View Full Version : Porcupine: Pokemon AG
January 23rd, 2004, 2:12 PM
This is my story pleez dont add to it thanx
January 24th, 2004, 3:20 AM
Uh...Where's your story?
Correct me if I'm wrong, mods, but isn't this spamming?
January 24th, 2004, 5:55 AM
O sorry I am currently writing it ill post a chapter in bout an hour
January 24th, 2004, 6:04 AM
Porcupine: Urg! stupid alarm clock. **chucks clock out window**
**Realized it is 1 pm**
Porcupine: I was supposed to go meet Professer Birch... 3 HOURS AGO!?
**Changes clothes and runs down to Prof. Birches Lab, Dashes inside**
Kemo: Hello? May I help you?
Porcupine: Um... Yea i need to talk to Mr. Birch.
Kemo: He's out ... Ill tell him you came by.
**leaves but hears yelling just out of town**
Prof. Birch: Help!
**Porcupine runs to help**
Prof. Birch: In my bag... get a Poke Ball and help...
**Grabs Mudkip, throws ball starts to battle**
To be continued...
January 24th, 2004, 6:34 PM
Sorry, but next time can you make the chapter befor you make the thread please? :\
February 16th, 2004, 4:12 AM
ok many of you know porcupine's account is screwed and i am him so ill add a new chapter... lets go
Porcupine: Mudkip! Water Pulse!
**sends poochyena flying**
Prof. Birch: Thank you Porcupine...
I have decided to let you keep Mudkip.
Porcupine: What!? THANKS!!!!!
Now come to my house for dinner... you must meet my daughter.
February 21st, 2004, 1:59 PM
Hmm...this sounds a bit like the Ru/Sa version begining...but it's still good!;)
February 21st, 2004, 3:03 PM
What the heck is this? How is this the story? Where's the plot? The Character? The Organization? ...sorry...but this is much like spam world to me...
March 5th, 2004, 10:02 AM
how is this spam? it is a script not a novel.
March 5th, 2004, 5:20 PM
Well, as a fanfiction writer myself, I don't find it interesting...it's short, boring, lacking organization and I bet soon, this story will be abbandoned like any of those fanfics that were rushed through the reply box or the quick reply box.
March 5th, 2004, 5:38 PM
my fanfic stinks and im gonna abandon it XD