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smurf12
May 26th, 2005, 06:19 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y174/DARRENMC11/darren%20NW/COMIC1.bmp

Shuko
May 26th, 2005, 06:32 AM
Funny pictures, definitely. Although I think the dialog could be changed a little to add to the humor. As it is, it's not all that exciting. And although you number the speech bubbles, I still found myself reading them out of order (of course, I'm an airhead, so I can't speak for others). I think if, in the last frame, you'd had Wario kick the big... thingie that Bowser rides in, then it would have been more apparent that he'd actually struck it. As it is right now, it looks almost like he's disco dancing, rather than having just hit Bowser's flying contraption! :D

All in all, I'll give you a 7/10. It made me smile, but it could have been soo much funnier. :P Keep at it, tho. You'll only get better!

Edit: btw, your username is Smurf12, but the author's name on the comic is Smurf11. :P

Fox♠
May 26th, 2005, 06:34 AM
it wasnt bad,,,but you may want to put the person who is speaking firsts bubble 1st

smurf12
May 26th, 2005, 06:41 AM
i'm happy to say that i will be doing more warioland! comics!
thank you for all your nice comments!
they will have:more humor. more laughs. more fun. :D
i've done it!
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y174/DARRENMC11/darren%20NW/comic2.bmp

smurf12
May 27th, 2005, 04:30 AM
I made a warioland and its star wars style! sorry for the double post.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y174/DARRENMC11/darren%20NW/COMIC3.bmp

Eon-Rider
May 27th, 2005, 04:47 AM
Cool. The 2nd one is kinda boring though. Sorry!

smurf12
May 27th, 2005, 08:19 AM
i might make some improvements to warioland! #2 comic!

QFred
May 27th, 2005, 12:11 PM
Ummmm... don't like them very much!!!

Gohan
May 27th, 2005, 01:06 PM
I liked Numbers Three, and One. But Two was ya know sorta not as good.

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 27th, 2005, 01:18 PM
Umm, its some-what good. And its kinda funny. Number 2 wasen't all that good thoe. :surprised

Rateing: 7.9/10