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Jesus Freak Josh
April 24th, 2005, 08:30 PM
Okay. I started a Golem ages ago and didn't touch it. Since I was bored I decided to finish it today.
I didn't want to restart so I kept going. That is why there is no energy next to the attacks. Otherwise, I would like to hear your criticism. And by criticism I mean constructive criticism.

Archuleta Shuckle
April 24th, 2005, 10:55 PM
Well, it is definitely not perfect. So you did this a long time ago? You I assume you have gotten better and read the tutorial ;)

Well, I see average problems, placemnet, cost, etc. Good effort go, and I hope you improve 5/10

Jesus Freak Josh
April 24th, 2005, 11:04 PM
Well, it is definitely not perfect. So you did this a long time ago? You I assume you have gotten better and read the tutorial ;)

Well, I see average problems, placemnet, cost, etc. Good effort go, and I hope you improve 5/10
Well I did it off memory. I didn't read the tutorial this time... ^_^;;;

Jesus Freak Josh
April 25th, 2005, 03:13 AM
Okay, I made a new one just then. It's not quite done. I'll get it finished soon. I may make a few adjustments to your comments. Although you may notice some errors. I just started screwing trying to get it perfect in the end (Stupid limited Paint).

Kijin
April 25th, 2005, 06:20 PM
The charizard is infintely better than the Golem. The Golem has a lot wrong with it (for starters- mis-sizings, wrong fonts, wrong wording). The charizard has some font fudging, the Dark Leaf is really random and seems pretty out of flavor. I think your art choice for it is tech.
Golem: best left unsaid/5
Charizard: 2.5/5

IceKitten
April 26th, 2005, 04:46 AM
What is with that Fire Leaf move XD

Jesus Freak Josh
April 26th, 2005, 05:06 AM
What is with that Fire Leaf move XD
A random move I could think of. XD

IceKitten
April 26th, 2005, 05:20 AM
Did you have Fire Red and Leaf Green in your mind at the same time? XP

Jesus Freak Josh
April 26th, 2005, 05:28 AM
Did you have Fire Red and Leaf Green in your mind at the same time? XP
No. I think it was thinking of making an attack that would do more than 50 damage and was less boring than a straight fire attack.

IceKitten
April 26th, 2005, 05:53 AM
It could have been Crunch, since it is Fire/Dark

Jesus Freak Josh
April 26th, 2005, 05:58 AM
It could have been Crunch, since it is Fire/Dark
Shut up! XD
What's wrong with Fire Leaf?

IceKitten
April 26th, 2005, 06:08 AM
Nothing but a Dark move would suit it more ^_^

Jesus Freak Josh
April 26th, 2005, 06:37 AM
Nothing but a Dark move would suit it more ^_^
Well... Uh... Woop, woop, woop, woop, woop! *scuttles off*

IceKitten
April 26th, 2005, 06:40 AM
Hmm deja-vu

Is this the part where Toto says ''Tig pwnd Batesy! XD''

Jesus Freak Josh
April 26th, 2005, 06:42 AM
Hmm deja-vu

Is this the part where Toto says ''Tig pwnd Batesy! XD''
No it's where I say "I brained my damage so I could think of anything!" XD

What Pokémon should I do next?

IceKitten
April 26th, 2005, 07:00 AM
Do Milotic! Milotic is cool!

You mean you damaged your brain?

Jesus Freak Josh
April 26th, 2005, 08:12 AM
Okay.

Damaged my brain? Ummm... Yes. How silly of me.

Archuleta Shuckle
April 26th, 2005, 10:03 PM
enough SPAM you too, stay on topic, and Batesy, I know you didn't make the Charizard sprite ¬¬

*Hint: Change the illustator*

You've gotten better, you just need to not use sprites as art for cards.

Jesus Freak Josh
April 27th, 2005, 01:51 AM
enough SPAM you too, stay on topic, and Batesy, I know you didn't make the Charizard sprite ¬¬

*Hint: Change the illustator*

You've gotten better, you just need to not use sprites as art for cards.
What? Oh right I knew I forgot something. XD When I fix a couple of things in it (If I get around to it) I'll fix that.

Actually, I only did a bit of illustration. The background was from LOGII by Atari or something...

I better remember to fix that at some point...

Syousuke
April 28th, 2005, 08:02 AM
Sigh, I wont even bother.
You are so, hopeless. End of story.