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PrinceOfDarkness
May 8th, 2005, 11:37 AM
OK now, don't ask why there isn't a background to this, if u do, ultimate punishment J/K LOL
http://img234.echo.cx/img234/1119/secondcomic6ci.png

http://img234.echo.cx/img234/1119/secondcomic6ci.png

I tried making it funny >_> ~Johnny~

Shinin
May 8th, 2005, 03:33 PM
That makes no sense, has no background and is horrible.

PrinceOfDarkness
May 9th, 2005, 03:20 AM
That makes no sense, has no background and is horrible.
the only thing that's horrible is ur mommy XD LOL jk
maybe cause ur not one to understand things or coughslowmindedcough XD
I said it didn't have a background for no reason, god, don't read the post.

Shinin
May 10th, 2005, 05:11 PM
Learn to take criticism. Your comic sucks. And there was no reason for it having no background, you just said not to say anything about it. That doesn't make the background not part of the comic.

PrinceOfDarkness
May 10th, 2005, 05:26 PM
I can take criticism, but its annoying to get it from the same ppl >_> the way u make me feel is the same as u bein called a girl. how would u feel to be called a girl by everyone, thats how it is to get the same comment from the same person.

and I don't care if its horrible or not, no one is perfect. and ur waaay off from bein perfect ~Johnny~

Shinin
May 10th, 2005, 05:52 PM
You don't know me well enough to make an opinion of how perfect I am.
And I don't care too much when people call me a girl.

Fox♠
May 12th, 2005, 09:57 AM
shinin your crit doesnt actually help anyone...it just makes them feel bad...and is "it makes no sense" your favorite saying?...so what if it doesnt make sense...it doesent have to...dear god eva heard of constructive crit?...not "it makes no sense...you fail cuz I can't be helpful"

Draik
May 12th, 2005, 02:43 PM
Actully, it really doesn't make sense...at all.

Logmon1
May 12th, 2005, 04:02 PM
WHAT THE HELL?! That makes no scencs and sonic is a bit smarter then that. And why would shadow run when he can beat Sonic (Hyper or not) in a nanosecend? Pluse for some good Sonic sprites go to http://www.themysticalforestzone.com/ Moron. Go find out something about Sonic!

PrinceOfDarkness
May 12th, 2005, 04:04 PM
u saying all those things sound like ur trying to flame, but meh, I dun care. Thanks for not understanding it and hateing it everyone, glad to kno to make more Sprite Comics and only show them to fews who understand ^_^ ~LunaticJohnny~

Izzy
May 12th, 2005, 04:37 PM
shinin your crit doesnt actually help anyone...it just makes them feel bad...and is "it makes no sense" your favorite saying?...so what if it doesnt make sense...it doesent have to...dear god eva heard of constructive crit?...not "it makes no sense...you fail cuz I can't be helpful"
...AMEN.
Shinin, all you do is spit out the same phrases. "It makes no sense, go out and magically think up of WHY it makes no sense because I say so." You don't elaborate and that's what makes all your criticism plain, and unhelpful. Maybe you just got used to saying the same thing over and over you completely forgot about elaborating, but whatever, you need to elaborate. If I spit out some derogatory comments, not elaborating, do you think anyone could get better by magically guessing what I'm talking about? No.

Learn to take criticism. Your comic sucks. And there was no reason for it having no background, you just said not to say anything about it. That doesn't make the background not part of the comic.
Wow, it's so hard to judge a comic without incorporating the background into the juding. SOOOOOOOOOOOO hard.

You don't know me well enough to make an opinion of how perfect I am.
And I don't care too much when people call me a girl.
You certainly care enough to put it at a large size in your signature.

I can take criticism, but its annoying to get it from the same ppl >_> the way u make me feel is the same as u bein called a girl. how would u feel to be called a girl by everyone, thats how it is to get the same comment from the same person.

and I don't care if its horrible or not, no one is perfect. and ur waaay off from bein perfect ~Johnny~
You need to learn how to take criticism. We aren't going to give you opinions on a silver platter. Besides webmasters, sprite comics is the least visited forum (at least in terms of activity). It's slow here, only a few come. You should be glad you can get criticism, but you should know that already. Criticism, no matter how derogatory or stupid, is there to help, it just puts on an ugly mask and dances on the table nude. If you learn how to take it it'll help you in time.

