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RocketMeowth
June 22nd, 2005, 06:42 PM
This comic strip stars two cheetah pokemon I made.
red one- Cheetahlno ---> voice in blue
Grey one- Choary ------> voice in red
http://img114.echo.cx/img114/7863/cheetahsmarts5tp.png (Episode 1)

Sumomo & Kotoko
June 22nd, 2005, 08:11 PM
Lol, thats funny! Are you going to make more? :\ ;) :P

RocketMeowth
June 22nd, 2005, 08:29 PM
Yes I will. This will be a series. I am glad that you like the first issue.

<EDIT>

Here is the next issue of Cheetah Smarts.
http://img132.echo.cx/img132/8717/cheetahsmarts21ot.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

Shinin
June 23rd, 2005, 03:28 AM
You don't have a background.

Pikabloo
June 23rd, 2005, 05:37 AM
It's funny, the only problem is that it doesn't have a background =\

RocketMeowth
June 23rd, 2005, 08:34 AM
I know. I was to lazy to put one.
lol

Ill put a background in the others. Okay?
Next issue will be up in a couple of hours.(I need to make it)(lol)

Fox♠
June 23rd, 2005, 09:44 AM
background isnt important
I like it
the humour is medicore which seems rare nordays
well done

Sumomo & Kotoko
June 23rd, 2005, 09:47 AM
Yes I will. This will be a series. I am glad that you like the first issue.

<EDIT>

Here is the next issue of Cheetah Smarts.
http://img132.echo.cx/img132/8717/cheetahsmarts21ot.png (http://www.imageshack.us)
Lol, funny. Like every one else said, all it needs is a back ground and your set. ;) :D

RocketMeowth
June 23rd, 2005, 11:17 AM
Okay I made a background!
http://img136.echo.cx/img136/7796/cheetahsmarts39aa.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

Yes crapy backgrounds are my specialty! lol

<EDIT.
THIS IS MY 100TH POST!! YAY!!!

Draik
June 23rd, 2005, 11:42 AM
The backround looks blank. Maybe add some trees? Flowers?

RocketMeowth
June 23rd, 2005, 12:03 PM
okay. Aside from that how did you like it?

Draik
June 23rd, 2005, 12:10 PM
It's pretty good from my PoV.

RocketMeowth
June 23rd, 2005, 12:17 PM
Thanks. I am working on the next issue as we speak.

Shinin
June 23rd, 2005, 03:02 PM
I don't think any of them are funny, but I usually only laugh at idiocy, so they're probably not bad to other people. And the background isn't amazing. Also, try to use proper spelling & grammar.

armadilloHD
June 23rd, 2005, 04:25 PM
background isnt important

Yes it IS how many times do I need to pound it into your BITE-SIZED BRAINS that a sprite comic NEEDS a decent background. Without it, create a STORY, it's boring when you just see to objects with lines pointing to them and words. Atleast when you have the patience to actually write a story you don't need backgrounds (Just description) my gawd. Sprite comics are supposed to be good looking, do you not read "screw these comics,"? *Rant, Rant*