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xUmbreonx
May 9th, 2005, 08:00 PM
This is all the characteristics of a Togepi put on a hand-drawn base i made..C&C?
Forest Grovyle
May 10th, 2005, 12:42 PM
It's certainly inventive! You seem to have good control of the mouse/tablet (whichever one you used!) but the lines are a little bit shaky - but that'll improve with time! ^_^ I'd suggest making the lines thinner in general, and using shading to bring out the areas of shadow in the drawing :) But never stop drawing! :D I always love seeing new people post art here! *hugs!* Keep it up!!
--FG :)
Shadowfaith
May 10th, 2005, 05:18 PM
I like your imaginative style of Togepi ^_^ It looks like an evolved form of Togetic after it loosing it’s egg and growing a tad, It remind me of the Evolution of Noishe in Tales of Symphonia (If you have ever played it)
Anyways, like FG said, the lines are a bit shaky, but so is everyone’s if you haven’t had loads of practice, my lines aren’t much better made on the computer XD It is imaginative, but all I can really suggest is more shading, much more to make it stand out a bit more and perhaps a few more personal characteristics, perhaps wings or something so it doesn’t look to much like a dog ^_^ But good job on it, I for one like it ^_-
QFred
May 10th, 2005, 08:26 PM
Don't like the picture!!!!
I'm not criticizing!!!!
I just don't like it!!!!
You draw really good on the PC!!!
xUmbreonx
May 10th, 2005, 08:57 PM
Thank you everyone. I dont really know how to shade. But I can try. And I'll try to make my lines thinner and staighter..*hugs*