Pokemon White

[Sion]

( I'm the new kid, I come from booda sack, just like Jeff.. So he already knows about this instakent..)

I started Making my Pokemon game a few days ago, and its going by great, but now developement has halted because i need a battle system.. but heres a few shots, and the main story at the bottom.... :P

http://img239.exs.cx/img239/4889/comingofage6qy.png
Tora, the main character can talk in this installment....

http://img239.exs.cx/img239/1664/comtownoutskirts0cj.png
Outside of your house....

http://img212.exs.cx/img212/9118/tocomtown1xw.png
The road to Com Town... very short.

http://img12.exs.cx/img12/5511/linux3ze.png
Upon tlaking to Linux he brings up that one of Tora's long lost freinds Zack has returned to the town from 4 years in Sylverin City... Zack has the same dream as Tora, and unlike in the other games where the rival is mean, ugly, and only wants strong pokemon, Zack likes ALL pokemon and is so nice, it'll pain you to fight him... The two share some real moments in the game.....

http://img218.exs.cx/img218/6212/comtown2ti.png
Another quick look at Com City road... I got the idea for this city, from Goldenrod in Silver and gold....

http://img218.exs.cx/img218/8118/comtowncheckpoint9xy.png

Theres a Checkpoint in Com Town.. its so cool how they pull teh lever and the passage is clearing it makes a sound that really sounds like the bars opening! ^_^

http://img218.exs.cx/img218/7363/hey4xx.png
Oh yeah, what Tora's doing is meeting Prof Birley, because he has an errand for him to run........

http://img124.exs.cx/img124/3919/withzack5dq.png
This boy tells of how Zack and Tora were as kids.. Once they matured they became even more intrested in Pokemon...

http://img124.exs.cx/img124/5770/cutscene12xs.png
REUNITED, Zack gives insite on wheres hes been and what he's learned,
Birley tho, has other plans...

http://img124.exs.cx/img124/2641/cutscene22pg.png
Pretty Much, Birley, Has foudn a new pokemon named Zapchu, who changes into a new pokemon according to what th etrainer does.. He sends
both boys to Plumb Grove to let another professor look at it...

http://img82.exs.cx/img82/1984/withzack5jf.th.png
With Zack on your team for while, your freinds start to pay attention...

http://img82.exs.cx/img82/9296/swarning5pf.png
Lucy, A young gril tries to persuade to stay in town and not to leave
for the errand...

http://img82.exs.cx/img82/4139/comeback1ru.png
it doesnt work...........

Story: On the continent of Killik Professor Birley, makes an outstanding discovery, a pokemon named Zapchu, holds a very awesome power, to change its element according to the masters actions... Two young soon to be Pokemon trainers take him to a near by town to be examined on the way back they are Pilfered by a masked man... He seemed to be from an organization called Team Dark... Team Dark was much more vicious than Magma and Aqua Combined.. They wanted to make a clone of Zapchu and make one light and dark, and utilize both strengths.. To control every continent and you could say rule the world... but that wasnt quite it.. They wanted to ressurect a fabled pokemon so strong it could erase the world... Team Dark wants to begin a new world... Started by their own kind... But Zack and Tora will stop them! first they must get all of the badges from all 4 continents, then after defeating the Eite Four, form the Team knows as Team Light to thwart Team Dark, with the help of Team Aqua And Magma, this will be a pokemon war! and experience! tha may leave the poke world to ashes!!! :lol:

[Dawson]

It's a good start, is this your first Pokemon fangame? The first thing I noticed was that there are quite a few tile errors, you should fix them first. And there is some stuff that looks out of place. The maps, overall, are quite good though.

[Peekimon]

Story's good but, I suggest that you improve big time on your mapping skills.
Errors and such:
Map 1:
1 The Dish Cabinet and Refridgerator needs to be aligned to the wall.
2 The wall doesn't quite look like a wall.
3 You need to fix the stairs
4 The mat to go out isn't quite pokemon styled. The room's too big.
5 The TV and book case needs to be aligned to the wall

Map 2:
1 The trees don't look great.
2 Needs more filling in.
3 Fix the fence.

Map 3
1 Needs filling in.

Map 4:
1 The trees
2 The fence is going over the tree bush
3 The Lamp Post to the right is over the fence.
4 There is a strange fence object underneath the lamp post.

Map 5:
1 Uhh, where's the door of the green house?
2 The Fence needs ends

Map 6:
1 The table needs fixing

Map 7:
1 The flowers look strange on that terrain.

