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oni flygon
March 3rd, 2005, 05:14 PM
I posted this in my poetry thread but since it didn't get enough attention, I don't think a lot of people read this poem. I wrote this poem at Valentine's Day ... so... yeah... XD

Love Is A Mystery

Love is a very mysterious thing
It can be this warm feeling inside
A feeling of longing or happiness
Or something that is so hard to hide

Love can be the sun whereas it shines
Down at two lovers sitting together
They would be holding each others hands
Today under such a fine weather

Love can also be the rhymes in this poem
Its every word escaping my lips
Sweet like nectar from a beautiful flower
Soft like cotton through my fingertips

Love can be the weight of a human heart
Its the guide that leads my soul to her
Love can be anything in this world
Its also the thing that makes my spirit stir

Love can bring down the strongest man ever
It can bind that man in loves strong chains
Love can make that man weak and powerless
But it can also take away his pains

And yet love can also be so cold and so cruel
When one longs for someone, they become loves fool
What exactly is love? One might question
Is it a feeling or is it an obsession?

When these questions are left unanswered
We could only ask ourselves: What is love?
To me, love is a very vast mystery
It could be or could not be the things above

Kyosuke
March 3rd, 2005, 06:02 PM
You really told a excellent summary of what "love" can be and what it does to people when they are caught in its web XD.

"What exactly is love? One might question
Is it a feeling or is it an obsession?"

Thats a good question that I think will never be answered...

imgonnakilllexie
March 3rd, 2005, 07:24 PM
Great job on defining love![you did so good I'll give you rep.]

oni flygon
March 3rd, 2005, 09:25 PM
Thanks for the comment guys! X3
I gladly appreciate your comments! ^__^

Khaos Angel
March 6th, 2005, 01:05 AM
Wow. Like LiquidThunder stated you did a good job on defining love's many ways and what it can do to people. It's a very nicely done work of litatuary(probably not a real word. XD) art. I like it very much. And like Liquid said the question asked may never be awnsered.

Lion Heart
March 6th, 2005, 02:11 AM
That was cool.

I actually read the enire thing.

Made me think: "Well, that pretty much wraps it up"