View Full Version : Shinos Sprite comics.

May 8th, 2005, 5:14 PM
Yeah,Im wouldnt call myself a professional Sprite Comic..Maker..Guy but im pretty Good,But yeah Please rate these comics i made 1/10,Im making a new comic its kinda resident evilish but yeah here they are.
Intro Picture.



Ugh!...I cant find the last 3...Crap..;.;..They're in my picture folder somewhere but until then please rate these and tell me whut i need to do better on.. :D

Shikon no Tama
May 8th, 2005, 6:08 PM
Well, the backrounds, sprites and storyline are good, but in the text boxes, there are grammer mistakes, spelling mistakes, and some of the words are cut off. Improve on your text boxes so that it's bigger than the actual space the text needs.

May 8th, 2005, 10:10 PM
Yeah,I thought someone would say something about that Ill be sure to fix it.

May 9th, 2005, 4:55 AM
http://img84.echo.cx/img84/3723/goatman566xk.png (http://www.imageshack.us) As Moonlight Dreams pointed out your grammar is a little bad. You have nice backgrounds and sprites are solid. Except for one. Your little protoman recolor brought down your score. You should make it more origanal because the time of recolors is over. I suggest you find someone to edit that sprite :\.

May 9th, 2005, 5:16 AM
Just as the other two said, there are some grammar mistakes. The sprites and backrounds are good, and the storyline seems pretty good. Overall, I'll give it a 7/10

May 10th, 2005, 5:42 PM
Wasn't this kinda like Spy kids 3-d???

May 11th, 2005, 2:32 AM
This is a lame, overused storyling, with crappy recolors. And you gave no credit to jen who created the greyscale fox in the second comic. Sorry, you lose.

May 11th, 2005, 10:03 AM
kinda like TTA if ya think about it ArmadilloHD XD
he is right anyway you lose

May 13th, 2005, 6:36 PM
I like it, good sprite usage and backgrounds, but lots and lots of spelling and grammatical mistakes, and THERE'S LOTS OF THESE TYPES OF COMICS! Overused idea, but really well done.

May 13th, 2005, 6:38 PM
How is it resident evilish.

May 15th, 2005, 11:01 AM
I love the backgrounds, and the sprites. great comic! 7/10.

May 15th, 2005, 12:06 PM
Like it!!!!


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