Map 8:
1 Same as Map 7

Map 9 & 10
1 The book cases needs to be joined and the table needs to be a bit fixed.

Map 11 & 12:
1 Fence needs fixing, the wooden one
2 Trees.

I didn't insult you or what, I just gave you information on what needs fixing.
Your spelling's OK. Keep up the good work :)

[Sion]

thanks alot! I appreciate this! Woah replies already! ^_^
( I've since fixed trees...) u'll see in the new screens i've taken just too lazy to put em on now...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/PokemonWhiteBanner.bmp

[DarknessMonkey]

It looks good, are you making it in RMXP?

[Sion]

yep... i luv that maker! and i have some screenshots too I'll post em in one minute...

[Sion]

New Screens!
And fixed Trees!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/PokemonWhiteBanner.bmp
title screen

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Route12.png
the checkpoint that seperates Com Town from Plumb Grove.....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/PlumbGrove.png
Plumb Grove, well a little of it.. couldnt capture the whole town.. so i went in the middle..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/PokemonCenter1.png
the pokemon Center...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/PokeMart.png
The pokemon mart.. looks just like the real one...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Prof.png
Making it to Prof Chase's, after a breif introduction.. Chase tells you to go outside and wait in town...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Ema.png
You cant leave either side of the town... so u decide to talk to Ema..
A girl that has a suprising destiny similar to yours...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/2rivals.png
Ema reveals that she is going to get a pokemon too.. Is Ema going to be another opponent!!?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Professors.png
After talking with Ema, The two boys wait at the pokemon center...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Red.png
Tora exlpains to Zack that he wants to one day go to Pallet and defeat Red.. ( Ash Ketchum )

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Cloned.png
Sooner or later Chase returns and explains all this mathematical stuff.. He also gives Zapchu back...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/.png
Tora loses the Ex ball... a member of the Dark Team has stolen it..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/TheExBall.png
thats it so far, my good freind Zam is making more new pokemon

[Seto7Kaiba]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/TheExBall.png
thats it so far, my good freind Zam is making more new pokemon
Looks nice. Are you missing a letter in that?

[Dawson]

Nice screens, but again there are still some tile errors. Fix them and they'll look a lot better.

[Sion]

tile errors? where? and yeah a " T " is missing i was worried about that when i looked em over.. ^_^

[Dawson]

The Pokemon Center and Mart have a wrong tile in the bottom right corner. And the paths don't like right where parts are straight edged and the other parts aren't. The Pokemon Center should be smaller as well.

[Sion]

lol, i cant figure out what tile! ...........

[Goatman56]

Nice this seems like an interesting game :D.

[Sion]

thank you, I appreciate these words... Its what keeps me going, working and modifying all i can to make this game as enjoyable as possible.. this pokemn game has more of a story to it han be a pokemon master there are many twists, and cut- scenes that change what you though was going to happen, lots of irony and things.. that make the game enjoyable, I'm aiming high with this title..

[Dawson]

I've circled the areas where the wrong tiles have been used:

[Sion]

thank you soo much phoenix!! but some of them i cant fix because the ends arent in the chipset.. and the sprite converter thing isnt working for me....

[Sion]

sorry for double post...



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Sapeon.png
Scapeon

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Psycrow.png
PsyCrow, a psychic legendary bird.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/DrillDon.png
DrillDon, said to be the brother od Rydon.. Has drills on each arm

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Creel.png
Creel, a robotic water pokemon...

All these were done my spriter... ^_^ enjoy!

[Dawson]

The first and fourth sprites are awesome! You should edit PsyCrow a bit though so it doesn't look like a recolored Articuno.

[Sorye HK]

I love the 3rd and 4th. The 4th reminds me of the teenage mutant hero turtles.

[Sion]

thanks and i will! thanks guys!!! all i need now is a battle system and menu script... if someone can assist.... I'll have many more pokemon coming!!

[Sion]

Fixed each and every map according to Peekimons refrence and Phoenix's!! Thank you all!

More Pokemon!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Squil.png
Squil

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Rukario.bmp
Rukario ( not mine...)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Ekmonchan.png
Ekachan

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Marekat.png
Marekat

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Guilla.png
Guilla

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Garadon.png
Garadon


Hope u like!

[Sorye HK]

I like the cute little pokemon on the top a lot.

[Sion]

thats Squil a fire - Normal type pokemon!

[Sion]

Ah i'm sorry i double clicked Submit and it made to messages...... umm if i may ask at this time.. since its open, i'm in need of beta testers! :nervous: eh heh.... * sweats because of double post...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Lonix.png
Lonix

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Tryanny.png
Tryanny...

