View Full Version : my new comic

June 21st, 2005, 9:43 AM
not sure about a name but if you want to join you must have a pokemon style sprite (over and in-battle unless it is a pokemon)
1 (http://img163.echo.cx/img163/2687/cartoon1iu.png) (I'll use ingame text boxes next time.)
credit to Coronis for overworld pokemon and some trainers.
credit to smartypanda for the battle backgrounds
credit to Badassbill for the pokeball
credit to Mewtwoman for the hero

June 21st, 2005, 9:45 AM
Not funny I like funny more funny but it was good.

June 21st, 2005, 9:47 AM
humor is non exsistant

June 21st, 2005, 9:50 AM
is that all that matters now funny? I am just wanderin. because i stink at bein funny :( .

June 21st, 2005, 9:51 AM
Humor has vanished in this comic. Where'd it go?

June 21st, 2005, 9:55 AM
if anybody wants to help with funnyness for this comic plz pm me (I stink at funny)

June 21st, 2005, 10:18 AM
Not all comics need humor all the time, like in a plot-progressing strip there wouldn't necessarily be a lot of humor.

But anyways, the text and speech bubbles are weird.

Black Gligar
June 25th, 2005, 7:50 PM
.......... Oops! Sorry I forgot to laugh. There's no joke. The essence of a comic is the joke. A comic without a joke is like burger with no burg. You need a joke my friend ;).

June 29th, 2005, 8:10 AM
I liked it. Yeah you do need a tiny bit of humor. I could help you out there... maybe.

June 30th, 2005, 9:25 PM
Not funny I like funny more funny but it was good.
yeah it needs more funny stuff :\ ,but the pictures are great! :P

June 30th, 2005, 9:31 PM
lmao,this was the funniest comic ever! Yeah,it's not funny whatsoever which,from the other posts is obviously established. But on the other hand,it's nicely laid out and not messy. Add some humor and you've got yourself a good comic.

Original T
July 11th, 2005, 1:34 AM
I agree with alex. By the way nice banner.