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Latias Lover!
April 24th, 2005, 03:41 PM
I'm new here, but I am also experienced at writing fanfics...
So... Here's the fanfic...

Two black blurs flashed. Two dark Pokemon are swiftly running through the trees...

Heads stir. A small baby Hoppip woke up to the sound of the fast Pokemon. It floated off to investigate.

"Hoppip?" The Pokemon soon got lost in a clearing of trees. Winds blew by hard, blowing the Hoppip into the air. Scared, the Pokemon tried to land, but the wind was too strong for the Pokemon to resist. The wind blew it far off the clearing and into a thick growth of trees.

"Grrr...." A deep growl came from the bushes, staring at the Hoppip floating down gently. It's red eyes glared angrily as the Hoppip invaded its territory. With one great lunge, it siezed its teeth into the Hoppip. The Hoppip was saved by the wind which blew it higher than the trees. It was a miss for the Pokemon...

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A red-white Pokemon opened its eyes for the first time to see its mother. It was a Latias who was just born seconds ago. It looked around its surroundings. Thick trees surrounded the little Pokemon and its mother. They are both in a tree branch. Suddenly, a soft rustling snapped Latias awake from her dream.

"Grrrr...." A mean growl menaced through the trees. The mother Latias angrily glanced over at the noise. A black Pokemon appeared out of the shadows. It looked like Houndoom, but much bigger and meaner. It is a Houndoom, but it had chipped horns, sharper teeth, and deep-red eyes. It seemed like the Pokemon had night-vision.

The mother Latias flew up with her daughter and they both flew through the growth as the Houndoom hungrily zipped after them. The Latias mother knew it was after her child so she whisked her daughter hidden into the bushes and led the Houndoom away from her child.

But the Houndoom was too fast for it for the Latias mother to survive. The child waited fearfully for her mother, but she never came back. More scared, it flew out of the bushes and to the sky. She had no abilities for it to hide, or protect itself from hungry Houndooms besides flying. But the Houndooms in the forest can leap 30 feet high, and that's not good. If this Latias could find a male Latios to mate with, she will be well protected. But how can this Latias find a male? Find out on Dangers Above and Below~~Part Two.

latias45
April 24th, 2005, 03:43 PM
ohh. that is soo cool make more! latias lover!

Latias Lover!
April 24th, 2005, 03:49 PM
Thanks for the compliment.

Hantsuki
April 24th, 2005, 03:57 PM
Very nice fanfict^^ especially for your age,I enjoyed it^^ *gives rep*

Latias Lover!
April 24th, 2005, 04:03 PM
Continuing on...

The baby Latias had not found a mate, but she knew she must find one--and fast. Her hunger drived her crazy and energy depleted every second she flew. Latias' knowledge of the wild grew everyday and part of her knowledge says that if she lands to find food, Houndooms will jump at her. Latias flew wearily through the air and suddenly, she saw a huge flock of Murkrow flying above her. Angry, the birds raised their talons and dove at Latias!

Luckily, it was a miss, but it was hard to believe. Latias had teleported out of the way! It was a special ability usually learned by Latis who teach themselves abilities during childhood.

The Murkrows aren't finished attacking Latias. But every time they tried to dive at Latias, she teleported. Finally, after a series of teleporting and diving, Latias began to tire out. The Murkrows saw their chance and dove at Latias one last time. But before they could strike, a Latios stood between them to protect her!

The Latios hissed and growled at the Murkrows, telling it to pick on somebody else. The Murkrows fluttered away, confused.

After the chaotic scene, the Latios helped Latias fill her hunger. The Latios picked fresh Pecha Berries for it. The berries are incredibly sweet.

Next the Latios picked out a good resting spot for Latias. Latias began to share a bond with the Latios. She had finally found a mate.

But, there are still great dangers prowling around. Both air and ground is dangerous. Could Latias and Latios help each other find a new home? Find out on The Seas with Kyogre~~Part Three.

Legolas
April 24th, 2005, 04:25 PM
Hey Digi, what are you doing?

Happy Dude
April 24th, 2005, 04:40 PM
i'm no expert on fan fics but that was sweet i can't untill untill the next few.

Keep up the great work.

HashiriyaR32
April 24th, 2005, 05:12 PM
Too many short sentences turned me off a bit. Overall, a good read so far.

Latias Lover!
April 24th, 2005, 06:50 PM
;) I am not in a mood to write now, check tommorow to see if I put some more parts in the fanfic.

obelisk-kun
April 28th, 2005, 03:22 PM
good work it is great but could use some trainers

Latias Lover!
April 28th, 2005, 03:34 PM
I am doing it on the next part