This is a fusion.. in the game you meet a man that tells you if u get a Larvitar and Onix that he can fuse them together... u get a Lonix it wwill eventually evolve into a Tryanny!!!

The follownig are all from a noble spriter "Butterfree A.K.A. Dragonfree",


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Gryph.png
Gryph

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Ligareon.png
Ligareon

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Liros.png
Liros

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Tiebone.png
Tiebone ( The pokemon under the skull )

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Saint.png
Saint

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Sero.png
Sero

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Scrattata.png
Scrattata

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Narutochan.png
Narutochan ( Female Hitmonchan)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Seraphim.png
Seraphim

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Scaleloc.png
Scaleloc ( Evloves into Seraphim)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Barxa.png
Barxa ( Imil's Poochyena )

The Pokemon of Destruction! Final Boss!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/DeathAngel.png

Death Angel ( This is the pokemon, that will rise if Team Dark is able to use both Zapchu's... it will result in his REBIRTH... it is said he was defeated by a pokemon trainer 1000 yrs ago, and split into two entities one was Groudon, the other, the same evil death angel!! :rambo:

thats all the sprites i'll show for a long while.... For now i need help with everything else! ;)

[Maximo v.2]

Thnaks sion im gonna use some of those pokemon (you sent me the pm) i rerally like gryph

[Sion]

:P Thanks for all your encouraging words!!!

[Peekimon]

Great, Keep up the good work! I suggest that your mapping skills need to be improved. But, don't stop there!
Constructive Critiscism (or whatever it's called XD)
Map 1 & 11 & 12:
1 The ledges need to have ends
2 The Thin trees need to have a top.

Maps 2 & 6 & 7:
Phoenix spotted the errors already (I think)

Maps 3 & 8 & 9:
1 Pokecenter needs to be smaller
2 The tile to the right of the Left Table is kinda wrong.
3 Books should somehow be aligned on the wall

MAp 4:
1 Reduce the size.
2 What's the brownish thing above the counter?
3 The refridgerator (spelling?) should be aligned to the wall.

Once again, keep up the good work and you need to improve on your mapping skills. :)

[Sion]

Thanks thoes are the next few things I'll fix!

[Mystic]

The game looks solid and I like how it looks. I've got to get this game when you're done with it. Great job so far and good luck.

By the way, cool Seed from Suikoden 2 avatar.

[Sion]

Thanks!! I've had soo many requests for beta testing in the last 10 mins!! ^)^

[SparkyThePikachu]

nice! where do ya get the program u used?

[PKMN_Sage]

I've circled the areas where the wrong tiles have been used:

The grass surrounding the flowers seem to be of a different shade of green.

Sion, I really like some of those custom Pokemon! Pretty cool stuff man! If you need anymore testers, you can put me down on the list. If not, I'm more than willing to wait with everyone else. :)

[Sion]

ok cool! I'll ponder on how many more testers i'll need for the next week or so... and I"m currently in need of any sprites whatsoever! well what i really need are Magma and Aqua sprites.....

[Dawson]

Here's my first post in the resource thread. It has, I think, every trainer sprite from Ru/Su and Fr/Lg: Sprites (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=778259&postcount=2). I hope these help.

[Sion]

Thanks!!! they did!! thank you Phoenix!!!

[Sion]

A few pics of the battle system i decide not to use backs... plus i like seeing the front of the pokemon anyway....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Battle1.png


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Battle2.png


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Battle4.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Battle5.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/CBS.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Evilinitsmidst.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/MyError.png
My error i have for the menu script Peekimon gave me.. trying to get it to work...

New Pokemon ( I couldnt resist posting more! I'm a goldmine!)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Wiedth.png
Wideth

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Zentaka.png
Zentaka

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Lucrosse.png
Lucrosse
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Petita.png
Petita

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Norota.png
Norota

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Meerka.png
Meerka

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Fowldry.png
Fowldry

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokemon%20White%20Shots/Florenta.png
Florenta

Hope you like these pictures!

[Dawson]

Why do the sprites in the battle system look so small? The first building screenshot is way too empty, either make the room smaller or add alot of furniture.

I like most of those new Pokemon sprites, they're pretty cool!

[Matt]

Without backs sprites and small sprite those battle system looks bad :(
Sorry but i dont like your BS:(.I think you should use backs and bigger sprites.:)

Thanks Matt;)

[DarknessMonkey]

Where does he get bigger sprites?

