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Latias Lover!
May 7th, 2005, 08:06 AM
I couldn't find a website for backgrounds, but I found a way to make better bubbles.

PrinceOfDarkness
May 7th, 2005, 08:16 AM
its ok, just not funny, u should work on some more ;) 6/10 ~Johnny~

Feraligatr master
May 7th, 2005, 08:24 AM
aw cute go totodile!
10/10(evolve it!)

Latias Lover!
May 7th, 2005, 08:36 AM
I couldn't think of another joke. And the Totodile won't evolve for a long time.

Feraligatr master
May 7th, 2005, 08:41 AM
how about while escapeing the carvanas he finds lugia and gets aero blasted!

Latias Lover!
May 7th, 2005, 09:17 AM
I made another comic. Maybe a little funny, I don't know until you guys rate it.

Feraligatr master
May 7th, 2005, 09:21 AM
cool i made one to following the totodile using diffrent sprite and more battles :D i rate this one 8/10

Omega Latios
May 7th, 2005, 09:55 AM
Hhahahahahah!!! that's very funny comic! 10/10

Allstories
May 7th, 2005, 09:58 AM
...What the hell, guys? These comics don't even make any sense, let alone have any sort of cohesive punch-line.

Shinin
May 7th, 2005, 06:31 PM
STOP BEING OVERLY NICE, PEOPLE. If a comic sucks, don't say it's good. They'll just keep making the bad comics and we'll all die. Anyways, these comics are horrible. They're incredibly unfunny and the backgrounds are horrible. 0/10.

Goatman56
May 7th, 2005, 07:20 PM
Sorry to be mean but I have to agree. The comic is not very good. Needs alot of work and I stretch the word alot. Please read a tutorial.

Latias Lover!
May 7th, 2005, 07:59 PM
I finally found a background.

LunaticSteven
May 7th, 2005, 08:40 PM
by god ppl, ppl have different interests u kno, if u can't go with it, then get a life by god >_>
Latias Lover, I like ur sprite comics, just try using a different background like ones found in the sprite comic thing and try to make them longer and try to make them funnier ~Johnny~

Latias Lover!
May 8th, 2005, 06:45 AM
I already made a funny one. Four panels long. Heres my newest one:

NiNGi's Worst Nightmare
May 8th, 2005, 10:02 AM
First one: Meh. I've seen WAY better. One question is really bothering me: why does Ho-Oh want Totodile to dive?

Second one: Sick. That's all I have to say.

Allstories
May 8th, 2005, 11:30 AM
I already made a funny one. Four panels long. Heres my newest one:

This isn't funny at all. THERE ISN'T EVEN A PUNCHLINE, the dialogue is terrible and annoying, it doesn't make any sense, and you could at least combine them into one image. C'MON, man.

armadilloHD
May 8th, 2005, 12:10 PM
Allstories is my hero ;_;

Yes the comics suck, read a tutorial Blah blah blah. I think the majority of where your skills should come from a place with harder reviewers >>

Shinin
May 8th, 2005, 03:27 PM
The second is worse than the others. It doesn't even make sense.

Hazard7
May 8th, 2005, 03:46 PM
^This guy being a prick and post every topic "It doesn't even make sense."!
Why don't you leave this topic and shut your mouth because you have no respect mate.

Fox♠
May 10th, 2005, 07:54 AM
STOP BEING OVERLY NICE, PEOPLE. If a comic sucks, don't say it's good. They'll just keep making the bad comics and we'll all die. Anyways, these comics are horrible. They're incredibly unfunny and the backgrounds are horrible. 0/10.
STOP BEING OVERLY MEAN SHININ...when will you get it in to your heads that a comic isn't about BG's?.....my dear god...shinin is right bout the humour but please stop being so *****y you silly child and try and be nice...I take your crap flames in my topic cuz of I don't care,,,but this guy seems to...just stop flaming everything you grinch

armadilloHD
May 10th, 2005, 12:09 PM
STOP BEING OVERLY STUPID PEOPLE. Just because they don't want a bad grade doesnt mean we can't give it to them. Anyway, yes it sucks, comics are based around graphics. Without graphics your comic sucks, end of story. Why? Because no on is going to read a comic with crappy graphics. Same with video games. It could have the perfect story and character development, but if it's 8 bit in this day and age, it fails, they wasted money, boo.

Rhykasho
May 10th, 2005, 12:12 PM
I already made a funny one. Four panels long. Heres my newest one:

Well its better then your other ones but still, u need to work on your plot and your jokes!!!

Everything else is just fine (for me anyway) :D

QFred
May 10th, 2005, 12:14 PM
I don't like it!!!!

Not at all!!!

Fox♠
May 10th, 2005, 12:29 PM
STOP BEING OVERLY STUPID PEOPLE. Just because they don't want a bad grade doesnt mean we can't give it to them. Anyway, yes it sucks, comics are based around graphics. Without graphics your comic sucks, end of story. Why? Because no on is going to read a comic with crappy graphics. Same with video games. It could have the perfect story and character development, but if it's 8 bit in this day and age, it fails, they wasted money, boo.
that's the trouble nowdays...everything is judged on looks...specailly comics....why even bother reading them if all you lot thinks matters is the graphics?(this isn't directed @ u armidillo...your last post just bases my arguement)it's like "oh that was the funniest thing I eva read!!!...but since you used 16 bit sprites on a 2 shade BG you fail"...it's stupid

armadilloHD
May 10th, 2005, 12:32 PM
that's the trouble nowdays...everything is judged on looks...specailly comics....why even bother reading them if all you lot thinks matters is the graphics?(this isn't directed @ u armidillo...your last post just bases my arguement)it's like "oh that was the funniest thing I eva read!!!...but since you used 16 bit sprites on a 2 shade BG you fail"...it's stupid
It's true, thats mixed bittages, which is ugly, and stupid, and LAZY if people want to make sprite comics they need to put a little more effort ;>>

(TIP: Look at some of the greatest sprite comics, I suggest kid radd, it rocks in 8 bits because he keeps using 8 bits, not 8 bits the 16 bits the 2 bits then STYHTHS.)

Goatman56
May 10th, 2005, 12:36 PM
Its true if you read some tutorials you'll most likely see its bad to mix bittages.

Fox♠
May 11th, 2005, 08:02 AM
most ppl in high school have alot more to do than you younger kids thus we don't have time for great BG's...but i understand that bitage mixing is stupid

ChrisTom
January 30th, 2010, 08:46 PM
Why can't I see your comics?

:(

Fox♠
January 31st, 2010, 05:41 PM
Don't worry about reviving a 5 year old thread, honestly that is well within the 1 month revival limit :<