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Other Lip
July 3rd, 2005, 08:43 AM
Another Day.

Torture from above

Fear and hate below

It seems youve had enough

But nothings just begun.


Tainted souls and lies around,

Pollution of the mind

They never leave these grounds

Theyre always there to remind.


Run away from sorrow,

The only thing to do.

Wake up to the sun tomorrow

It still means nothing to you.


Keep up that running pace

Dont look back

You can never see fate in the face

If you want to stay on track.

Natsuki
July 6th, 2005, 09:32 PM
Nice poem OL. ^_~ It shows what reaching for your destiny will take. You should always push forward and never look back. Fate cannot be necessarily foretold, but it can be changed for better or worse. Your poem was fun to read and quite enjoyable, nice job. ^o^

~Kelsey