Oh & you can't really make a room look the best because most of the time everything you find in the normal games isn't enough in RPGMaker.

Looks good Sion!

[Neo-Dragon]

your mapping needs a bit of improvement, i suggest making inner maps (for inside of houses) alot smaller.
The battle system doesn't look that good because of the no backsprite/small sprites. But i'm sure you will be able to improve on that.
Also, y is the hero sprites the one of him fishing (in the last set of screens you posted) ?

[rubyrulez]

Yeah, I do agree with everyone else. Sorry, but the small sprites in the CBS don't work for me. Maybe you can check around the resources thread for bigger sprites. If you can't find any you can ask in the help thread. Anyway, good luck!

[Avatar]

There are no bigger sprites, you have to resize them yourself.

As for the Battle system, besides the fact that the sprites are small and that the status bars look stretched, it looks good so far (might want to change the stats display so it's loaded onto the sprite bar though)

Your insides look empty, either add some more stuff or make the rooms smaller.
And why is the guy poiting his fishing rod at the other person?

[Dawson]

That's a great way to discourage someone from continuing the game. You guys could at least try to find something positive to say too.

[Avatar]

I have to agree with Phoenix here, some of your posts are really discouraging.
If you happen to find my post discouraging too, then I apologize as that wasn't the reason I posted in the first place.

EDIT: As for the sprites being too small, here's an example of the size it should be.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v242/DarkChronic/bulbasaur.png

[Peekimon]

Is Zentaka, Norota and Florenta, like the Eevee Evolutions?
IE, Fire stone on a basic pokemon would turn into Florenta.

And, I've seen that you fixed the tables in the last screen with the ??? Guy (Didn't say Magma Grunt, because it isn't, it's a team in your game, right? Team Light? Or Dark?)
To tell you the truth, the map is MUCH Better!!!
Keep up the good work!

[Blizzy]

good to see your using my menu :P
(i see it because of the error)

to fix it:
the menu runs by 3 switches, you'll need to put 1 of the switches on!
(switch 1, 2, 3)
1 = small ("standart" menu)
2 = medium (+pkmn)
3 - full (+pkmn + dex)
hope this explains a bit ;)

**note**
if switch 1 = on, 2 and 3 needs to be off!
if switch 2 = on, 1 and 3 needs to be off!
if switch 3 = on, 1 and 2 needs to be off!

[Peekimon]

I think I know what happened if it's not switches:
In Window_Command:
Find this:
class Window_Command < Window_Selectable
And add this under it:
attr_reader :commands

Your menu should work now. Hope I helped. :)

[Sion]

th-thanks guys..... I dont expect everyone to like my game... and if you dont like it, theres a bunch of other games that surpass mine.... I geuss this game isnt for everyone... So... Yeah... Anyway thanks for thoes who like my game and thank you Peekimon and Virtual I'll try fixing the menu...


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/LiteandRain.png

A cutscene of two warriors that you may cross on your journey, ones an abandoned Pokemon Trainer, the other is a ExTeam Dark member...
Until you know their names, they are addressed by, Blonde Haired Boy, and Dark Figment. ;)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/LiteEnlarged.png

The Blond Haired Boys Trainer loo.. did it myself!! ^_^

[Sion]

SELECTION PHOTOS
___________________

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Meerka.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Arca.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Crill.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Zack*****.png
I'm a big Fire pokemon Fan! So i picked Arca! Making Zack Pick Crill...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/ZackBattle.png
The Battle! This really made my day! making the selection system and the awesome battle!!! Fighting with Zack is fun!

[Sion]

WAIT!!? IS THERE ANOTHER POKEMON WHITE!!!? oh no.....

[Peekimon]

You shouldn't triple post...
And in the lab,
there isn't any wall?
And the box around the pokemon needs to be better. (Graphically.)

[Sion]

****..... just when i thot i was doing good.......... ok thanks Peekimon! I'll try to improve...

[Peekimon]

Did I offend you?
Sorry, if I did.
And, btw, I like the Pokémon sprites!!

[Draik]

This game is really interesting! The sprites are small true, but the rest is very good!

[Matt]

I think Pokemon White is already use by Mena... So plz change the name of your game :)

Thanks Matt;)

[Sion]

AWWW!!!!! ****............ No Fair!!! no you didnt offend me i think I'm just tired its 4 in the morning I've been up al night working... and now i gotta change my name...... hmph... ;)


EDIT: I'm not changing my name.... ^_^ I want to have a fair chance....
I'll be up against Mena's Pokemon White.... To see who will be able to own the title......

