Rate and Fix. Yugioh Deck

[Zaikiro]

Rate and Fix my Yugioh deck. What are some changes needed or what is not needed.
Deck.
Tributes: 5
Dark Ruler Ha Des
Mobius the Frost Monarch
Buster Blader
Barrel Dragon
Machine King
Monsters: 19

Peten the Dark Clown[X3]
Penguin Soldier
Opticlops
Amazoness Paladin[X2]
Amazoness Tiger
Sagan
Insect Night
Y Dragon Head
Mataza the Zapper
Cliff the Trap Remover
Archfiend Soldier
Amazoness Fighter
Neo Bug[X2]
Mask of Darkness
Magician of Faith

Traps:11
Magic Drain
Dramatic Rescue
Torrential Tribute
Nightmare Wheel
Waboku
Rope of Life
Solemm Wishes
Sakrestu Armor
Bottomless Trap Hole
Raigeki Break
Royal Command

Magic:15
Giant Trunade
Snatch Steal
Heavy Storm
United we Stand
Axe of DespairX2
Amazoness Spellcaster
Swords of Revealing Light
Pot of Greed
Scapegoat
Premature Burial
Mystical Space Typhoon
Lighting Vortex
Tribute to the Doomed
Book of Moon

Side Deck 15:
Dust Tornado
Trap of Board Eraser
Graceful Charity
Different Dimension Capsule
Dark Hole
Reload
Riryoku
Gearfried the Iron Knight
Zolga
Twin-Headed Behemoth
Blindly Loyal Goblin
Cyber Jar
Homunculus the Alchemic Being
Necrovalley
Gravekeeper’s Chief
Gravekeeper’s Spy

Rate avd Review.XD

[PrimeCupEevee]

*sweatdrop* Ehh, this deck could use a lot of work, I'm afraid. (As previously stated, I'm no professional.)

First, you must know that Peten's effect can only activate whenever it is the last thing in a chain of events to occur. For example, if you Tribute it to summon a monster, the last thing that happens is the Summoning of the monster. Its effect cannot activate in that situation.

This deck is too large in size (50 cards), and there is no underlying theme. I don't know what theme you want out of your deck, so I'll ask you this: What cards do you want to use the most? How do you want to defeat your opponent (quickly, slowly deteriorating your opponent, with a certain type of monster, etc.)? If you can answer that, then I may be able to build a deck with what you have. Please also include any and all "good" cards you have so I can build a feasible deck.

[Kratos]

I say you take away the Archfiend. That is pretty much it. Your deck is quite good.

[Zaikiro]

*sweatdrop* Ehh, this deck could use a lot of work, I'm afraid. (As previously stated, I'm no professional.)

First, you must know that Peten's effect can only activate whenever it is the last thing in a chain of events to occur. For example, if you Tribute it to summon a monster, the last thing that happens is the Summoning of the monster. Its effect cannot activate in that situation.
I am aware off that.

This deck is too large in size (50 cards), and there is no underlying theme. I don't know what theme you want out of your deck, so I'll ask you this: What cards do you want to use the most? How do you want to defeat your opponent (quickly, slowly deteriorating your opponent, with a certain type of monster, etc.)? If you can answer that, then I may be able to build a deck with what you have. Please also include any and all "good" cards you have so I can build a feasible deck.
It has 50 cards in it.I mainly use otu of the top 5 of each group I use.
Magic: Monster: Traps:
Heavy Storm Mobius the Frost Monarch Magic Drain
United we Stand Sagan Waboku
Pot of Greed Insect Night Solemm Wishes
Scapegoat Penguin Soldier Torrential Tribute
Swords of Revealing Light Mataza the Zapper Raigeki Break

What cards do you need and I want a negate cards deck. Something like that.
I say you take away the Archfiend. That is pretty much it. Your deck is quite good.
I use it as a atack card. It has high atack. It's not a Arecfiend when you have to pay life points.

[Mullet]

Fixes in bold.


Tributes: 3
Mobius the Frost Monarch
Jinzo
Airknight Parshath

Monsters: 19
Night Assiliantx2
Sagan
Slate Warriorx3
Enraged Battle Ox x2
Archfiend Soldierx2
Magician of Faithx3
Exiled Force
Tribe-Infecting Virus
Beserk Gorillax3

Traps:9
Torrential Tribute
Wabokux2
Sakrestu Armor
Bottomless Trap Hole
Magic Cylinder
Mirror Force
Call of the Haunted


Magic:15
Snatch Steal
Heavy Storm
United we Stand
Mage Power
Graceful Charity
Swords of Revealing Light
Pot of Greed
Scapegoat
Premature Burial
Mystical Space Typhoon
Lighting Vortex
Book of Moonx2
Metamorphsis x2

Fusion Deck: 2
Thousand Eyes Restrict

Side Deck 15:
Cyber Jar
Scapegoat x2
Book of Moon
Archfiend Soldier
D.D. Assilantx2
D.D. Warrior Lady
Zaborg the Thunder Monarch
Thesthallos the Firestorm Monarch
Soul Exchangex3
bottomless Trap Hole
Sakaretsu Armor

Rate avd Review.XD

Just remember to not have all the trubites in you deck at once, don't got over four. I tried to make a simple beatdown deck, most of the cards are easy to get, the only trouble you might have are getting the Side Deck cards. Hope this helps, good luck, and happy dueling with your new remodeled deck!

[Zaikiro]

Fixes in bold.



Just remember to not have all the trubites in you deck at once, don't got over four. I tried to make a simple beatdown deck, most of the cards are easy to get, the only trouble you might have are getting the Side Deck cards. Hope this helps, good luck, and happy dueling with your new remodeled deck!
Thanks. It may be hard to get some of the cards like Mirror Force.
I will try.*Buys a 100 Metal Raiders Packs hoping it has Mirror Force*

[Kenny_C.002]

Zaikiro, it's really just better in almost every way to just buy the singles if you can.

[Zaikiro]

Zaikiro, it's really just better in almost every way to just buy the singles if you can.
I see that's better. I tried to upgrade my deck so?

Tributes: 4
Dark Ruler Ha Des
Mobius the Frost Monarch
Barrel Dragon
Ghost Knight of Jackal

Monsters: 19
Penguin Soldier
Opticlops
Amazoness Paladin[X2]
Sagan
Insect Night
Mataza the Zapper
Cliff the Trap Remover
Archfiend Soldier
Amazoness Fighter
Neo Bug[X2]
Amazoness Sowrds Woman
Magician of Faith

Traps:8
Torrential Tribute
Pikeru Circle of Enchantment
Waboku
Call of the Haunted
Divine Wrath
Sakrestu Armor
Bottomless Trap Hole
Hallow Life Barrier

Magic:15
Giant Trunade
Snatch Steal
Heavy Storm
Mage Power
Axe of Despair
A feather of a Phoenix
Pot of Greed
Swords of Revealing Light
Scapegoat
Premature Burial
Mystical Space Typhoon
Lighting Vortex
Tribute to the Doomed
Book of Moon
Double Spell

A total of 46 cards.
Your opinion please.