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Latias Lover!
May 8th, 2005, 7:05 AM
Chapter One

Luna stood by the flamboyant seas, watching the golden sun setting. The sea was tinted in light pink, due to the setting sun. Brightness shone in Luna's eyes, and suddenly, she saw something unusual. Far from the brown cliff, a Pokemon hovered above the sea. It was a Latias, but as far as Luna knows, its a shiny. The golden wings of the Latias astounded Luna, and as quickly as possible, she called out Darkshift, an Umbreon with two dark eyes with dark night-vision, glowing teeth, and dark fur.

"Darkshift, use Faint Attack!" Luna told the Pokemon. Darkshift obeyed, and in response, a glowing light fluttered around it, poised to strike the Latias. In an instant, Darkshift rocketed itself, off the cliff, almost invisible, crashing into Latias, clawing her, growling, and with all its might Darkshift bit onto Latias' neck, stunning her temporaily.

But Latias fell into the ocean, with Darkshift holding onto her. Splashing waves made way for them, as they both fell into the pinkish-colored sea. Luna was terrified. What if Darkshift can't breathe?! I have to help it! Luna thought. Quick as a Rapidash, she called out Whirlpool, her Kingdra to find Darkshift and the Latias in the murky water.

"King, Kingdra, Kingdra!" Whirlpool nodded when Luna told her the instructions. It dove heavily into the water, again the waves make way for it. For a long time, it didn't surface. But suddenly Whirlpool appeared, holding on to Darkshift and the Latias.

"Thank goodness!" Luna gasped, happy to see Darkshift alive. But she wondered about the Latias. The Latias was breathing heavily, panting for survival. Luna knew she have to take the Latias to the Pokemon Center, as it was the only way to heal the Latias. She grabbed an empty Pokeball and captured Latias with one touch of a button.

"Quick, you two!" Luna panted heavily on her bike. Darkshift and Whirlpool sat in the bike basket, ready to alert Luna of any Pokemon Centers nearby.

Phoenix Riley
May 8th, 2005, 7:59 AM
Its intresting rather short but a lot of description althought you pokemo dont have descriptions and How could a kingdra jump in bike basket and stay alive???

The idea is good and if you check up on the Fan fic rules and start it again you will have a fab fan fic!


Latias Lover!
May 8th, 2005, 8:16 AM
I didn't know Kingdra can only breathe in water...