[Peekimon]

Sorry, but, I didn't see the Dark Figment shot, It's very interesting and I want to see more!!!!!!

[Matt]

Sorry but mena's pokemon white is start make a lot before you started :( .
i think you have to change the name no Mena :(

Thanks Matt;)

[Esai]

Like DM Said on my Thread, these games arent exactly copyrighted so two people can share the same name if they want, let Mena and Sion decide about this though!

This Game looks promising keep it up :)

[Sion]

correct, I will contact Mena! Dont worry about it Matt.... I've got this... ^_^
I dont give up easy....

[Sion]

Man.... Sorry guys, I lost this thread awhile ago... I've been working ever since... But6 yesterday, when i tried opening my file. it said unexpected format............ And it wont work anymore.... I'll start over though, as long as i get mappers.

[the O rly? owl]

Well, only if you include stolen graphics :P

[Sion]

ummm.... Come again? What are you talking about? I'm saying that i need mappers...

[Sceptile_Master]

If you need a battle system I'll PM you with update on how mine is going if you want.

[the O rly? owl]

Sceptile Master, I would like to have a Battle system if is for RMXP. Thanks :)

[Sceptile_Master]

It should work for both rmxp and rm2k3. The very first version of it can be found at

http://www.filecloud.com/files/file.php?user_file_id=29653

it is soooo beta though and should not be attempted to be copied yet but it will be publically released once it is done.

[the O rly? owl]

Sceptile Master, is that for RMXP? Please tell me.

[Sion]

That sounds great Sceptile! I'ma check it out now.

[Datriot]

Hey, this game is looking good, keep up the good work, if it's your first game, you're bound to make some tile errors, I did, also, you're new Pokemon look awesome.

[Sceptile_Master]

It should work for both rmxp and rm2k3.

I said it would also work for rmxp you would need to double everythings size though.

[the O rly? owl]

Ah, thanks for telling me, Sceptile Master, I will look into it anytime soon.

[Dream Illusionist]

Ohhh... I gotta check that!


Oh, and Sion, you'll have to start EVERYTHING again, or do you still have some stuff done?

[the O rly? owl]

Sion is starting the whole project all over again but I think he still got the resources.

[Dream Illusionist]

Ok. Just plain curiosity:P.

PS- Cave done.

[Datriot]

Oy.....I hate when that happens, I've had to remake my games because they've bodges loads of times, it gets VERY annoying.

[Jeff_PKLight]

lol :D Well, it seems people are starting to help you Sion. Good luck with starting your game again!

[Sion]

Well, I actually found a copy of my game I made, The only things its missing is the pokemon school so far. But I still wanna fix up everything... I may release a lil demo to show people what the games like. Still, anyone wishing to help thank you so much!

[Peekimon]

That sounds great! I can't wait for the demo to be released!

[Sion]

Haha Thanks! But... I dont have RPG Maker XP anymore. I restored my computer yesterday and didnt back up my rpgmxp program.. so now i have to find it...... wich will take ages... searches on google never work...

[metabee14]

Wow, you had some nice screens there Sion.
If you still need some help with something just contact me, but just to tell you I'm not very good with the scripting and such (hell, I really sucks at them XD) but if I can be of any assistance you know were to find me.

(Hmmm... first time I ever replied with an anwser like this, but it sure feels good)

[Sion]

Wow, Thanks alot Metabee! You guys are awesome!

[harshboy]

Well, if i'm known for 1 thing it's mapping. U said u needed a mapper? I'll start making maps, just tell me what tileset to use and i'll start right away! and Jeff, i finished fixing the demo you sent me. I'm Harshboy.

[Jeff_PKLight]

Offtopic: lol *stares at Harsh's boy avatar*. Did you make that? :D

Ontopic: Sion, hope you do well! :)

[Sion]

Great!!! And Jeff, I'ma find a way to help you with PKlight. I jus gotta find somthing I'm good at....

[Sion]

Sorry to double post, but now I think my mapping skills have gotten better... I've revamped most of my inside houses in the begining of the game...


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/TorasRoom.png

Toras Room REVAMPED!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Downstairs.png

Downstairs REVAMPED!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/TheLab.png

Prof. Birley's Laboratory REVAMPED!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/ZacksHome.png

Birley and Zacks Home REVAMPED!!!


I'll be doing even more " Remodeling " Along with all my new mappers help!
I'm still accepting jobs, I'ma need all the help i can get... Noe I'ma attempt a item system...

[Prof Plum]

Looks quite good, but that space looks like it could be filled up quite a bit.

