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<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
March 1st, 2005, 05:15 PM
this is kinda old =P but i just wanted to post it again. take me to court

-Drowning in Reality/Siren-

trapped in this unreal world,
i was easily fooled by illusions of love.
hopeful visions and empty desires...
wanting to be with you and make you happy,
this is what caused me the most heartache i have ever felt
i became dependent...
my shallow joy came from seeing you happy,
and i never realized that the whole time,
i had given you more than just my love.
i had given you my soul as well...

blindly i followed you through a beautiful haze,
enchanted by sweet words and promises unkept...
in this cloud of dreams, i trailed behind you,
like the sailors of old who were allured by the voice of the sirens...
but what sounded so sweet had led me to the cliff of my fate.

i fell...
deep i plunged into a sea of sorrow and tears,
and the sadness cleared the haze from my eyes.
as i slowly drowned in the reality of it all,
with my arms outstretched, i reached for you...
but you were not there.
as i sank deeper,
the sweet song you enchanted me with flooded my mind,
and for a split second,
i thought you loved me...

Alana
March 1st, 2005, 05:22 PM
That was a really sad poem. *dabs at eyes* I hardly ever cry any more but that poem made my eyes burn. It's written very well.

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
March 1st, 2005, 05:37 PM
hey thanx ^ ^ i dunno why everyone who's read it gets all teary-eyed on me O_o;

imgonnakilllexie
March 1st, 2005, 05:38 PM
*sobs* I loved it! You've inspired me!

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
March 1st, 2005, 05:39 PM
heh ^ ^ thanx [pokes] inspiration is always good, use it while you still have it and write something good ^ ^

Dignity
March 1st, 2005, 05:54 PM
OMGZ.... ;_; *tear* so sad... Matt-kun... so good... omgz... xD;; ~origin

<[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>
March 2nd, 2005, 05:04 AM
XD omg i'm gettting a kick out of this [pokes julia] that is old, i don't feel that way anymore okay?