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oni flygon
May 19th, 2005, 2:39 PM
Hiya! I think I posted this poem here before or something... but I don't know. I guess I'll repost it again! Enjoy the poem!

Freedom and Rage

I want to scream at the top of my lungs
Just to dispose of this anger within
Yes I feel freedom and rage
Now is a new time to begin

The rain pierces through my skin
The freezing gale blows through my hair
My arms spread open like wings
Oh my chest, I wanted to tear

My hands balled in fists as my head throbs
My screams made my throat strained and sore
I didnt care because the anger is leaving me
At the depths of the valley, you could hear my roar

The long shout that blared in the hills
Was soon gone within the next moment
Afterwards, a sigh escaped my lips
I remained in that posture, ever patient

My arms relaxed and my anger eased
A small laugh came out from my throat
I fell down on my knees as I laughed
My entire mind just wanted to gloat

Sarcastic ironyoh how gleeful
Hear a scream followed by a cackle
Oh how gleeful life isoh joy!
The sound in the air is like a clanging schackle

Finally, the rain stops and the sky is clear
The sun shines again and I am blissful
I felt its rays warming my face
See the tears mixed with rainoh so colorful

Samuri Scearious
May 19th, 2005, 3:25 PM
Wow... nice poem and vocaulary... It's great, really.

oni flygon
May 19th, 2005, 4:08 PM
Thanks for commenting! I really appreciate you reading my poem! ^__^

May 19th, 2005, 6:27 PM
been a while since a read an onigiri poem XD

well, seems freeverse, which i cant read well XD, but pretty good when it comes to descriptions

oni flygon
May 20th, 2005, 3:27 PM
Thanks Digi! XD

Well... I appreciate more comments, people... ^_^