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oni flygon
June 8th, 2005, 07:27 PM
Just a poem I wrote a while ago... it's me trying to fight depression... well... sorta...

Transition

I hear the song echoing in my mind
While I lay here in a state of depression
The rhythm, the melody and the words
All seem to find the right expression

The song was boring into my mind
Its about the useless things in regret
On things that you wished you didnt do
Its also about someone you want to forget

Time moves on, the song goes
You cant stay down there doing nothing
Because if you couldnt rise from your woes
It doesnt make you part of the living

And then it dawned in me
That the universe is vast
There are still many things to do
Aside from looking at the past

Agitation, fear, and paranoia
All disappeared from me at that moment
And immediately I felt new feelings
Happiness, freedom, and anger were evident

Suddenly I felt free like the wind
It was as if Im free from my own chains
Sadness was gone and I was happy
And inside, I couldnt feel the pains

As the song ends, I felt new
The last strumming of the guitar
Was just so beautiful to hear
Even though I have this unbearable scar

My broken heart was mended
Every piece fitted in place
I stood up and stretched my arms
Even with a wide smile on my face

1/24/05

digi-kun
June 12th, 2005, 09:27 PM
onigiri, your sense of rythim(sp) sucks XD but the rhyming's good tho XD

oni flygon
June 12th, 2005, 09:42 PM
See the date, Digi? It's old. XD

digi-kun
June 12th, 2005, 10:06 PM
ah true true but meh, maybe you improved then XD

oni flygon
June 13th, 2005, 10:51 AM
Everyone improves, Digi... XD
But I have no sense of rythm though. And that means I'm a musically challenged guitar player... =P

Natsuki
June 14th, 2005, 08:07 AM
*pats Niko* Ehh, I don't care about no silly date. XD

Awwwwwws, this poem so describes me at times. XD Music sometimes has a way of clinging to a person's feelings. By that I mean, you may be in a depressed state, and a depressing song comes on. For me, I think "Oh great." XD But sometimes that depressing song is all I need to realize there's more to life than this.

I always have someone to dig me out of those holes, and there's always some way to lift your spirits and go on living life with a smile on your face. To just walk the streets and have not a care in the world. n___n

Okies...if that sounded nothing like what your poem was about - give me a break, I haven't done this in a while. XD *glomps Niko* Shweet poem, though. ^.~

~Kelsey

oni flygon
June 14th, 2005, 08:40 AM
Thanks Kelsey! This is just one of my earlier...and just early poems... o.o