of regices hand and spikes and yanmas eye oh and regices leg thing

The 2nd is made out of jumpluff and regices spikes i forgot what the eyes are from

And the first was made out of bellossoms flowers and togetics head

When do I get the demo

[Rm2k3Guy]

Wow i knew i recognized them somehow :)
and heres a new city it took me all day to make including houses ect . . .
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v414/pokemonnewrevelations/Vercetticity.png
Vercetti city
:D
Cya dudes,
Rm2k3guy

[Sorye HK]

It's probably just me, but I think that there are too many flowers.

[Rm2k3Guy]

I see your point i will remove some :)

[serpenter]

looks good. cant wait for the demo.