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March 4th, 2005, 12:51 PM
Maybe everything I've thought so far was true, maybe not...
And although I don't know the meaning of this word anymore:
Love always brings me back to you..
You opened a door in me, something meant to stay sealed, or so i thought...
Knowing that I can't be with you anymore hurts more than you can believe;
All I want now is you...please understand

I have been dying every day since you left...
Slowly suffocating in an abyss of sorrow without you...
Today is no different...monotonous and painful, a never-ending cycle
In the back of my mind, on the verge of oblivion is where you dwell
Let your heart lead you back to me; I hope that it will.
Life without you here is not life at all...

Looking back on all the experiences we had together,
Only if i could relive each one. No matter how trivial they may have seemed,
Valuable they've become, now that you're not here...
Every moment with you was special. Priceless.

Yet, although I am lost without you, I am glad to have known you at all.
Of everyone i've met, you left the biggest impression..
Under this moonlit sky, I think of you tonight, as the stars fall from the heavens.
Bathing here in the light of the moon,
We are purified by our sins.
Our anger has been swept away,
Scattered with the winds.
Stars shining in the moonlit sky,
An awe-inspiring oblivion.

Lying here with you, my love,
Everything comes to naught.
In this silver light we rest in,
I have forgotten why we fought.
These stars, our feelings, our destiny,
Let's not forget what we've been taught.

Shadows cast across your face,
Luna's light within your eyes,
Broken chains of memories
Reforged as figures in the sky
You gaze at me, are you enchanted?
Tell me what's running through your mind...

Dark Light Angel
March 4th, 2005, 1:27 PM
I blame you for making me read those which as a result made me get on just to comment on them. XD

The first poem is rather sad and lonely but most lovely and beautiful. I believe I like it very much.

The second is very lovely as well though I haven't much to say on it.

All in all they're both very well done. As a result I must rate them both 10/10.

P.S. You made me read those on purpose! XD

March 4th, 2005, 2:12 PM
I love this poem, It really speaks to the heart!! Great job keep it up!

March 4th, 2005, 2:21 PM
XD thanks both of you ^ ^
btw i'mgonnakillexie, which one? there are two XD

Dark Light Angel
March 4th, 2005, 2:47 PM
No problemo, Matt. I couldn't read your work and not comment. XD

March 4th, 2005, 2:56 PM
No problemo, Matt. I couldn't read your work and not comment. XD
that's nice to say ^///^ thanx a lot

March 4th, 2005, 3:26 PM
I like them both???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

March 5th, 2005, 7:13 AM
lol thanks then for reading them at all ^^

Khaos Angel
March 5th, 2005, 4:13 PM
I have t comment on them again. XD I like them too much not too. actually the one I really like is the first one. Like I said before, it's very sad but it's beauty makes me want to read it over and over. I can't help but read it once more when I notice it in your signature where you go that I go. Me and my stupid likeness for great poetry. Oh well, I won't consider my time reading it over and over wasted, instead I'll consider it well spent. Once again, billiant poems by a more so brilliant poet.

March 5th, 2005, 6:52 PM
thankz again, your support means a lot to me..

March 5th, 2005, 9:24 PM
Sweetie, I wish I had more hands...so I can give them 4 thumbs down. XD J/K sweetie. I like them both, but I like the first one more, since I can kinda reflect on it. ^^; Great job sweetie! ^0^

Lion Heart
March 5th, 2005, 9:28 PM
First one not bad, I couldn't read the second one.

I can't relate personally to then though :(

Ms.Allison Goldfrapp
March 5th, 2005, 9:30 PM
The first one is so pretty *tear* The second one, too annoying, as in the color! Though the subject of love is cliche for the first one, so i don't like it that much.

March 6th, 2005, 8:14 AM
what skin are you using? the second one is better in midnight misty, it's hard to see in anything else...no really gets the first one...i mean what's really in it, but i like it better that way...