First Time RP

[Dark Penguin]

Final Fantasy Crystal Wars was my first RP ever (not only on this forum, but anywhere) and just wanted to know what people think, and what i could do better to improve upon it. So far it hasn't been a huge success, but maybe its because ppl have lives on weekends. Anyways, just tell me what you think and how i can do better.

[Masaya]

Well get back to your rp! ;D it may be a better success then!
No, i'm serious if you keep going people are bound to join. (like me for example, i already made a request)