[Datriot]

Yeah, maybe you should make the buildings smaller.
But you have improved your mapping than previously before.:) Kepp it up!

[Sion]

Thanks! I appreciate that! I checked out Illusion myself... And it seems pretty good!
way better than mines going... It has a battle system and all that stuff!
Also, I'm gonna need a Title For Pokemon White.... It has to have
Tora, Zack, and Ema ( The girl starter of Firered. ) in the front.

[Sceptile_Master]

Check out Jeff and peekimons tuts on map design, they are pretty good.

[Adam_148]

So this is why Jeff hasn't been on his own thread today, I wanted to show him something, before anyone asks I'm not Polish

[Sion]

Well, that was pretty off topic.... Anyways, Thanks to Burned Soul, I have a Bag system and menu system!! ^_^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Menu.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Bag.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Bagkey.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/BagPoke.png

[DarkPegasus]

You should remove the transparency for the words,well actually pics(Key items...)

[Adam_148]

Well, that was pretty off topic.... Anyways, Thanks to Burned Soul, I have a Bag system and menu system!! ^_^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Menu.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Bag.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Bagkey.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/BagPoke.png
Sion I was looking for Jeff I wanted to show him something, you've seen it, it's that Mewthree, and Sprite issue,anyway... ontopic: great game, keep going.

[Sion]

Thanks, I appreciate that....

[Datriot]

Yeah, I agree, it's looking really good, if you need any help just PM me.:)

[Sion]

Thanks alot!!! I will! ^_^

[DarkDoom3000]

Nice hope your item system goes well :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D

[Sion]

Its doing pretty good, It works at the least.... ^_^

[Sion]

Alrighty I got as far as I could right now... I'ma need the picture from Ruby/Sapphire when ur able to pic the poke'ball you want to have as ur starter.... Until I get it though I'm stuck.. lol

And also, Mappers, a Need a 3 Map Forest.... :rambo:

[Datriot]

OKay, I have the bag graphics, but, eh....it's a different colour...

[Sion]

Thats Fine... Thanks!! Now I just need the Poke'balls and I'm set...

[Sion]

New Map Revamp!!!!

Route 3!!! Done by the renowned Jeff!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v660/Jeff_PKLight/sion.png

[Sceptile_Master]

Big improvments on that map I must say that you are getting there. Take out the plant pots though as they don't look natural and the place isn't man made. unless you put a shop there or something. Then it would make sense. Also is the soil in the corner there for any specific reason.

[DarkDoom3000]

cool map
keep it up :)...................................................:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

[Sion]

No the soil isnt there for any reason really.... By the way... This map was done by JEFF for the game... I wish I could map that good... ^_^

[Datriot]

Yeah, me too, anyway, have you got any more screenies to show us?

[Dream Illusionist]

Got a maze inside the cave now, Sion. I'll post later in a map screenshot.

[Sion]

Yup very soon, Tonight I'll have my CBS inplemented, and some cave and forest maps done from my mappers... Just hold on a bit.. I made some forest maps but i wanna see if my mappers did a better job.. I may release a demo tonight or tomorrow since progress is doing great...

[Sceptile_Master]

Hope your CBS goes OK. I need to start working on mine again. Luckily that's possible due to my last exam just finished. Yeah I've completed school. Woohoo. Anyways keep up the good work.

[Sion]

Thanks, Yeah good luck with ur battle system... It takes work but it'll come out great in the end. ^_^

[Sceptile_Master]

Yeah I wish you good luck in implementing yours. What's it like? Oh and you might need to take the break line out after your first IMG tag in your sig. Your banner will work then.

[Jeff_PKLight]

Good luck with your CBS! Hope all goes well. :) If you need any help, don't be afraid to PM me.

[Sion]

As a matter fo fact i do need help with one more thing... But I dont wanna sound slefish i know you have your own project going for you...

[Peekimon]

Everything's nice, I can't wait to see how the CBS is progressing, and, in the inner room map:
1) it's nice, a bit too open, and large.
2) The tileset's colors are off, and they do look kinda weird.

[Sion]

whch inner room? i posted like 4 in a row? Which one please?

[Sion]

This is how the battle system is going thus far.... It'll be done today I promise... Sorry for the wait.... :(


http://www.pokecommunity.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=23460

[Sceptile_Master]

Invalid attachment specified.

