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angleslayer
May 6th, 2005, 08:38 PM
its a new comic I made! Its about a story of some people who go exploring, looking for adventure.
test episode (http://img231.echo.cx/my.php?image=pex13aq.png)

charmasuar
May 6th, 2005, 09:20 PM
hello brother hello and hello

Goatman56
May 6th, 2005, 09:42 PM
No offense but this stinks :\. First of all the white backgrounds behind the characters, got to go. Word bubbles need super improvement. The real life background makes the comic look real bad. The peoples mouth aren't even open. You need tons of improvement 0/10. I advise you read a tutorial before you make another. Cause if you make more like that no on will want to read them :\.

Pikabloo
May 6th, 2005, 09:49 PM
No offense but this stinks :\. First of all the white backgrounds behind the characters, got to go. Word bubbles need super improvement. The real life background makes the comic look real bad. The peoples mouth aren't even open. You need tons of improvement 0/10. I advise you read a tutorial before you make another. Cause if you make more like that no on will want to read them :\.
That's exactly what I was thinking. Also, they don't show emotion, for example, the part where Green saw the bear, he didn't seem scared at all. Also when he was attacked.

angleslayer
May 6th, 2005, 10:18 PM
thanks for the advice. i will make episode 1 sometime.

QFred
May 7th, 2005, 03:53 AM
Make your own sprites and remove the background of them to fix well in the pictures!!!

Draik
May 7th, 2005, 04:10 AM
Just a tip: There's a transparency button in paint or go to Image click on Draw Opache
It wasn't too good or too bad. 5/10

Esupio
May 7th, 2005, 07:10 AM
Make your own sprites and remove the background of them to fix well in the pictures!!!
You don't have to make your own sprites its fine to use sprites ripped by others aslong as you give credit to them
lemme say that sucked really bad

Shinin
May 7th, 2005, 06:29 PM
What the hell? Don't use backgrounds like that. Also, the characters aren't transparent and the text is really screwed. -1/10.