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[Technya]
May 10th, 2005, 10:42 AM
If youd like
Come to a place where in the darkness she roams,
A place where night is life, you cant go wrong.
A place where she rules.
Watch her grace as she reigns in her darkened beauty.

All apposing her might, considered fools.
Her pale skin glittering in the moons light, her eyes seducing all, her smile striking fear into all of Christs men.
No wonder all fallen to her game cannot mend.
Her presence felt as the life is drank out of you.
No one escapes her wrath!

Spreading death, she feeds off your fear,
Rivers run with blood,
Hope priests offer not.
Beauty and seduction are her weapons, anarchy is her passion, and blood is her lust.
Her whispers offer comfort and pleasure; her fangs offer blood and death.

All apposing her might, considered fools.
Her pale skin glittering in the moons light, her eyes seducing all, her smile striking fear into all of Christs men.
No wonder all fallen to her game cannot mend.
Her presence felt as the life is drank out of you.
No one escapes her wrath!

The blood is running and she is dinning,
Men are falling and she is lusting,
Women begging for beauty and she selling their souls for it,
This Transylvanian mistress roaming the night.
This daughter of the moon reigns in the heart of all.
The lesson behind this story
None shant escape my grasp!

Kyosuke
May 10th, 2005, 07:27 PM
Nice song, as usual with most of your poems they can work either as a song, or a poem and it was kind of hard to tell the difference here, but it worked ^^'.

I liked the dark setting of Transylvania that you chose to basicaly descibe the female version of Dracula, and the way that her whole body and face look beautiful.... but that only goes so far XD.

Great job ^^.

Arcanine Fan 101
May 12th, 2005, 06:38 PM
very nice 10/10 i loved it a lot