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Shuko
May 25th, 2005, 06:58 PM
Are you prepared?
Prepared for thrills, danger, and excitement?
Well, goodie for you. You get my comic instead. :P Nyaaah.
Anyway, this is the first (and if God is merciful, the only) installment of Pete Merwin: The Croconaw Hunter...

So read an' review, 'kay? :P
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y22/Shuko/Cover1.png
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y22/Shuko/PeteMerwin.png
Any resemblance to persons or characters either real or fictional is purely un-coincidental. It is advised that the reader understand that imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, so no complaining, you Aussie git!
If I find that anyone steals the crappy sprites, backgrounds, or images used in my comic (or any of my other artistic works' products) I'll hunt you down and bash you good with a cheese log! :badsmile:

MetalMario
May 25th, 2005, 07:07 PM
LOL!

I can so easily put Steve Irwin's voice to those words.. it's brilliant! I want more! (just go easy on the poor guy... >_<)

Rageman
May 25th, 2005, 07:24 PM
Shuko:Awesome 7/10. too pixely.
edit:thanks for deleteing them

Shuko
May 25th, 2005, 07:47 PM
Shuko:Awesome 7/10. too pixely.
MM:SpamSpamSpam. Thats All spam and you broke the rules.
edit:thanks for deleteing them

Yeah; you're right. I kind of wanted it that way, though. It was kind of a ploy on me not taking the comic very seriously... or it's not taking itself seriously... or something. Anyway, it was supposed to be pixely and weird. But I think it's crap anyway, so whaddo I know? :P

Eon-Rider
May 26th, 2005, 12:32 AM
I thought was kind of interesting.

Pikabloo
May 26th, 2005, 02:04 AM
Hehe... That was funny. I was actually imagining Steve Irwin's voice saying all that! But as some said, it's kinda pixely. I still think it's good though.

BluePhoenix
May 26th, 2005, 02:13 AM
It's a nice comic.^_^. Make more if you can. I shall give you 9/10.^_~
~RAP~

Goatman56
May 26th, 2005, 07:19 AM
Hmmm a good comic. A few things I see a little wrong would be those zoom things. They look pretty good but need some work. You could try to show a little more expression on Petes face. In the 6th panel theres no shadow on the rock like in all the others. Other than that its pretty good. A nice solid 6/10 I believe this comic has potential :D.

Shuko
May 26th, 2005, 09:04 AM
Hmmm a good comic. A few things I see a little wrong would be those zoom things. They look pretty good but need some work. You could try to show a little more expression on Petes face. In the 6th panel theres no shadow on the rock like in all the others. Other than that its pretty good. A nice solid 6/10 I believe this comic has potential :D.

Thanks, Goatman! :D I'm glad you graded me so fairly. And I think you made excellent points. I've decided that for the next ones, I'll use the same kinds of backgrounds, but I'm going to draw the characters in Flash (I'm better with that, anyway, lol) instead of modding sprites. I really hate the whole Pixel-perfect thing, lol. I've got a few ideas for the next one, so hopefully I'll be able to do a better job with it. :) I'll keep these around to remind me of my failing points so that I can improve on them.

Anyone have any good ideas on how I can improve the speech bubbles? I'm not really satisfied with them, but I can't figure out how to make them better. -_-; Anyway, thanks for the reviews and comments, guys!

Fox♠
May 26th, 2005, 09:16 AM
Hehe... That was funny. I was actually imagining Steve Irwin's voice saying all that! But as some said, it's kinda pixely. I still think it's good though.
yea same...altho I don't care that it's pixely

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 26th, 2005, 11:51 AM
Lol, I thought that was funny. :D
The only thing I founf wrong with it is that it was too pixely. Other then that it was good.
7/10. ;)

Shuko
May 26th, 2005, 07:32 PM
I've decided that for the next ones, I'll use the same kinds of backgrounds, but I'm going to draw the characters in Flash (I'm better with that, anyway, lol) instead of modding sprites. I really hate the whole Pixel-perfect thing, lol.

This is the kind of art I'm talking about. I took one of my sprites and drew it in Flash. Do you guys think this will make the comic look better? I like it. I think it looks kinda cartoony, but that's okay for this sort of thing. What do you think?
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y22/Shuko/PeteMerwinFlash.png

smurf12
May 27th, 2005, 12:49 AM
brill comic 10/10 really funny!

MetalMario
May 27th, 2005, 11:26 AM
Shuko:Awesome 7/10. too pixely.
MM:SpamSpamSpam. Thats All spam and you broke the rules.
edit:thanks for deleteing them
I thought was kind of interesting.
Spam.
Hehe... That was funny. I was actually imagining Steve Irwin's voice saying all that! But as some said, it's kinda pixely. I still think it's good though.
Spam.

I know: Let's ban everyone!

(BTW, 8/10. The only room for improvement would be adding more detail to the background. I say keep the sprite version. It is a sprite comic, after all! ;))

Esupio
May 28th, 2005, 12:41 AM
Spam.

Spam.

I know: Let's ban everyone!

(BTW, 8/10. The only room for improvement would be adding more detail to the background. I say keep the sprite version. It is a sprite comic, after all! ;))
sad person all of that was perfectly good posting this is spam

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like I said before If I did brillant and nice cartoon thing

Lokhlan
May 28th, 2005, 09:23 AM
XD!
I had to laugh out loud when Merwin just popped outta nowhere, "CROIKEY!!!". It would've been a testiment to Steve's craziness if Merwin had popped out of the water instead of zooming in.

Great comic! I enjoyed reading it and I'm looking forward to your next one. =D

MetalMario:
Halo and Pikabloo's posts were not spam.

Psychotic_Demon
May 31st, 2005, 03:54 PM
MetalMario, their posts were not spammy. They were somewhat short, but not all post have to be long.

Anyways, that comic was pretty funny. ^o^ I love how Merwin popped outta nowhere shouting "CROIKEY!!!" That had to be one of the best parts. I can really imagine a voice similar to Steve Irwin's voice speaking. XD I really like this comic, but it was kinda fuzzy... I think the drawn out characters would be awesome in this comic. Great job!! I can't wait to see more of your comics! ^-^

~Dark_Espy

Shuko
May 31st, 2005, 05:37 PM
Hi guys! I've decided to put any and all updates in the general Fanart Forum, since the new comic won't be a sprite comic. :P You can check it out at the link in my sig. I don't have a new comic up yet, but I do have a few goodies for you to check out in the meantime. Thanks for reading!

Lokhlan
May 31st, 2005, 10:00 PM
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