[Beefn'ChedderMan]

This is a fake game. EVERYTHING FOR IT IS STOLEN. For proof go to Pokemon Treasures to see the full proof. Here's the page *forum link editted by Dawson*

[Peekimon]

Sion, you know, the innder maps, the rooms. Oh, and Beefn'ChedderMan, I don't quite get what you mean o.O

[Chimou]

Well, I wasted 15 minutes signing up for an account, and then searching the forum for "Pokemon White". I found out that Sion is using edited Pokémon sprites other people have made.

I say, big deal. They're not anyone's sprites. If you post a sprite on the internet, expect it to be used. It's exactly the same as using the official sprites. They're not yours. You didn't make them.

You could have easily told us why here, Beefy. It would have probably taken you less time to tell us, then writing out your dumb post to tell us to go to your forum. I guess that's what you wanted though. Make people go to your forum and sign up to find out what you're talking about. Your member count goes up, but that's it. Those people will never post on your site--other than to flame you.

[emeraldslay]

This is racist! Grrrrrr! RACISIM!

[Sion]

What the hell? Someones trying to shut down my game.... isnt gonna work, hes trying to trick you into joining the site, beause I made up with all the members in the topic hes linking you too... So it makes close to any sense.... Anyways heres how the bs is coming along!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/cbsvers12.jpg

Dont hate on my game Beefn'CheddarMan...

[Superiority]

....How is it rascism MewMan?
Repost what was found to be a rascist comment,then maybe i'll say something else

[Peekimon]

Hmmm... the evil kinda looks weird. But, ir's nice ^^

[Sion]

The evil? You mean Zapchu? And thanks...

[Sion]

I Got a new Zapchu and I found a decent pic on the web that i can have someone to sprite to look like Zapchus Light evolution......

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Zapchu.gif
Zapchu

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Zaplight.jpg
Zaplight

[Datriot]

Pokemon looks kinda cool!:)
But I think I have seen that somewhere before aswell... :/
Not sure where though...

[Sion]

Yeah I found the pic... But my Spriter made the new Zapchu...

[Datriot]

Oh, I see, well, I can't wait to see more of your new Pokemon.:)

[Sion]

Well.... My Spriter just quit.... He says he has other things to be doing and all that so I'm in need of a new spriter...

[Datriot]

Oy, oh, well, I know so eone who might wanna sprite for you, his name is Tommeh Smiff, why don't you PM him and ask him if he wants to help, I'm sure he'll say yes.:)

[Sion]

awesome! I'll do that!! Thanks Datriot!

[Peekimon]

The new Zapchu is so awesome! Keep up the great work!

[Sion]

:P Thanks Peeki!!! Anyways, have got a pokemon drawer named Spazzup. And he just drew the Fire Starter pokemon! Hes a Fire/Steel Dino pokemon... He doesnt have a name yet though... I'm thinking of calling him Fuego.. ( Fire in spanish ) But i still dont have a spriter to make him with.... Can people help me with names?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Fuego.gif

[Peekimon]

Hmmm... how about Dinofyre?

[Jayje]

how's about Pyrex?
Pyr= pyro, meaning fire
Rex like in the dinosaur name.
Pyrex.

how's that?

[Sion]

I like Pyrex.... Its a pretty cool name... I may hang on to this if i dont get any better names...

[DarkDoom3000]

nice pokemon
kepp it up :)

[Tommeh Smiff]

Hello! I'm here because you PMed me, I just made a dinosaur sprite! It's a bit too big to be Pyrex but it could be an evolve (I'd have to recolour it)

http://www.ian559.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/Tom/Scratch/Fightasaur.bmp

[Chimou]

A sprite of Spazzup I made.

[Sion]

Nice Pyrex Sprite Chimou!!! Do you want to be my spriter!!!?

[Dream Illusionist]

Sorry for the long time. Been extremely busy! Well, attached is a zip file with the cave (one extra but not obrigatory map). Hope you like it, Sion!

[Jayje]

i'm pretty good at making names for stuff, so if ya want any more just show me more pics and i'll have a list of names for ya. that is if ya need 'em. ;)

[Sion]

Sorry about the long wait... But I have some treats for you guys! The battle system is 90 % done! all that needs to be done is pokemon catching which isnt gonna be present in the demo... Here are some goodies! I also have the trainer card, badges and all that in store for you all!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Pokebattle.png

The trainers do slide into position but thats kinda hard to take pictures of.. ^_^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/PokeThrow.png

The Throwing animation is also present...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/FFsonic/Bringemout.png

And of course, the battle itself... ^_^ Yeah I know, I'ma resize in a bit... :rambo:

[Sion]

I Just finished Coal Cave... The Cave that leads to Mulberry Town....

