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PokemonPichu
June 13th, 2005, 02:18 PM
Story: (for spoilers only.)
In a ghost house, Mario and Luigi are nervous about going in the boss room and fighting the Big Boo. Pikachu tags along, watching the Mario brothers argue about who goes in first. Pikachu decides to go in first and fight the Big Boo. The Mario brothers get worried about Pikachu and decides to go in and save Pikachu. But then they saw Pikachu defeating the Big Boo!

Here is the sprite comic:

armadilloHD
June 13th, 2005, 02:22 PM
....Was that a joke? Sorry I forgot to give a sarcastic/fake laugh.

Shinin
June 13th, 2005, 02:46 PM
... no. You didn't even save it as a .png file.

PokemonPichu
June 13th, 2005, 02:51 PM
Why is .png important for sprite comics?

Dragon-Chan
June 13th, 2005, 02:51 PM
That was kind of funny, I give it a 6/10.

Shinin
June 13th, 2005, 02:57 PM
Why is .png important for sprite comics?

If it's saved as a .jpg file, the colors will get messed up, and if it's saved as a .bmp file, it'll take longer to load. .gif is also acceptable.

PokemonPichu
June 13th, 2005, 03:29 PM
...Umm, it IS gif. I guess MSPaint messed the colors up.

Shinin
June 13th, 2005, 04:13 PM
Well if the color gets messed up after you save, just press Ctrl+Z and save it as another file type.


That was kind of funny, I give it a 6/10.

How was it funny?

PokemonPichu
June 13th, 2005, 05:50 PM
Okay, I fixed the graphics by using the bmp version and saving it as png.

Shinin
June 18th, 2005, 06:12 AM
Time for more constructive criticism.

The text bubbles are weird. Make them boxes with outlines that have arrows coming out of them aiming at who said what, like in a drawn comic.

Fox♠
June 18th, 2005, 06:52 AM
shinin: you saved me typing any crit myself
dude that really wasnt anything like a decent comic

Sumomo & Kotoko
June 18th, 2005, 08:53 PM
Its a good start, your learning (I guess). :\
But what was the point of it? Is there going to be a 2ed one?
Rateing: 4.1/10, nice try. ;)

BluePhoenix
June 19th, 2005, 05:52 AM
Well if it's a first try ever in your entire life then this is good (I think so) and well I go with armadilloHD if this wasn't your fist comic ever in your life- I fogot to laugh. Anyways if this is your firstone than- 4/10 and if theis is not the first one then- 0.5/10.

~RAHUL

Draik
June 21st, 2005, 06:54 AM
I see many alignment mistakes, the attack looks really weird. and the door opening thing was just an additional black line.