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Pikachu1125
May 22nd, 2005, 06:40 PM
Hey, here's the comic I made last year. I posted it at SPPf, but not here, so here ya go. Critizism and suggestion appriated.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/AD01.png

Intro (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/0.png)
1-Shoot! I'm late for a day! (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/1re.png)
2-Get fired up! (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/2.png)
3-Enraged Vigoroth (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/3.png)
4-Team Rocket attacks Shauna (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/4.png)
5-Jase is Targeted, forever (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/5.png)
6-Bug Catching Contest Part I (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/6.png)
7-Bug Catching Contest Part II (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/7.png)
8-Saved by Corie (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/8.png)

Jase VS Corie(WARNING: SPOILER!!!) (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/Pikachu_1125/The%20Pokemon%20Journey/JvsC1.png)

I hope you like them, too bad I'm not motivated to continue, I wanna, but I'm too lazy :(.

Credit(s):
Semi Juggalo for Pikachu
Soara for Wartortle and Clefairy
(If I forgot to credit anyone, tell me. Afterall I made this last year :P .

Latias Lover!
May 22nd, 2005, 06:49 PM
The bad thing is that you don't really have a background, and the Pokemon attacks are from MS Paint colors.

Champion Taylor
May 23rd, 2005, 06:32 AM
Pretty good. I had a good time reading it. I think you should continue with the series.

QFred
May 23rd, 2005, 11:45 AM
I think it's really cool!!!!

Does he got to be the new TR leader???

Shinin
May 23rd, 2005, 03:05 PM
No backgrounds, wrong sprite style. Also it's a pretty bad comic with some grammar errors. 3/10.

obelisk-kun
May 23rd, 2005, 03:19 PM
way way way to blurry 0/10

Draik
May 23rd, 2005, 04:05 PM
I've seen that sprite somewhere.....and does that look like Jeremy?

Pikachu1125
May 23rd, 2005, 05:22 PM
I've seen that sprite somewhere.....and does that look like Jeremy?

Did you mean the team rocket guy? I remembered I got it from somewhere and edited it, do you know who made it? So I can give that person credit.

Yeah everyone, I accept your critizisms saying "it sucks". It was made right after I learned how to sprite last year, so... :nervous:

~Amethyst_Callista_Moon~
May 23rd, 2005, 08:58 PM
way way way to blurry 0/10
There's suppose to be a button that you click and the strip will be clearer.

Anyway, it's pretty good for a comic. 9/10

Darts
May 24th, 2005, 07:29 AM
You should make more. 10/10

GoldenHouou
May 24th, 2005, 09:11 AM
I like it! I`ve never learned how to make good new trainer sprites.... Anyway, I really like it. Please continue.

Super Myuu
May 30th, 2005, 05:26 PM
Lol, I remember this thing XD. So long ago... You really should continue it, I'll definitely read it ^^. 10/10

~Myuu

Draik
May 31st, 2005, 02:05 PM
The sprite was maade from the PC mod, PIKA2/Jeremy.

Trainer Kat
June 1st, 2005, 03:30 PM
10/10 I really enjoyed it! ^.^ You should continue, it's very cute. I like the Clefairy sprite at the end.

Kiktamo
June 7th, 2005, 03:28 PM
10/10 I liked it it was fun to read

Kroko_Boy
June 10th, 2005, 05:13 AM
10/10 I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!! pleeeeeeaseeeeeee