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Yameneko549
June 25th, 2005, 08:42 PM
TeraDyne and Couko: Soup Time! (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v616/Yameneko549/powerofsoup.png)

Couko: I honestly don't know him!

*Smack*

Anyway, my second attempt at a comic of randomness, and my first attempt at coloring with Photoshop. Give me time, I'll get the hang of it.

My first comic can be found here:TeraDyne and Couko: TeraDyne's Rage (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v616/Yameneko549/tdsrage.png)

Yameneko549
June 26th, 2005, 03:26 PM
Anyone? Just click the title. It's a link!

Kura
June 27th, 2005, 10:10 AM
:3 *giggles* funny funny comic @@..
you should warn people that it reads left to right though
._. and dont double post please..
now.. onto the artwork :3....

you did a really great job for an idea, but i suggest you add a bit more shading to the comic ._.
also, try not to put so many vibrant colours or complimentary colours.. ._. because then it looks all too bright
like, the blue in the background is very vibrant but the purple is nicer
._. also, try not to make your lines so scratchy..
and reduce the image size to make it less rigid..
other than that, you did an awesome job :3
very very cute comic :3

i enjoyed it a lot!!
great work!!
keep it up :3
~kura

Cherrim
June 27th, 2005, 10:17 AM
o_o Please don't double post unless you're adding more art. It's unnecessary and it isn't allowed. (People probably aren't posting because the server has been down so much as of recent.)

Yameneko549
June 27th, 2005, 12:11 PM
Lightning: Sorry. I guess I thought I was at GFAQs or something. Shows that having little sleep thanks to schoolwork and work isn't good for your health. Again, sorry. X_X;

Kura: Warn that it reads form left to right.... oh, yeah... most people read mangas here, huh? I guess it should have been said that it's in a US style.

As for the blue... maybe the Sisko Island base could use a new paint job. I think I'll consider it for the next comic.

The problem with shading in the comic is that I still suck at shading. I'm working on it. XD

The lines being so scratchy... are because I didn't edit them, and because I'm a moron for not even seeing what's in front of me.

Reducing image size... hadn't thought of that.

Thanks for the tips.

Cybex Mewtwo
June 27th, 2005, 06:03 PM
So random...but so very neat...I chuckled...Reminds me of those cambell soup commercials...If you feel like it, try placing me in one...but these are your comics. Do whatever the fudge you want. I hope to see another of your comics. :D