[Datriot]

Cool, the battle system looks okay, the Pokemon are a bit small but your gonna fix that, can't really think of anything else wrong with it, good work. :classic:

[pkmn-master]

Hey I was here for 2 hours since 6:22 WAITING FOR YOU TO GET BACK but I see you STILL havent gotten back. :( sry alittle too over powerd. DEEEEEEEEEp breaths :confused: :P






OH Almost forgot great job on pokemon white!!! :D

[pkmn-master]

Hey I was here for 2 hours since 6:22 WAITING FOR YOU TO GET BACK but I see you STILL havent gotten back. :( sry alittle too over powerd. DEEEEEEEEEp breaths :confused: :P






P.S. OH! Almost forgot! great job on pokemon white!!! :D and sry for acting crzy :cross-eye

[pkmn-master]

I accedentaly posted 2x now 3x I'm ssooooo sry



ps:I'm new

[Sion]

Wow, Hey well at least my gams post count went up dramatically ^_^ Thanks...

[D-jo4000]

Um Sion, I'm sorry to say this but that team dark member is horribly. I took the liberty to reshade it. I think I may consider it an improvement.

[Sion]

Thanks, Yeah it was really bad thanks so much!

[Datriot]

Yeah, that looks good!
I can't wait for more screens...ooohhh!

[Neo-Dragon]

I'm looking foward to seeing more screens shots too.

[Sion]

Thanks, My mapping has increased again!!! I wont be working on this AS much for awhile cuz of REM... rm2kdev has gotten me started with the programming... for REm so i'll screenshots up for REM soon like his maker..

[Chimou]

There are two Pokémon that I sprited for this game.

[DarkDoom3000]

whao thoes pokemon look cool

hope tghis game goes well

[Sion]

Nice Job on the Pokemon Chimou!!!

[Datriot]

yeah, that looks really cool! I think the left one is better.

[Sion]

The right one is the evolution... The first ones name is Baby and the 2nd is Sperike...

[Dawson]

Wow, it seems like a lot of game threads are attracting talented spriters to help them out lately. That's a great thing for the competition around here.
Awesome sprites, though I'd prefer to see more screenshots instead of all these new Pokemon.

[pkmn-master]

You are almost done! WoW! You (and helpers) are doing great

[Sion]

Thanks man, ^_^ lol i''m still mapping i'm not done yet... Not close even...
Plus I'm working now with rpgm2kdev on a new online game.. We'll post eventually...
Umm just disregard what I said.. You'll all see soon...

[harshboy]

Sion How do u like the map i made for u, wait nevermind i already IMed you bout that sorry bout dat. anyway good luck with ur games!!!!!!!!!!!

[pkmn-master]

Um Sion, I'm sorry to say this but that team dark member is horribly. I took the liberty to reshade it. I think I may consider it an improvement!
Sad Furret:
But wait... what about a girl? You know, for team light?
Sion:
Can you plese update somore 'cause i've been waiting for a whole 27 days!




:chinese:

[Beefn'ChedderMan]

Well, I wasted 15 minutes signing up for an account, and then searching the forum for "Pokemon White". I found out that Sion is using edited Pokémon sprites other people have made.

I say, big deal. They're not anyone's sprites. If you post a sprite on the internet, expect it to be used. It's exactly the same as using the official sprites. They're not yours. You didn't make them.

You could have easily told us why here, Beefy. It would have probably taken you less time to tell us, then writing out your dumb post to tell us to go to your forum. I guess that's what you wanted though. Make people go to your forum and sign up to find out what you're talking about. Your member count goes up, but that's it. Those people will never post on your site--other than to flame you.
Sorry for bump-
It's not my site. It's a site I go to

[Beefn'ChedderMan]

Well.... My Spriter just quit.... He says he has other things to be doing and all that so I'm in need of a new spriter...

No he didn't. You never fonud sprites for those drawings that's all. He still steals on his forum from PT.

[Sion]

I dont need Pokemon Treasures. I havent been to that forum in so long... Theres no activity. Stop starting stuff in my topic. I'll gladly talk to you in a PM. Because to me perosonaly, Anyone who simply utterly disturbs someone elses topic. Is an *Censored*.... bar-none....

[halfling2]

So, you mean by Pokemon war that you have a team on your side?

[Sion]

Oh yeah I have Team behind me at my forums... You dumbass.... My spriter made that sprite... My god your slow....

[pkmn-master]

what is with beff'n'chadder man he's gotten so weird... On Topic:nice job Sion !*whispers* best friend!