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Gohan
July 2nd, 2005, 06:08 PM
Okay gonna try another one. Have you noticed why all the people I write about in my poems are boys? Because I'm a girl.

Standing, Staring after him...

The boy you're always spying on,
The one you follow all day long,

He never knows you're there,
He never turns around and never gives a care,
At that noise of scuffling behind,

When you play you notice his face,
But then you snap out of it to keep pace,

The one you're only 'friends' with,
Yet he never notices you across the table,

The boy you stare at in Science, History, and Math,
Then you wonder what you will encounter on your path,
Down the road,

You wonder who he likes,
The one who his feelings lie with,
It's a perilous hike,

Up the mountain of faith,
Testing your dedication,

Finally you tell him,
The boy you have always loved,

When you tell him you're prepared,
Until he turns you down and says something,
You know you're snared,

Confessing you're love,
Humiliation, defeat,

You still adore that boy,
Even though...
You love him no more.


Okay there you have it. This poem is dedicated to my friend Stephen. Zach or Spencer if you see this and tell anyone I'm am so gonna tear your heads off. Just giving out a warning to two of my other friends.

Cybex Mewtwo
July 2nd, 2005, 06:42 PM
This makes me feel the same way. I had a 'crush' on someone, and when I finally said something, she turned me down. But I still liked her even though she was a (horrible woman). I love this. I'd give it a 9/10 in terms of rating.

Kyosuke
July 2nd, 2005, 07:09 PM
Nice poem I feel the exact same way, but with a really good friend of mine.... I think she likes me I'm not sure... but I like her

Anyways, great job on it ^^

Gohan
July 2nd, 2005, 07:41 PM
Really? Thanks guys! Yeah this is about one of my three best, best friends. Turns out when I finally told him a year later he said he liked me too. Hah! I'm so stupid! And still...

Cybex Mewtwo
July 3rd, 2005, 06:30 AM
Love is such a crazy emotion...making you try to do things tat you'd never do before...It's like an adreniline rush but with purpose...and I've only felt that once...

Gohan
July 3rd, 2005, 06:32 PM
Hey I'm only eleven and I've done that sort of stuff all the time! I spy on him, eve though we're best friends. But if Matthew or Zach ( My two other best friends ) knew I would be soo so dead. Even worse if they read this. Eeep...

Caroline
July 3rd, 2005, 09:33 PM
I loved it. It's true too... many people go through rejection... its hard for them. They want to love this certain person but the person doesn't love them back.
It's just so sad -gets out her box of tissues and cries- ;___;

Gohan
July 4th, 2005, 08:19 AM
Sad? I didn't mean it to be sad. Heh, whoops. No I didn't go through rejection, we just laughed really hard.

Cybex Mewtwo
July 4th, 2005, 04:33 PM
On the topic of rejection, I can't even handle someone else losing someone's love. I get devistated watching OTHERS not getting the love they want. I'm so overly sensitive it's ridiculous...

Gohan
July 6th, 2005, 04:33 PM
Okay. I've decided to make this a thread for all of my poems, since I don't wanna start a new thread.

Get Out of my Head

You're running through my mind,
It comes from behind,
And hides in my biggest thoughts,
Wait a sec!?
Are you the one I think is hot?!

Get out of my head!
Stop killing my thoughts,
Stop appearing in my dreams!
I'll wake up in bed,
And you're still in my head!

Going through my thoughts,
Going through my mind,
All of these things,
Sneak up from behind!

I can't think,
You've taken over my mind!
You should try,
To stop being here in my head,
All the time!

Get out of my head!
Stop killing my thoughts,
Stop appearing in my dreams!
I'll wake up in bed,
And you're still in my head!

You hide in my biggest thoughts,
My biggest dreams,
Wait a sec!?
Are you the one I think is hot?!

Get out of my head!
Stop running through my mind!
Get out of my head!


Okay this one is in song form again. Now if only I had a band to play it...

Samuri Scearious
July 6th, 2005, 04:57 PM
Holy mother of... that's good! That's very good.
Oh, by the way, I'm a pianist... I can play it, you just gotta arrange something for it...
But you're an excellent poet. Nice work.

