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Jeremy
May 16th, 2005, 07:02 PM
Yeah sweeties, this ones personal...

~I'm free~
I'm free from her
No longer will I need her
No longer I'll see her
Because I'm free
I can do what I want
Be what I wanna be
Do what I wanna do
And see what I wanna see
I can let go without regrets
No longer my heart will have this stress
No longer devote my time being with her
No longer devote my time comfronting her
Now I can go around and flirt...
But my only question is...
Why does is it still hurt? ;-;

Snivi
May 16th, 2005, 07:24 PM
Good poem Jeremy. Very well written ^^

Kylie-chan
May 16th, 2005, 11:54 PM
Aww... nearly made me cry... ;-; It's very good... touching... xD ;-;

Kira
May 17th, 2005, 10:34 AM
Very good poem, really touching. Nice written XD *sneezes* Uh?

FaerieEsqueThing
May 17th, 2005, 01:06 PM
Wow, this sounds alot like "Sorry". Almost looks like you ripped it off...

Claire
May 17th, 2005, 02:12 PM
o.o; it's not a rip off whatsoever. Show me one single line that is an exact copy..there isn't one..
Topics can be on similar subjects, just because both of yours were on unpairing doesn't make it a rip-off, so don't go around accusing people like that.

Dawson
May 17th, 2005, 02:13 PM
That was a very moving poem Jeremy, good job!

Erm, to be honest, those two poems seemed almost completely different to me.

Jeremy
May 17th, 2005, 02:19 PM
Sweeties, I have a confession, I ripped of Kat's poem, "Sorry." Eventhough we BOTH were involved, and this is my version though. It's plagazied sweeties...

Yeah right. :P

Kat, this is my poem, so there. :P

FaerieEsqueThing
May 17th, 2005, 02:21 PM
"Kat, I admit, I did based my poem off your's.." from an MSN conversation.

The following are written statements saying this is legitimate.

"Ly is a lieing son of a - that has been dragging it on for far too long. The quote is legitmate, as he editted it at the last second to keep his reputation. Kat is indeed telling the truth, just please believe her." --Alex, MSN: [email protected]

You may also ask Shelby, who witnessed it: [email protected]

Call me a paranoid liar now. TRY IT. JUST TRY IT.

Jeremy
May 17th, 2005, 07:11 PM
Kat, I'm sorry that I made you bad, I'd admit, I based my poem off your's but I didn't completely plagarized your poem, I wrote exactly how I felt. I'm sorry that I made you look bad, please forgive me, that was extremely immature and wrong for me to do. If it makes things less chaotic, I give you credit.

Kylie-chan
May 17th, 2005, 11:23 PM
Well, Jeremy is sorry for it, so you didn't have to say it so acidly to him.
It's not ideal to bring private situations into a poetry thread either. -_-;

Natsuki
May 18th, 2005, 06:06 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwws! *shnuggles Jer-Jer* This poem was both cute and sad. <333 It seemed nice to know that you are free from the strains and the weights that were holding you down...yet in place of those weights was a paining emotion that felt as though it just wouldn't leave.

Great work Jer-Jer! ^_____^ *hugs* Me = I loved it. XD

~Kelsey