WHAT THE HELL?! That makes no scencs and sonic is a bit smarter then that. And why would shadow run when he can beat Sonic (Hyper or not) in a nanosecend? Pluse for some good Sonic sprites go to http://www.themysticalforestzone.com/ Moron. Go find out something about Sonic!

www.dictionary.com
It says hi.

Finally, who says the comic has to be parallel with the universe of Sonic? It doesn't. See bowser in there? That's the thing that makes it so. Since when has bowser made a regular appearance in sonic? Never, so stop complaining about "OMG1111!1 SHADOW CAN BEAT SONIC!11ONEONEONEON".

Also, for something that made no sense you seemed to have quite a good grip on it. Maybe you should pay attention more. You also don't seem to like it when people yell and scream at you the same way, so it must make sense for you to do the same thing. Joy.

This section is called "Sprite Comics" not "Flame the Death Out of Me". Stop doing this in every topic.

devilicious
May 12th, 2005, 05:55 PM
Holy Crab, SapphireD gets my vote~


And yes, the comic makes almost sense to me... I just dont find it funny, sorry~
Try making a script first, it always help. And adding a background gives more emphasys to the comic, so adding one is also a nifty idea~
Go for it, I know ya can~ =D

O
May 13th, 2005, 06:29 PM
It really doesn't make any sense, and for the order of the speeches, put the first one higher up and the second one lower and the third one even lower so it's in order of height. Oh and Logmon1, that site has hardly any Sonic sprites.

No Background- You didn't want to do it, fine.

No Credit Given- That bowser sheet was custom.

Sprite Positioning- Wasn't even on the line

Actions- no *punches* in Sprite Comics, SFX or something but not *punches* it's really annoying.

Horrible Cropping- Yea, at least recolor the Bowser gold or something.

Abbreviations- "No, it's ur momma" Big no no. type 'your'

Attempted Random Humor- Really, it doesn't make sense.

Fox♠
May 13th, 2005, 10:26 PM
good job outskate..that eally will help...unlike SOMEONE who only says "it makes no sence"

pokemonfreak
May 15th, 2005, 10:53 AM
I liked it. its good.i guess.

armadilloHD
May 15th, 2005, 04:27 PM
Another problem, people keep saying "Wow, that's good" or "I liked it! (Message too short) shouldn't that count as spam as well? Well my theory is, no background takes away from setting, no setting takes away from story, no story takes away from characters, no characters takes away from sprites. And at that point it's not really a sprite comic. But I guess it's not like a domino effect. But anyway, this comic doesnt have a strong feeling to it. Try harder next time, like put in a background. Edit the sprites better etc. Good luck anyhow

Esupio
May 16th, 2005, 11:39 AM
right they are good sonic sprites logmon1 and sonic and shadow are equal and its super form not hyper why don't YOU go find something out about sonic.

Sometimes comics don't have backgrounds for like stupid peoples minds or like totally destroyed places etc but I never understood that anyway.

Yeah you do obviously care enough to put it in large lettering in your sig shinin XD

erm everyone has their own opinoins and stuff like that XD and well mine is

4/10
Reasoning: No backgrounds it makes the comic more intresting but if you couldn't find one that suits that is fine.
the sprites weren't postioned to well. The bowser was edited by sticking sonics top spike on am I right (done by daniel sidney respected spriters but meh)

Blazin Espio

Draik
May 20th, 2005, 06:49 PM
3/10.
Try to use grammer when you making a comic. It'll give ya a bad reputation in a period of time. The sprites aren't positioned very well.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/bookleech/mistakes.png
I circled you sprite mispositions and they don't have any shadows.

Fox♠
June 17th, 2005, 02:34 PM
I find ot soooo funny that shinin called that contsructive....johhny take crit better...even if it's crappy like what shinin gave you....but yeah what SD, outskate, sykora and AHD said is so uterly true, learn from it

Shinin
June 18th, 2005, 04:59 AM
OK, I'll give constructive criticism.

It needs a background. No background is bad. Also, Sonic just magically turns into Super Sonic. Also, the characters are floating above the ground, they should be standing on it. And you should give credit to people who made/ripped sprites that are used in your comic.

Fox♠
June 18th, 2005, 05:05 AM
now you can listen to what shinin said aswell