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Jeremy
March 5th, 2005, 09:46 PM
Hey sweeties, I made this poem because I was bored...Again. XD Umm, enjoy? ^^;

~You Don't Know Me~

When you look into my eyes, what do you see?
Just some teenager trying to be free
But I'm not a teenager and I'll never would
I'm not even ready to face adulthood
I'm just some child stuck in a adolesant's body
I'm not ready to love, hate, or hurt anybody
I just try to live my life day by day
What the heck do you think I'm gay?!
Look, sweetie, you ain't got the right to judge
So don't mess with fighter who holds a grudge
I'm stuck in my own fantasy little land
Just playing games and doing things that I can
Sometimes think intellectually in the right time
Sometimes I act like I'm out of my mind
Some people say I'm a crazy fool
Some people say I'm cute and cool
Others say I'm sensative and sweet
Others say I'm mean and weak
But words are just words, and they can't hurt me
Just don't get my family involved and you'll see
Not only I have wisdom and mind
I can also whoop your lil behind
So I don't care how bad you think of me
Cause brother...You don't know me.

Hehehe, that was awful. XD

Khaos Angel
March 6th, 2005, 12:53 AM
o.o It was kind abad at some parts like "Not only I have wisdom and mind, I can also whoop your lil behind" where it seems to skip from one way to another but besides that it's pretty nice, Jeremy.

FaerieEsqueThing
March 6th, 2005, 09:26 AM
coughcough Well we all know who this poem is for. I don't even have to say it. ~.^ It was okay, but it sorta reminded me of my poem at some points.