Pokemon Black

[X-Tr@um@]

Hey...
Here the game i am creating..

What is it about?

It is about [name] wanted to be the best trainer in the world. when he is about to embark on his/her journey..

Professor Oak ring [name] that his/her's mother has been kidnapped by a evil team called Team Venom..

[name] got to find his/her mother and beat the gym, elite 4.


What unique feature the game has got?

1. Around 400 Pokemon to catch.
2. 5 Regions
3. New type of pokemon: Space, Time & Machine
4. 5 new legendary pokemon
5. 30 Gym around the regions.
6. Master Trainer tower which you have to battle extremely hard pokemon,
Very difficult...
7. New pokemon as Rukiaro, Munchlax, Mewthree & Trauma

Include....

1. Custom Battle System (CBS)
2. Custom Menu System (CMS)
3. 30+ hours of gameplay (Hopefully)

Help needed on...

RGSS for CMS & CBS
Charset & Chipset.
Story Writer (I am quite not happy with the current storyline)

Tell me what ya all think?

(Sorry about having no screenshot.. I will get some when i have some..)

thank you for reading this thread..

[youngotaku]

sounds promising...nice features,althought that will take a lot of work.

[Dawson]

It all sounds pretty solid to me. I wanna get you to rethink the 5 regions and 30 Gyms though. It isn't very practical to have that many and it'll be too difficult to keep the game fun and challenging.
Good luck with it though, it sounds pretty promising!

[Blizzy]

i've already made a cms in rgss.
it's around this forum.
if you can't find it, i'll edit mine.
(because it has more features you probably don't need.)

and i think it's better to create 1 region first,
5 regions are a lot!

[X-Tr@um@]

Thanks

Do you think that 5 is too many?
i got johto, kanto and hoenn, also sevii island, orange island.
Maybe i could cut it down to 4, is that good?

Edit: @ virtual : I can't find the CMS script, could you provide it please?

[Dawson]

5 regions are too much. You're gonna find it extremely difficult to find stuff for the player to do without getting bored.

[X-Tr@um@]

Hey

Time for a update..

I decided to do 4 region, with 24 gym, to cut down bordedom throughout gameplay, thanks to people who has adviced me.

I am using rmxp for making the game..

here a title screen...

http://www.freewebs.com/teamnemesisdottk/title.bmp

I will edit the post for more screenshot...

[Peekimon]

Nice, screen, but, I suggest improving it a little...

[X-Tr@um@]

I edited my last post, it look better does it?

[Peekimon]

The Text looks much better.
I suggest that you improve the background.

[X-Tr@um@]

Does it look better, it have Rukario, one of the pokemon in the game,

[Dawson]

It looks better but the white background kinda lets it down, it's a bit too plain. The word 'Black' looks awesome though.

[Pokemon: Be in the Game!]

Dude you stole my Game title and most of my storyline, can you atleast change the title? PLEASE

[Tsukasa]

Dude you stole my Game title and most of my storyline, can you atleast change the title? PLEASE
Hey lets not be claiming title's until someone actually makes the game first and i havent seen u post any story-line in your thread so right now teh name is decided whos it is when someone makes it and the story-line is his

[X-Tr@um@]

Oh sorry, i didn't realised this... erm...
I will change it now, into Pokemon Venom
Same storyline...

I don't like arguement, i looked at his post, and he started before me, so it is qualified belongs to him.

I don't mind changing anything..
Like my mother said, soft hearted..

Sorry about that...

I edited the last post, so the final title screen is there..
Sorry bout the trobule..

[Dawson]

Dude you stole my Game title and most of my storyline, can you atleast change the title? PLEASE
If you want to get technical like that then you need to change your game's title too, Pokemon Black (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=25184&highlight=Pokemon+Black) already exists and a demo has been released. And you haven't even posted your story on PC so how can you accuse him of stealing it?

[Pokemon: Be in the Game!]

I released a demo of mine before it. Plus I was making it first.

[Dawson]

Actually the other Pokemon Black demo was released a while before you Joined PC and the author started his thread last December while yours was started in March.

[Tsukasa]

Yea so i guess me and phoenix (well me more XD) pretty much cleared it up for you besides i think u should take this to P.M. so his game thread doesnt get spammed out

[Pokemon: Be in the Game!]

Ok, my new game title shall be! Pokemon: Golden Legends!

[Sorye HK]

Well, I wish you the best of luck on your new game!

[X-Tr@um@]

Hey

I have the screenshot of the first town Kirayu Town..

http://www.freewebs.com/teamnemesisdottk/kirayutown.bmp

Please can i have contructive critism.. (Help me to improve it.)

Everything is going well, but i need RMXP charset of Proffessor Oak & his aides.. Anyone know?...

Sorry if i has broken the rules.

[Dawson]

It looks pretty good, the colors look odd though. And you shouldn't use Freewebs as a host for your images, especially .bmp's they take forever to load.

[Avatar]

The bushes you used as outline for the map looks weird, I suggest you replace them with trees.
The grass looks out of place. Try replacing some of it with different tiles, such as flowers.

Please don't save your screenshots in BMP, they take forever to load.