Gohan
July 6th, 2005, 05:01 PM
Ya know, I always thought I was the most horrible writer ever. I told some friends I saw at the pool yesterday that I was writing poetry and they're like 'What the hell? You writing poetry? Oh my god, we have to tell everyone!'

Gohan
July 6th, 2005, 05:39 PM
Double Post or not I gotta post this new one that just came into my head. It's like a sequel or whatever to 'Get Out of my Head'.

Ignoring You

I've realized I'm wrong,
But now you're gone,
Stay in my head,
I'm so desperate,

You aren't in my mind,
Wait!
You left without a trace!
I never even saw your face!

I want you back with me,
All I want is to see you again!
You need to be here,
Next to me, in my mind!

I'm running in my mind,
Trying to find,
The only one who I used to think about!

Wait, wait, wait for me!
I need you running through my mind,
Running alongside!

I'l go to bed,
I'll go to sleep,
I'll dream, dream, and dream,
Only if you enter my head!

Come back!
I need to see your face,
In my heart there's an empty space!
It's for you!

I'll run away from my life,
Only if you come back!
If I can't find you,
I might take out that sharp, sharp knife!

Come back!
I'm waiting for you!
I never saw your face,
And I desperately need to!
In my heart there's that emtpy space!

I'll go to bed,
Go to sleep,
I'll dream, dream, dream!
All I want is you in my head!

I"ve realized I'm wrong,
But you're gone!
Come back to me!
You're the one I can't see!



Ahahahahaa! I'm in poetry most of the time now! *laughs evilly*

Samuri Scearious
July 6th, 2005, 05:43 PM
Ya know, I always thought I was the most horrible writer ever. I told some friends I saw at the pool yesterday that I was writing poetry and they're like 'What the hell? You writing poetry? Oh my god, we have to tell everyone!'

Yeah... I really hate people who feel that any form of art is "not right". They were idiots.

Oh, you poems are so incredible! I'm sure none of my pieces are better than yours. Though, mine are of corruption, your's are of love.

Gohan
July 6th, 2005, 06:03 PM
They didn't think it was unright, it's just they know me. Considering my attitude and stuff and what I like, it's really wierd thinking about me writing poetry without having to be forced. I wrote that new one in song form again. It's fun singing it in my mind!

Samuri Scearious
July 6th, 2005, 06:12 PM
Hah, alright. Well... nice poems, though. A lot more cheerful than mine.

Gohan
July 6th, 2005, 07:01 PM
I just printed everything out because Zach is making me give all of the poems to him.

Samuri Scearious
July 7th, 2005, 06:07 AM
Alright.
Well, I hope to see future works...

Gohan
July 7th, 2005, 08:33 PM
Yes! Over 100 people hve looked at this! *ish happy*


Time to Move On


You're not coming back,
I hate to admit,
But I know you're gone,
So long...

Time to move on!
I'll forget!
It might be hard,
But I have to!

It's all for you!
I must forget,
I know I can!

I have to get out!
Out of this nightmare!
I have to go!
Or I'll pull out all of my hair!

This is terrible,
I can't get out!
I can't get you out of my head!

I have to,
Stop thinking of you!
Time to move on...

You're not coming back,
I hate to admit,
But I have to go!
I'll never see you again...

I'm not perfectly fine!
But I'll get through!
Only if,
I believe in you!

I'll forget you eventually!
I know you'll try and kill me!
Down in the deep Hell of my dreams!

I have to forget!
I must do what you want!
I know this will help!

Time to move onnn!

Kay I have to get off, my mom's going crazy. She just bought a 28,000 dollar Murano. (car)

Samuri Scearious
July 8th, 2005, 10:37 AM
Your poems sound unbelievebly happy. Well, I can see you're incredibly good at this, and keep it up.

yuuka
July 16th, 2005, 12:23 PM
theirs a guy who loves me but I love some one else but he doesnt know,I love them both.I cant choose who I want.

fallen_angel
July 17th, 2005, 07:29 AM
Wow those poems and songs are so good. I'm trying to write a poem just can't think of any though.