View Full Version : norwich...a fine city?
May 30th, 2005, 12:28 PM
May 30th, 2005, 06:02 PM
the second one was so funny 10/10
May 30th, 2005, 11:22 PM
thanks...I sorta forgot to mention why everywhere was shut....it was 7pm on a sunday
June 3rd, 2005, 06:38 AM
It was good. I like the second one better.
June 3rd, 2005, 02:46 PM
thank you for the comments
June 3rd, 2005, 03:02 PM
Why is there no real punchline? C'mon, guys. They don't need to be OMGROFLAFFO funny, they just need to at least merely exist.
June 4th, 2005, 05:33 AM
ok I'll try harder next time
June 4th, 2005, 05:39 AM
Don't be afraid to critisize. If you are the ones that don't like it, just post it.
June 4th, 2005, 07:34 AM
thank you...I don't like seeing 200 views...then next to it...6 posts
please by all means critisize me...it'll help me improve
June 4th, 2005, 07:45 AM
I truthfully liked both of them.
June 9th, 2005, 05:02 AM
Both of them were good, though the second one was better. n.n
June 9th, 2005, 01:39 PM
when I'm done with work experiance I'll update...with a mini series about work ex
June 12th, 2005, 07:42 AM
They are put together very well, but not funny.
June 13th, 2005, 03:28 AM
heh thanks...I tried harder on these...and yeah the humour is a bit pre teen