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Hazard7
May 7th, 2005, 01:53 PM
Here is my first comic I made so rate this! Hope it's funny for you.

http://members.lycos.co.uk/reymysterio619/hazardfirstcomic.jpg

PrinceOfDarkness
May 7th, 2005, 02:08 PM
wow, alittle cool, quite hillarious 8/10 ~Johnny~

Jeremy
May 7th, 2005, 04:09 PM
XD Woah, didn't expect old ladies. XD Anyway sweetie, I think you might get in trouble for saying the "s" word like that. ^^; My comics, I just inferred it.

Well, 8/10 for a first comic, sweetie.. ^^

Latias Lover!
May 7th, 2005, 04:40 PM
Really funny! I like it! (messege to short)

Shinin
May 7th, 2005, 06:35 PM
That's incredibly unfunny and blurry. It's the kind of stuff that only immature little kids who recently figured out what sex is would laugh at. 1/10.

Goatman56
May 7th, 2005, 07:16 PM
Although I don't completely agree with Shinin. I don't agree with the others either. Shinin is right it is a little blurry. Your grammar is a little bad but I won't really hold it against you. The joke to me doesn't seem very funny. Over all i'll give you a C which would be a 5/10.

Hazard7
May 8th, 2005, 01:38 AM
Well i have been using Microsoft Word for speech bouble(?) and the text are use in Microsoft and you should know that they cheack for spelling mistake :/ **** you Word!

Anyway, i'm British writer. It's might not match with American. Also it does look blurry cos I've screenshot it and paste it in Adobe Photoshop 7.

Esupio
May 8th, 2005, 03:51 AM
Well i have been using Microsoft Word for speech bouble(?) and the text are use in Microsoft and you should know that they cheack for spelling mistake :/ **** you Word!

Anyway, i'm British writer. It's might not match with American. Also it does look blurry cos I've screenshot it and paste it in Adobe Photoshop 7.

XD its fine its just us brits we spell things different from you americans
its was good for a first comic actually very good

QFred
May 15th, 2005, 12:30 PM
It's very, very, very, very, very cool!!!!

Love it!!!!

91/100

Fox♠
May 15th, 2005, 12:34 PM
XD its fine its just us brits we spell things different from you americans
its was good for a first comic actually very good
yep...we call our mothers "mum"...not "mom" and stuff like that...pretty good...oh and pay attention to goatmans advice

pokemonfreak
May 15th, 2005, 12:54 PM
Terific! It was soo cool! Old ladies is a cool suprise! 10/10! I like the names too!

mizu-dragon
May 15th, 2005, 12:59 PM
Shnaples, that is funny! 9/10

Gohan
May 15th, 2005, 01:10 PM
That's funny. 9.2/10. And its not the kind of comic only immature little kids would laugh at Shinin.

obelisk-kun
May 15th, 2005, 03:39 PM
wonderful 10/10(message to short)

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 16th, 2005, 12:16 PM
Lol, funny stuff. I likde it. 10/10.

BluePhoenix
May 21st, 2005, 10:42 AM
Hm....Funny comic. Really funny. First I thought oh...coo. But later my mouth openned up and I started laughing.^^
~RAP~

Fox♠
May 21st, 2005, 11:56 AM
That's funny. 9.2/10. And its not the kind of comic only immature little kids would laugh at Shinin.
yeah true...but shinin has to hate nearly everything...or it just wouldnt be shinin...and this time he didn't say "it made no sense"...so i presume he's getting better with crit

Draik
May 21st, 2005, 12:53 PM
It's OK, not too good. You have a few grammical errors though.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/bookleech/mistakes2.gif
Mistakes are circled in red.

Lokhlan
May 21st, 2005, 01:13 PM
5/10

Negative:
- This being a Pokemon board where many age 9's & up post, it was a little perverted
- For such a quick joke, it was too drawn out
- Bad grammar

Positive:
- This being your first comic, it looks like you've got the basic idea down
- The old ladies joke was relatively funny

Hazard7
May 23rd, 2005, 11:55 PM
Whoa thatnks for your comment guys! I will make a second comic sprite soon!

Pikabloo
May 24th, 2005, 01:59 AM
7/10
It was good for your first try, but as many said, it was quite blurry and there are several grammar mistakes. The joke was pretty funny though, so, yeah...