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Cybex Mewtwo
June 27th, 2005, 07:12 PM
I'm not much of a poet...but I had to do SOMETHING and drawing was a dud...so here we go. Hope this is good for you guys.

Me and the World
The world opens its' arms to me
Cradles me in its' tender embrace
I shove the world to the side
It is something I'd rather never face

What has the world done for me?
A question those must ponder
As I think deeply through this question
my mind and my body wander

Deep thought guides me
Intuition shows the way
I explore my surroundings
Through light and night every day

I soon see around me that
the world has a second side
Poverty reigns supreme
Even though it tries to hide

As I travel to and fro
I stumble upon a discovery
Destruction and war rears its' ugly head
I turn around and flee

I can't handle these three of many defects
that the world must endure
It soon sheds some light
And on this fact I'm sure

Although the world has its' darker sides
It'll still give you a chance
But I'm still hesitent to believe that so
I ready into a stance

The world has me backed
deep with the corner to my back
I refuse to give them a shot to help me
And then I leap to attack

The world never helped me out
but as the battle rages on
the world shows its' true might
and soon I am gone

I caused my downfall by not believeing
This is a proven fact
Give the world, and everyone, a chance
with you it'll make a pact

That if you are willing to help the world
rather than reject
The world will turn to you
and show you some respect

This life lesson
Far and few between
Not many people intake
not many can be seen

but the few that exist
are the worlds' best friend
But what has the world done for me
I will ask you once again.

Caroline
June 27th, 2005, 09:49 PM
Well. I like it. I liked the way you have put an issue into it and have tried to build it up from there. Very good work. =)

Keep up with the great work.

Sumomo & Kotoko
June 27th, 2005, 10:09 PM
I like it, can't really tell why though, but I do. It was great. ;)

Cybex Mewtwo
June 28th, 2005, 05:34 AM
Thank you both for your heart-felt words. Maybe I can do more poems...

White_Winter_Wolf
June 29th, 2005, 05:31 PM
You should do more poems Cy, you have great potenial. And potenial is nothing wihout performance so please perform your heart out.

Cybex Mewtwo
June 30th, 2005, 12:24 PM
Thank you so much 3W. You may expect more in the future.